Past-Part Fills Part 7

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Past-Part Fills Part Seven

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As You Wish, Miss Jones - Chapter 1 [1b] anonymous March 11 2012, 02:38:51 UTC
When they came to the last stop, the men dragged him out, threw him on the ground and laughed. After that, everything was a bit of a blur. They took him inside a big building unlike anything he’d seen before, and stripped him of his clothes, hosed him off. Then things got bad. He was passed from one person to the next, from one tiny cage to another, until the Trainers finally got him. They poked and prodded him, took samples of all kinds, before locking him in a small room with a bed in it. His training began in the morning.

Between when he was caught, and when the Trainers sent him to the market to be sold, Arthur learned a good deal of English. His was still broken, but that didn’t matter because he was a slave, and a slave doesn’t need to speak, just to understand the orders given to them, and he did. He could follow orders, he could do anything his owner asked of him, in a sexual manner at least. He could take a beating, could deal with high arousal for a long period of time, knew how to use his mouth, and move his muscles to give the most pleasure to whoever might chose to take him. Arthur’s pride, which he’d had a plethora of before being captured, was pushed to the very back of his mind, along with his free will, and his desire to be back in his forest again.

The iron collar never left his throat until the day of auction. One of the trainers took it off, scrubbed his raw throat until the green was faded and his throat ached, and slid a slim leather collar into it’s place. Beneath the leather that would show, the iron links dug into his throat, would leave circles against his skin. He was so used to pain at this point it didn’t bother him enough to make him react to it. Like the good slave he was trained to be, he kept his gaze down on the floor. Didn’t move, even when the long robe was draped over his shoulders, the first piece of clothing he’d worn in over a year.

The auction was held in London, England. It was one of the biggest auctions around, held only once a year, and people from all over the world came to sell their goods and to buy. Arthur was part of a the main show for sex slaves. He’d been trained by expert trainers and his price was high. Many came and looked at him, some even paying the fee to touch him, running their fingers over his arms and legs, taking hold of his erect penis, kept as it was by a slim black band around the base.

At the main event, he was brought up on the main stage by himself. Kept his head bowed until the man with the microphone and the whip tilted his head up. Arthur couldn’t help blinking and trying to look away from the bright flashing lights. He was glad when he was allowed to look down again.

Arthur was bought by a woman who was mid travel. She had flown in from Paris the day before the auction, and was leaving for America at the end of the week. She was older, big violet-blue eyes, and long pale brown hair pulled back into a french twist. She spoke English in a heavy accent, and had no qualms about touching every inch of Arthur before she signed the papers. She asked for him unbranded, and made a tutting sound when she found the small brand on the bottom of his foot that marked him for who had trained him.
She didn’t want him for herself though. He was a gift, she said, for her daughter, back in the States. The only complaint she had about him was his eyebrows. He didn’t like her, but he was obediant, quiet, and good. She took him with her to the hotel, and in the morning a tailor came, measured every inch of him, brought out bolts of fabric for the woman, Mistress Fleur, to inspect and choose from.

Clothes were made post hast, and Arthur was dressed for the flight at the end of the week. He was, however, terrified of the plane. He’d grown used to cars, and phones, but other things… appliances, lights, even indoor plumbing was something he was a bit sketchy on. So a plane was far beyond his comprehension.

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Re: As You Wish, Miss Jones - Chapter 1 [1c] anonymous March 11 2012, 02:39:30 UTC
It took two others, and a vicious slap from Mistress Fleur to get him onto the plane, and he pressed himself back into the seat given him, clutched the arm rests and spent the trip afraid to blink.

When they reached the United States they went first to Mistress Fleur’s home. The estate was huge, with luxurious gardens, a pool, and a grand marble staircase.

He was bathed, clothed, and when the evening came, he was taken from the estate into the city. Arthur didn’t understand the huge metal buildings that went up into the sky, but he’d learned not to question them. Mistress Fleur took him into a big building, led him into an elevator- another thing that he didn’t fully understand. The metal box moved, and Arthur pressed himself back against the wall until the doors opened, and Mistress Fleur pulled the leash attached to his collar.

She led him down a long hall to a corner apartment, and inside. It was a small place, just a two bedroom flat, and nicely furnished. It was nothing compared to the estate he’d been taken to before, but still better then the small box like rooms the trainers kept him in. There was one person in the room. A short, dark haired man with features Arthur never seen before. He wore a sleek collar around his throat, and bowed low to Mistress Fleur, “Madame Bonnefoy, Miss Amelia is at work…”

Fleur waved him off, “I am aware. I’m leaving her a gift in her room, do not disturb it. Understood.”

