Comments | heygotcha: i'll try anything once

16littleseconds in heygotcha

i'll try anything once

Dec 30, 2011 01:26

i'll try anything once
han geng/heechul, super junior.
1,983 words, pg-13.
summary: inevitably, heechul changes everything - as if there weren't enough changes in your life already.

( Heechul doesn't have any limits, any inhibitions. Or at least that's what you think when you observe him with careful eyes, stilted Korean on your tongue waiting to stumble out of your mouth. )

pairing: han geng/heechul, rating: pg-13, fandom: super junior

Comments 8

laeryn December 30 2011, 02:05:42 UTC

girl girl girl. just wanna warn you that i didn't sleep yesterday night and it's 3AM today so i may make no sense like, AT ALL, but GIRL GIRL GIRL ♥ ♥ ♥

And, you know, I LOVE IT and SCREAMING and MAKING FACES AT TEH COMPUTER AND TRYING NOT TO BE OVER EXCITED CAUSE I DO NOT WANT TO WAKE UP EVERYBODY IN DAH HOUSE BUT OMG *O* ok, so here's the thing: THIS is what I love about Hanchul fanfic, thiiiis, the feeling that they're polar oposites, that somehow Heechul is this really invasive/abrasive/INTENSE person that you either avoid or just can't help but follow (and omg, this Heechul? It would be thrilling to meet this Heechul) and somehow it's like idk who were those that after a war burned everything they found so ppl couldn't go back to plant anymore there, you know? and this is it, what would you have if Heechul left? WHO on Earth can fill the kind of hole Heechul would leave ( ... )

16littleseconds December 30 2011, 15:23:56 UTC

oh my god ;_______;

i am so glad you liked this.

SCREAMING and MAKING FACES AT TEH COMPUTER AND TRYING NOT TO BE OVER EXCITED
this was actually my reaction when i read your comment okay >:|

the feeling that they're polar oposites, that somehow Heechul is this really invasive/abrasive/INTENSE person that you either avoid or just can't help but follow
this is definitely my favorite thing with hanchul too, actually. the fact that you can't really avoid him and that when he leaves, he just leaves a huge empty space behind that nobody can fill properly ;;

and all the small moments than in actuality are really intimate and therefore REALLY IMPORTANT because they come to show how much of their personal ~space~ they actually ended sharing
i definitely tried to show some sort of contrast between all those intimate moments they share despite heechul's... personality and i'm glad you noticed it :D

nd how Hankyung then thinks about that time when his life was predictable and settled but there was no Heechul aaaaaaaand.that paragraph about ( ... )

ink_river10 December 31 2011, 03:07:11 UTC

I really enjoyed this! It's difficult to write in second person, and you did really well. :)
Just those tiny glimpses into their sexual encounters. I hope you write more!

16littleseconds January 1 2012, 17:16:27 UTC

thanks a lot for your comment! the 2nd person narrative sort of happened and i'm glad it worked for you because imo, it's either hit or miss.

i'll definitely try to write more!

ochi_iru135 December 31 2011, 13:55:49 UTC

I totally loved this <3 Having a relationship like this must be so much fun, or interesting at least, hehe

16littleseconds January 1 2012, 17:16:52 UTC

i'm glad you liked this, thank you! :)

tokkei_12 January 1 2012, 03:13:09 UTC

Uwah, that was gorgeously written, and the second person POV was so very well done~ The Hanchul interactions were incredibly sweet (especially the parts in parentheses), though my favorite part, for some reason, would have to be the paragraph beginning with "You think of what life used to be before, back in Beijing-" Must be because of how everything already has an answer :) Anyways, loved this, and Happy New Year! ^.^

16littleseconds January 1 2012, 17:17:36 UTC

thanks a lot for your comment! :D

that paragraph about han geng's life back in china is also my favorite!

happy new year to you too :3