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[dejaspirit]

Author: light_music formerly known as msscribe

Comments

[nightfalltwen]

This was wonderful. I love the point of view. Do you find it difficult at all to write in first person from a male perspective? I do. This was great. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

The last line is just... *sigh* lovely. Kudos!!

*applauds*

[dejaspirit]

I like the guys point of view. I actually find it easier because they tend to be more single minded. From Hermione's POV would have been, like, 5,000 words, and I just don't have the time. LOL.

[nightfalltwen]

You're right, Hermione would be wordy. *laughs* You did a really good job with Harry! I extend my appreciation a second time :D

[annearchy]

HAHAHA so true about Hermione's POV. She's so long-winded :)) This was wonderful, Dionne. And you did a great job with the hard-R, which is difficult (um, hard) to do :D

[demosthenes91]

*sighs*

Oh that was good! I even got the little flutter when they finally kissed!!!

*grins*

Well done indeed!

[dejaspirit]

Thank you!

[aome]

like two beautiful worlds colliding to make the one true cleavage

The boob lines were great!

Much fun - sexy just the right amount, light and loving and a good way to end the week. :D

[dejaspirit]

How was your week, btw? Me? I'm stressin' like whoa. LOL. Sophie is in rare form today.

[aome]

Mercifully not too bad for a change. I haven't slept well, so I'm beat, but as far as weeks go overall, I've had worse. I hope Sophie cooperates soon! (Btw, MiniPlu was 'talking on the phone' (her toy phone) to you and Sophie this afternoon. :D

[sobriquet_99]

[snort][SPEW] Teh funny/sweet.

[dejaspirit]

Thanks. This was bordering on fluff, yo. LOL.

[goldy_dollar]

Muhaha. Perfect. Wonderful. Fluffy and sweet without being overly sappy. Ron snoring away the entire time was very Ron and such a nice little touch.

[dejaspirit]

<3 Ronniekins, so couldn't have him just not exist.

Thanks.