FICTION: Ways & Means (Lucy/Peter) PG

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Ways & Means
Fandoms: Gilmore Girls, Heroes
Pairing/Characters: Lucy/Peter
Rating: PG / Word Count: 1,261
Summary: He was her elementary ally, her high school sweetheart, and looking into his eyes at the moment, she knew he was going to be nothing to her by the time she made it to college.

Notes: This fits into canon for both Heroes and Gilmore

Comments

[adinarj]

I like the way it fits in with both shows. Peter would be a good match for Lucy. He'd ground her. But then, everything that happens with both of them...

The twist at the end with her child being Zach was interesting, but it doesn't quite work with the timelines. If Zach and Claire were the same age, and Peter and Lucy were the same age, Peter was only about 10 years older than Claire (Angela said he was 26 when he was in the coma, and Claire told Noah that she was almost sixteen in the same episode- or possibly the next one, but it was the same time.)

That's the only detail that I have a problem with, though. Other than that, good writing and a nice fic!

[corleones]

I came across this entirely by accident- but it's beautiful. And very lovely.