Saiyuki Fic: Hungry Jess 6

[hibem]

Many, many thanks to new_kate for putting up with all my whining about this fic.

And still worksafe! Propriety, yo.

Still need a Jess icon.

Part the: First | Second | Third | Fourth | Fifth

Comments

[cicer]

*dies laughing* This just keeps getting better and better. I love eveything about this, but Sally and William are just awesome. XD

[hibem]

Sally is truly fearless to accompany William outside for that chat. XD

[tiggymalvern]

So now you have all four together and heading west :-)

Her speaking voice had all the dulcet charm of an rusty cross-cut saw.

I just love your choices of metaphor and simile in this fic XD

You just fixed the gun-cleaning gaff I was about to comment on, but you've left a typo in its stead!

The woman snorted, set and bagan working oil onto the barrel's shaft.

[hibem]

West was pretty much inevitable, you know? And thank you!

:facepalm: Yeah, I seem to have a problem with posting too hastily.

Thanks for the typo catch!

[mainekosama]

Awww, demure William, I love you. And they are going west :D! I adore this story.

[hibem]

Insert manifest destiny joke here.

Thank you!