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I changed my LJ layout and was wondering if anyone else liked it?
Today's fic is so bad, I'm considering logging in to tell this person off.
Title: maby to be or not to be
Culprit Author's Name: killer on the street or you think so
Rating:
Full Name: kana (yes, once again, no captalization) who turns into "reeney" through a Youko reincarnation
Species: Fox/Bat/Cat Demon and a witch *headdesk*
Hair Color:
Fox - "hair is up to your shoulder and your hair color white with blue streaks"
Bat - "hair is red and is always down you have blue on the tips of your hair"
Cat - Not mentioned
Witch - "Long black hair"
Eye Color: Eyes are not mentioned for any of them
Markings: Bat wings, fox ears, cat tail, the works. I may even log-in just to send her a hate review since she doesn't accept anonymous reviews
Possessions: My unbeating, demon heart. Oh wait, that was my broken clock
Origin: Some layer of hell that has yet to be discovered
Connections to Canon: Works with Youko and Kuronue and is a Tantei more than liekly at 11 years-old
Special Abilities: You're gonna love this
Fox - "If you watch sailor moon you have all there powers if you don’t than make it up"
Bat - "If you watch inuyasha you have all the powers in it yes you can control the wind scare plus you’re the protector of the scared jewel shard"
Cat - "If you watch naruto you have all the powers in it yes you can do hand sighs with one hand and you have the shairgun"
Witch - "You can use all the powers in one from" Then what's the point of having all those other crap forms?
Can also sing and figure skate...what the hell?
Pros: Some sort of plot weaves in and out of this shit
Cons: Grammar and spelling are dead. Their funerals were given when this fic started. It sucks and the entire rip-off of three other great fandoms just killed me. It's done in second person (you do this) and has been reported (though it won't do any good). Someone actually likes it and I just think, "she's a typical Sue! How can you like this?" I'm trying to figure out all of the Sue logic thrown in here and have yet to succeed. It should die. Now.
Sample: We're skipping the entire first page because it's bascially what I've outlined above
History
You are in youkos group, Poor punctuation you outrank kuronue and youko Of course, typical Sue but you don’t want to lead a clan so you just said no when they ask it *palmface*.you go on missions with youko and kuronue.your father was the best of friends with youko and kuronue so when he died you became the new one.your specialties are torture kill. There's a difference between torturing and killing, choose one or the other you can sing will and figure skate excellent Oh eff it,youko even let you have and ice rank in your room.you perform in a beer shop A bar? A pub? but you pr-perform ? at the hideout.the only way to wake you up is to say that you are in a middle of a massacre than you blot right up. ...do I want to know?
On with the story
You just fished singing black roses red What is that? at the bar everyone was clapping one guy was going up to you but youko sent a glare at him to tell you better not piss her off or make her cry or will kill you so he back away. @-@ ”kana you did great”said kuronue “I try to make you people more popular”you said “well keep on doing it you make our men actually fear for Did that make sense? ”said youko “thanks guy”you said.”are you coming to the heist?” said kuroune “no I have to go to bed early because in the human world there having me teaching the minoe ice skaters and by minor I mean they suck o ice littler You know what...This thing MSTs itself in some places “you said “okay but tomorrow you coming to the battle”damened youko “okay night guys”you say “night”youko and kuronue said.
(nest morning after the skating thing) Wow, so descriptive
kuronue p.o.v
I watched kana do her morning ice skate routings it was the only time to catch her doing something and not get killed for it. “hey kana youko said he wants you in his chamber in you fox from or he’ll kill you ass I'm gonna ass you, kana!!”I shouted but she was already gone.
Kana p.o.v
“youko kuronue said you wanted to see me in my fox from”you said
“yes kana”replien youko Youko's a reptile?
“may I ask why”I said.”I just found out that more and more foxs are beging hunted I want you to stay by me or stay some where that I can see you I don’t want yo lose my favorite worker understand”said youko I nodded “you mat leave”youko said. Wait...if foxes are being hunted...what's the point of her being in a fox form? She's got three others
“what did youko wanted”kuronue asked “he said I cant leave his sight at all that means no ice skating and no singing that sucks”you said “well a least you beging protecting”said kuronue “well I guess your right I just don’t want to be anyones pet” I wish you'd get out of my fandom
EVERYONE: Please report this fic for using second person point of view and songs. Details are in my comment.
