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Any mention to sounds, especially the flesh-to-flesh kind. Pants, grunts, moans, whimpers, slaps, pops, groans, the more obscene the better. I also like drooling from too much sensation. Any mention to a character's youth is...UNF. And words about the tightness felt after penetration, and words that leave it ambiguous if the character is feeling pain, pleasure, or both.
What words would you hate to see?
Butt and pussy. They make me snort. WRITING IN CAPS WHAT SOMEONE SAYS WHILE COMING. A character repeating the other's name constantly bad Bleach feelings. Some characters keening make me backbutton quickly.
Do you like seeing a lot of description?
Yes, especially of the sensual kind. But I prefer good dialogue (fluffy or snarky, teasing or sensual) over it
Is it better to focus more on the feelings rather than the actions?
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! >.<
I hate it. Unfortunately, it's the most common practise.
What's too cliche?Both characters coming at the same time (also improbable as hell). Sex ( ... )
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And I've definitely jumped kink before - the meme's gotten me into D/s and some forms of watersports, because they were written in a way that pushed my buttons and it was obvious that the characters were enjoying themselves.
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Everything else really depends on the scene and the characters. First and foremost I want something that fits into the story. Assuming a PWP, the more description the better. I don't actually mind digressions on [A's true love for B/what C had for lunch that day/D's Thoughts on Pain] as long as they fit the overall mood.
I like humor and people not taking themselves too seriously. Also, dialogue that isn't "Fuuuuck/hnng/goddamn" or just grunting.
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I can't read smut that's heavy on the emotions, but sensations is good (so it depends what you mean by feelings, I guess :) ). Description yes, as long as it avoids becoming flowery - with too little description sex scenes blend together so much.
My don't-likes are pretty much the usual with a few specific variations: none of the awkward euphemisms like weeping cock, orbs of flesh, etc, or even the relatively non-obnoxious "entrance" for anus. It just jars me. And "sex" when used as a euphemism for the genitalia. I know some people like it, but I can't stand it.
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Unless it's a truly amazing author, I will not read smut that focuses on actions. Most of it sounds like it was c/p from Every Other Smut Fic and honestly bores me. Now, the emotional focus can also come across like that but I find there is better variety. And emotional connections are a big unf for me, so it works. However the best smut fic will always be the one that perfectly balances feelings & actions.
What's too cliche?
Seme/uke stereotypes. I will hit the backspace button so hard if you define the characters' personalities by their sexual positions.
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Feelings is good. Descriptions is good. Sound is something that's rarely used in smut scenes and I think very under-used. How something feels on skin, and realistic taste are others.
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As for dislikes, I hate hate hate "member" as an euphemism for penis. That isn't arousing at all. Also please avoid "cunt". Otherwise most words can work fine when used well.
Cliche? Penetration. Non-penetrative sex is glorious and there should be more of it. Frotting and intercural (thigh sex) are incredibly hot and yet so underrepresented because insert penis into anus (or vagina) is the primary form of sex written. Seme/uke dynamics also are beyond overstaying their welcome. As someone else said, too, coming at the same time is overdone, as is the women only coming once in het and yuri fics.
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