kodak moment (exo oneshot)

Jan 18, 2013 00:19

title: kodak moment
author: himawarixxsandz
rating: pg-13
pairing(s): xiuhan
summary: inspired by. xiuhan fantaken BTS of sorts.
a/n: WHAT AM I DOING WITH MYSELF WHAT AM I DOING WHAT AM I DOING. this is awful i know and fjsdklgiehi i don't know why i thought of xiuhan when i listen to this song i really don't know this is a horrible way to come ( Read more... )

xiumin, exo, baekhyun, chen, xiuhan, chanyeol, sehun, luhan

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carnival_pinup January 18 2013, 19:44:53 UTC
It feels so good to be reading fics after so long and I'm glad that it's yours ;-;

I'm not sure how you can doubt your own writing (but it's ok cause I totally get where you're coming from being a fellow writer… AND I'm here to tell you that you don't have to worry).

I love how you've basically picked out all the key moments in Xiuhan history and consolidated them into short drabbles in this one fic. I feel like I'm reliving the best of Xiuhan moments and I love it. Please be inspired more \o/

I really love how this whole fic is camera themed because Luhan CLEARLY loves being caught on camera LSDFK ESPECIALLY WITH XIUMIN. Guy must be a secret exhibitionist no wait he flashed his abs a while back ok nvm he IS an exhibitionist ToT HIS CUTE FACE DECEIVES ME (WHY ARE YOU MY 2ND EXO-M BIAS /KILLS SELF) Ahem. But yeah~ Totally LOLing at the fact that Luhan doesn't know how to zoom and Xiumin educates him during (of all times) sex OTL <3

As usual you have so many epic lines I don't even know where to start. Xiuhan is so damned flirtatious but not in a super hot I'm-gonna-fuck-you-any-moment-Banghim way but they are sexy-cute. Can anyone be sexy cute idk but they are cute and sexy and I don't really know what I'm saying but damn gonna imagine all those lines now every time I see a Xiuhan gif /sobs. THANK YOU.

“You bent me in half and my thighs look like they’re stained with grape juice,” Xiumin says
SERIOUSLY. SDFMSDLKFM. /SOBBING.

(they aren’t always in front of the camera so Xiumin doesn’t have to hear I like playing soccer with Xiumin said politely and blandly out in a studio-he gets to hear Minseok-ah, look at Wufan’s face he’s terrified he’s hilarious laughed into his ear)
THIS OK. THIS. What I love about your fics is that they aren't one-dimensional T_Tb

“He’s going to have extra loud sex with Chanyeol tonight,” Xiumin tells Luhan, “just to spite you.”
Picking this out cause it's Baekyeol 8'DDDD /celebrates. Since no one's gonna get sleep they should all just have their respective OTP parties in their rooms \o/

and of course the best line in the whole fic.

"希望你知道我所为你的爱"
I'm sending this line to you too :')

Thank you so much for such a beautiful Xiuhan fic. And thank you for dragging me into EXO and into this OTP T_T <3

Btw your almost-smut-scenes are getting better ;D hot and steamy without actually being full on smut. ;D

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