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Gift for: doraeazure - Harry Potter and the Preeminent Pumpkin Patch

Nov 21, 2011 18:19

Title: Harry Potter and the Preeminent Pumpkin Patch Ploy
Gift for: doraeazure
Author: aggiebell90
Pairing: Harry/Ginny; mentions of Ron/Hermione, with a cameo from George.
Rating: G/Everyone (maybe a very, very light PG/Teen, for one swear word)
Word Count: ~3100
Summary: Ron's being a prat. Again. It's not a problem, though, because Ginny's got a plan.

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:author: aggiebell90, fest: autumn '11

Comments 24

grandma_kate November 22 2011, 00:13:16 UTC

The Weasley Way always surprises me. I didn't expect the giant pumpkin to be so violent. Then it spat a slurry of pumpkin seeds and guts all over Ron, covering him in the gooey mess. Poor Ron.

aggiebell90 December 20 2011, 01:26:10 UTC

I'm not sure I expected the giant pumpkin to be so violent, either (and I'm certain Harry had no idea it would be anywhere near that violent!). Poor Ron, indeed. I'm sure he'll get back at them at some point, though, so it'll all even out in the end. :)

Thanks for commenting!

doraeazure November 22 2011, 01:38:54 UTC

Hahaha! Oh, this is marvelous! I love the way Harry and Ginny banter, and how Ginny is so very in control of the situation. I also liked how Harry just goes along with the whole thing even though he has no clue what's going on at first, and the fact that the Weasleys don't tell anybody anything.

Favorite moments:

The image of Ginny head and shoulders deep in a gigangic pumpkin.

"Harry, Harry, Harry. And you call yourself a Weasley. Honestly."
"Well, no. I call myself a Potter, actually," he said, smirking.

This made me laugh, especially when he takes it back later.

Then it spat a slurry of pumpkin seeds and guts all over Ron, covering him in the gooey mess.And then Harry saying he thought Ron liked orange ( ... )

aggiebell90 December 20 2011, 01:29:36 UTC

:) I had tons of fun writing this for you. I'm so glad you liked it!

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aggiebell90 December 20 2011, 01:30:12 UTC

Thanks! I like that line, too. :)

pepperam November 22 2011, 03:37:07 UTC

Oh this was great! So funny, so sweet. It made me feel all warm and fuzzy, I love it! Love H&G's banter. Wonderful job mystery author!

aggiebell90 December 20 2011, 01:30:51 UTC

Yay for warm and fuzzy feelings! Thanks for commenting!

shy_of_reality November 22 2011, 04:10:27 UTC

haha that was hilarious! loved it!

aggiebell90 December 20 2011, 01:31:05 UTC

Thanks!