POV is the plague of a lot of new writers, and
cornerofmadness has an interesting and helpful take on it on her blog, which is over here :
http://cornerofmadness.livejournal.com/1371010.html?view=19424898#t19424898 It's something that took me a long time to get a handle on, and I still have days where I'm not sure whose head I'm in. Not mine, for sure!
I'm having one of those days where I'm not getting anywhere very fast, for no good reason *sigh*