Mine Chapter 6

[hikarijournal]

Title: Mine
Author: hikarijournal 
Rating: PG -13
Pairings: Takaki/Chinen, Yamada/Chinen, Yuto/Chinen, hinted: Ryutaro will appear too.
Genre: Romance, Angst, Love, Mystery, Suspense
Warning: Yuri is a girl here. Ryutaro will appear on the later part of the chapters.

Summary: Yuri is a girl full of wit and vigor. Even though her family is so poor and her schooling

Comments

[hime_cwaaaan]

omg the dream!! XDD *squeal*

D: so the 'story' will start here, this is getting more exciting <3

[hikarijournal]

Yeah the dream... hehehe XD...

The story had began already... the revelation was the focus here...

Excited also!!!... XDDDDD

[animejp]

OMG are they playing with yuri felling O.O nice one can't waite for the next chapter

[hikarijournal]

Unfortunately... that's the focus of the story... they are playing with her... and the reason will be revealed on the later chapters...

Thanks for always following up even though i update this late...

XDDDDDDD

[animejp]

Oh,but I think they fall in love love with her without knowing haha are yuto, yuya, yama-chan and ryu some how is a family ? Haha guess I have to wait for the next chapter to find out more
Late update I ok as long as u got update I'm fine with that haha love ur story

[hikarijournal]

Yes... as you can read---> Ryutaro is calling yamada as ni-chan and he also calls yuya as yu-nichan...

About the late update... thanks for understanding

[mly_yamada]

i want to be the first commentator...
but i failed again... TT^TT
*going to read first*

i claim this spot as mine...
*hopefully there is someone who will comment after me so I'll not be the last...

[mly_yamada]

the dream is very very funny...

I really laughing loud when i read :
‘NO PIG ALLOWED INSIDE THE MANSION OR ELSE HE’LL BE SAVAGE’

Yamada is a pig... LOL
He just prove it when he angry to Yuya...

Ryutaro is here...
I never thought that Ryutaro would be the antagonist character...O.o

want to know why the three of them involved with 'the game'
n what they aim from it... *wondering*
are they want to have a revenge about something that happened to their family because of Yuri's parents ???

[hikarijournal]

Yeah... i had thought of it also... i add the dream to make a little fun in this chapter...

I was thinking at first if i should place PET instead of PIG... but PET is so vague so i decided on PIG!

Yup!... Ryutaro is here already
He's not the antagonist here <---- well you'll find it out on the rest of the chapters...

The game will be revealed sooner... i don't want to slip my tongue to anyone yet...
Aim <--- secret!
Revenge? <---- I'll tell you if you're right!

Thanks for reading!

[hikarijournal]

It doesn't matter... if you're the last commentor or the first or rather the second or whatsoever...

the important part is that you enjoy the story... right?!...

XD

[hikarijournal]

It's ok!... I'm glad you like it!...

[helnaa]

OMG! i thought the dream was real :O lol. and yappari~ryu was the one that pushed yuri right? alright, moving on to next chapter~

[hikarijournal]

It wasn't! But I'm hoping it will be real in the future... kidding!

Yup it was Ryu who pushed her...

Ok go on...