Gorgeous Carat fic: Limits

Jul 23, 2007 12:49

Taking a brief break from Destiny to deal with some stray plot bunnies
Destiny should be back next Monday

Title: Limits
Characters: Florian, Ray
Rating: T
Summary: Small acts of rebellion can have unexpected results
Thank you: to my wonderful beta reader, Gayle
::Disclaimer: Ray and Florian belong to You Higuri
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gorgeous carat, fic

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ayumie July 23 2007, 18:10:14 UTC
That's cute. I can just see the two of them asleep side by side. Aaaw...

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sayora347 July 24 2007, 03:55:42 UTC
Awww! That was so sweet ^___^ Yay for chains!

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crystal_star_ss July 26 2007, 22:58:07 UTC
*rubs the fluff and cute from her eyes* ^o^ It's so...so...cute. The story itself would normally be moderate, but the syntax just makes it...so cute. *goes to check for cavaties* >_>

My apologies if it wasn't supposed to be ^^;;;

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astraplain_sale July 27 2007, 00:59:52 UTC
*L* Thanks (sorry about the cavities) I find it interesting to see how a story that I perceive one way can be processed so many different ways by readers. From my perspective, this started as a fluffy toss-off that morphed into something a bit more as it touched on the ways that both Ray and Florian have been bound/restricted in their lives and how their relationship is helping Florian loosen those bonds a little through small acts of defiance.

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