2010 Het Ficathon: "Turning Circles" (Firefly: Kaylee/Simon) for larah33

[innie_darling]

Title: Turning Circles
Author: innie_darling
Fandom: Firefly/Serenity
Pairing: Kaylee/Simon
Written for: larah33
Summary: spinning
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: none - this is established relationship fic
Disclaimer: the characters and situation are not mine

Comments

[larah33]

Oooh! Thank you! What a tender little moment between these two!

Like if she were a kite, flying around, soaring high and buffeted by the winds, he'd be the boy on the ground holding her string, tethering her, making sure she wouldn't be lost. Making sure there was always a connection.

I particularly like this part. I can see how Simon's calm demeanor is very much an anchor for Kaylee's bouncy self. He does have a very grounding, very earthy feel to his character.

And I can totally see him calling her by her given name when they're alone. Nobody else would, because nobody else knows the real her.

"I wanted to miss you a little, and come back and see you again."

My heart skipped a beat there. How sweet is that? And it shows just how deep Kaylee's emotions go, and how - when you're not expecting it - she can say something so profound. So, so cute.

Thanks again for writing this. I loved it! ^_^

[innie_darling]

I'm so sorry - I only now realized I'd never responded to your lovely comment! I'm so pleased that this worked for you!