I changed my LJ layout and was wondering if anyone else liked it?
Today's fic is so bad, I'm considering logging in to tell this person off.
Title: maby to be or not to be
Culprit Author's Name: killer on the street or you think so
Rating:
Full Name: kana (yes, once again, no captalization) who turns into "reeney" through a Youko reincarnation
Species: Fox/Bat/Cat Demon and a witch *headdesk*
Hair Color:
Fox - "hair is up to your shoulder and your hair color white with blue streaks"
Bat - "hair is red and is always down you have blue on the tips of your hair"
Cat - Not mentioned
Witch - "Long black hair"
Eye Color: Eyes are not mentioned for any of them
Markings: Bat wings, fox ears, cat tail, the works. I may even log-in just to send her a hate review since she doesn't accept anonymous reviews
Possessions: My unbeating, demon heart. Oh wait, that was my broken clock
Origin: Some layer of hell that has yet to be discovered
Connections to Canon: Works with Youko and Kuronue and is a Tantei more than liekly at 11 years-old
Special Abilities: You're gonna love this
Fox - "If you watch sailor moon you have all there powers if you don’t than make it up"
Bat - "If you watch inuyasha you have all the powers in it yes you can control the wind scare plus you’re the protector of the scared jewel shard"
Cat - "If you watch naruto you have all the powers in it yes you can do hand sighs with one hand and you have the shairgun"
Witch - "You can use all the powers in one from" Then what's the point of having all those other crap forms?
Can also sing and figure skate...what the hell?
Pros: Some sort of plot weaves in and out of this shit
Cons: Grammar and spelling are dead. Their funerals were given when this fic started. It sucks and the entire rip-off of three other great fandoms just killed me. It's done in second person (you do this) and has been reported (though it won't do any good). Someone actually likes it and I just think, "she's a typical Sue! How can you like this?" I'm trying to figure out all of the Sue logic thrown in here and have yet to succeed. It should die. Now.
Sample: We're skipping the entire first page because it's bascially what I've outlined above
History
You are in youkos group, Poor punctuation you outrank kuronue and youko Of course, typical Sue but you don’t want to lead a clan so you just said no when they ask it *palmface*.you go on missions with youko and kuronue.your father was the best of friends with youko and kuronue so when he died you became the new one.your specialties are torture kill. There's a difference between torturing and killing, choose one or the other you can sing will and figure skate excellent Oh eff it,youko even let you have and ice rank in your room.you perform in a beer shop A bar? A pub? but you pr-perform ? at the hideout.the only way to wake you up is to say that you are in a middle of a massacre than you blot right up. ...do I want to know?
On with the story
You just fished singing black roses red What is that? at the bar everyone was clapping one guy was going up to you but youko sent a glare at him to tell you better not piss her off or make her cry or will kill you so he back away. @-@ ”kana you did great”said kuronue “I try to make you people more popular”you said “well keep on doing it you make our men actually fear for Did that make sense? ”said youko “thanks guy”you said.”are you coming to the heist?” said kuroune “no I have to go to bed early because in the human world there having me teaching the minoe ice skaters and by minor I mean they suck o ice littler You know what...This thing MSTs itself in some places “you said “okay but tomorrow you coming to the battle”damened youko “okay night guys”you say “night”youko and kuronue said.
(nest morning after the skating thing) Wow, so descriptive
kuronue p.o.v
I watched kana do her morning ice skate routings it was the only time to catch her doing something and not get killed for it. “hey kana youko said he wants you in his chamber in you fox from or he’ll kill you ass I'm gonna ass you, kana!!”I shouted but she was already gone.
Kana p.o.v
“youko kuronue said you wanted to see me in my fox from”you said
“yes kana”replien youko Youko's a reptile?
“may I ask why”I said.”I just found out that more and more foxs are beging hunted I want you to stay by me or stay some where that I can see you I don’t want yo lose my favorite worker understand”said youko I nodded “you mat leave”youko said. Wait...if foxes are being hunted...what's the point of her being in a fox form? She's got three others
“what did youko wanted”kuronue asked “he said I cant leave his sight at all that means no ice skating and no singing that sucks”you said “well a least you beging protecting”said kuronue “well I guess your right I just don’t want to be anyones pet” I wish you'd get out of my fandom
EVERYONE: Please report this fic for using second person point of view and songs. Details are in my comment.