Thirteen: The Troublemakers II (Ocean's Eleven AU)

[himawarixxsandz]

Title: The Troublemakers II (Background story of Thirteen Series)
Author: himawarixxsandz
Rating: PG-13
Pairing(s): ZiKyung
Summary: They've always been told
A/N: promised you guys another update during my break so here you aRE i hope everyone who's from the US of A had a happy super fat coma-inducing thanksgivingggg -3-

Comments

[margaretbrown]

OMG so many updates. Christmas really is coming huh ? xD
I'M IN LOVE WITH PARK KYUNG ♥ I absolutely didn't expect him to whore himself out for work. His personnality surprised me there. But in a positive way - like, he acquired a new dimension. He's actually really bold and straightforward in his job.
Anyway I like how you didn't immediatly made them best friends again - they're conmen, if you can give your trust so easily to someone under the pretext that you were friends 10 years ago you can't be a conman. And the white flag here is brought up partially because of Yukwon and the job - without it they may not have put down the pride and wariness. This chapter really is about conmen lifestyle, their differences in habits, methods, pride ... Because The Crew is about their big-ass con at Dongsun casino, which is so risky and difficult, it'd be more about the adventure and how the relationships between all these people packed together evolve (including Dongsun). It's cool that here we get to see more of a conman's spirit in his independant, daily activities. =3

There's just that part where you got me confused. Jiho thought it'd last a day ? But in the previous chapter it was said he'd been at the company doing recon for a week right ?