May 17, 2007 22:19
This is what happens when I read Twincest Fics before trying to work on my English Poetry Summative. >.< Argh.
I can't use this in English, obviously... I'm not too sure what my teacher would think of it anyway. xD
Here you go. x.o;; It doesn't have a name.
It started with one simple kiss
That tasted sweet with taboo’d bliss
And though they’d always thought of this
They’d only just gave in
Perhaps it was their vanity
That made it "us" for them to see
Though on their own the "you and me"
Was such a lovely sin
The dear reflection, held so close
Was not quite understood by those
Who could not choose the fate they chose
Though they feared they’d regret it
And all those hands in disguise
Had come alive for scolding eyes
Through craved hellos and forced goodbyes
They wouldn’t soon forget it
They loved so deep it hurt to part
For, after all, they shared one heart
And hands once held were torn apart
Reflections turned to dust
Love so divine and so taboo
So predictable and true
The "us" outweighed by "me and you"
Our perfect love and lust.
Ergh. I don't know what to think of it. Whatever.
Constructive crit is welcome. x3
poetry