A curt nod was given, and Mistress Fleur led Arthur into a bedroom. It was small, with a nice sized bed, cherry wood dresser and night table. The room was clean, bed made. Fleur took Arthur’s clothes, folded them and placed them aside, then left him in the room with strict orders to stay there, his Owner would be arriving soon.

Arthur, nude except for the collar, and the black band Mistress Fleur had placed on him before they’d left the estate, stood in the middle of the room, uncertain of what he was meant to do.
Eventually, he got on the bed, kneeling like he’d been taught, knees spread wide, hands at his sides so as not to cover himself at all. He stayed like this a long time before he heard the doorknob begin to turn. As the door started to creak open, Arthur leaned down, resting his cheek on the soft comforter and tilting his head just enough that he could look through his lashes.
The woman that had stepped into the room was in her early thirties, curly blonde hair, bright blue eyes, her clothes were not as fancy as Mistress Bonnefoy’s had been, pants and a t-shirt with a leather coat.

The look of shock on her face shifted. First into horror, then anger, then utter and complete embarrassment. She turned around, slammed the door behind her, then shouted.

Confused, and worried, Arthur looked up, but didn’t move much. Was he unwanted? Would he be sent back? Resold? Resold slaves did not get good treatment, he’d heard the stories, the fear that washed over him at the idea made him tremble as he placed his cheek back against the bed.

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Re: As You Wish, Miss Jones - Chapter 1 [1c] anonymous March 11 2012, 17:19:57 UTC
Interesting, I like the set-up so far. Look forward for more.

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Re: As You Wish, Miss Jones - Chapter 1 [1c] anonymous March 11 2012, 17:36:11 UTC
Oooh, this looks very promising!

I really like your setup and world-building here. Arthur isn't the way I usually see him/write him, but there are solid, in-story reasons for it here, and I like it. One of the things I love about England as a character is that he's very versatile. I'm also very intrigued by Ameila. We've only gotten a glimpse of her so far, but that glimpse really fits for her.

I'm very eager for more!

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Re: As You Wish, Miss Jones - Chapter 1 [1c] anonymous March 12 2012, 22:59:51 UTC
ASDFGHJKL;

I LOVE THIS.

The direction you're taking with this fill is extremely interesting. I also love UK/Fem!US. Or in this case, Fem!US/UK, I suppose. xD And I adore fills with the 'witch' part of England's fanon/canon, so this whole fic is like Christmas for me.

I've got to admit, I REALLY hate whiny-gaspy-uke!England as it makes very little sense to me, but I'm willing to make an exception here because you seem like a competent enough writer not to make it embarrassing to sit through. I'm intrigued as to how you'll tackle it. Slavery and noncon/dubcon isn't usually my thing either, but again... I'm very interested in how you'll tackle it.

Provided the whole fic is as awesome as this beginning - which is a high standard to meet, granted - you have yourself a loyal reader. <3 <3

...Is it wrong I lol'd at Fem!France buying basically a sex toy for her daughter? Oh France, you are the same in every universe and you should never, ever change.

Femmerica's reaction intrigues me. Is she highly anti-slavery? Is she annoyed because her mother bought her a sex toy and thought it would be a good idea? Is she turned off by the eyebrows?

And Arthur! He's been taken away from his family, abused, broken down and degraded... and yet his first thought is "Am I unwanted" ;u; LET ME HOLD YOU. This whole thing is either going to break my heart or send me to my bunk. Currently I'm thinking the former.

Can't wait to see more. <3 <3 <3

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Re: As You Wish, Miss Jones - Chapter 1 [1c] anonymous March 15 2012, 21:55:01 UTC
... this is really amazing so far...

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Re: As You Wish, Miss Jones - Chapter 1 [1c] anonymous March 16 2012, 02:12:37 UTC
I am fascinated by this fill, and you've only just begun. It is very interesting. I look forward to seeing where you're going to take this.

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Re: As You Wish, Miss Jones - Chapter 1 [1c] anonymous March 17 2012, 18:37:54 UTC
Oh wow!
I haven't read USUK in such a long time. This was very refreshing.
I definitely look forward to more, you have set up such an interesting world; and Arthur is like I've never seen him before. Can't wait to see what you do with this.

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