Past-Part Fills Part 7

Feb 27, 2011 12:31



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Past-Part Fills Part Seven

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[Part 8] Anything Goes - Greece/Japan, Crime-AU anonymous March 4 2012, 10:02:03 UTC
A/N: Original prompt was for Yakuza!Japan meeting Shipping Empire Heir!Greece.

I started working on this for an event (which I unfortunately missed the deadline for OTL). And now, I’m a little nervous about posting it to the main comm, because it doesn’t seem very romantic/fluffy at all >_>

So I decided to test it out here. I’m not quite done with it yet, so I will post up what I have so far. I do have a pretty good idea of the plot though, so I will try to finish up the other parts as soon as I can. Critique/feedback on plot and characterizations are most welcomed and appreciated.

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the beginning of all commotions [1/?] anonymous March 4 2012, 10:08:45 UTC
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Greece/Japan, Turkey, mentions of China and Ancient Rome. More implied pairings and characters to come in later parts.
Warnings: Crime-AU, language, booze & smokes, slight crack and general WTFkery. I must be smoking the same thing Himaruya-sensei has been lately.
Music that inspired all of this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BDHXZ4Fjqr8

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February 14, 2kXX. 08:10 AMHe couldn’t quite remember how he’d gotten himself into this situation ( ... )

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the beginning of all commotions [2/?] anonymous March 4 2012, 10:15:29 UTC
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February 14, 2kXX. 09:32 AM

It was supposed to have been a relatively easy task. Yao’s instructions were straightforward: Stay low and keep watch. If things get messy, go in and take everyone out. Kiku appreciated the simplicity of the plan, especially since his eldest cousin was sometimes prone to much melodrama (which was quite unnecessary, if Kiku was allowed to be truly honest about it). And while he usually meant well, Kiku couldn’t help but feel somewhat exhausted trying to keep up with Yao’s antics at times, and wished that his cousin would go about conducting his businesses with a better sense of calm and propriety ( ... )

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the beginning of all commotions [3/?] anonymous March 4 2012, 10:22:15 UTC
Sadiq was lucky (or perhaps just really quick-minded and even more quick-footed). He saw an opening then, and took it.

“RAAAAAAHHH!”

Before anyone could so much as blink, he grabbed the lid of the nearest trash can, and swinging it wildly before him like a madman, bulldozed his way through and out of the alley.

Herakles was not as fortunate.

Coward, he thought begrudgingly as he glared after Sadiq’s retreating back, before the sounds of resuming gunfire wrested his attention back to more pressing matters at hand - his survival.

The newcomer moved again as the mob surged forward, sunlight glinting off his blade as he twisted and twirled; a furious whirlwind lashing out at burly men two, no, three times his size. Herakles saw another flash, followed by an explosive bang before he was coughing, choking.

“Move.”

His eyes and nostrils still burning from the smoke and ash, Herakles only realised he was on the ground again when he heard the soft, urgent voice close beside him. He looked up and saw the newcomer to his left (dark ( ... )

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the beginning of all commotions [4/?] anonymous March 4 2012, 10:27:12 UTC
Yakuza? The thought had crossed his mind when Herakles first laid eyes upon the tattoo, but even he had enough sense to refrain from voicing the question. Still, he wondered about this strange man, who had offered only a single name when asked.

“If it wasn’t for your appearance, I’m sure I would be lying dead in the streets by now.” Herakles continued. He raised his eyes from the tattoo to meet Kiku’s impassive gaze. “Thank you.”

“It was not truly my intent to rescue you,” Kiku admitted, his tone low. “I only noticed you were not part of the group I had been observing. In that sense, I merely reacted out of instinct.”

“Is it instinctive of you to aid strangers from certain death?” Herakles ventured carefully. He could feel Kiku shifting slightly in his seat, but the man held Herakles’ gaze steadily.

“But you’re no stranger, are you Mister Karpusi? Even if you are one but many, you are still an heir to Romulus’ empire. And my cousin is particular about keeping his business associates safe and alive, if possible ( ... )

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the beginning of all commotions [5/?] anonymous March 4 2012, 10:35:48 UTC
When Kiku only frowned doubtfully at the suggestion, Herakles tried again, quickly adding, “Call it a business associate keeping his honour and repaying you for saving his life, in whatever way he can ( ... )

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Re: the beginning of all commotions [5/?] anonymous March 4 2012, 21:58:08 UTC
Yakuza!Japan making a badass entrance and then getting flustered when Greece hits on him? I'm in love with this fill already.

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Re: the beginning of all commotions [5/?] anonymous March 5 2012, 01:30:20 UTC
Ahaha, I love Herakles's banter with Sadiq and Kiku. I hope you'll continue this because this is shaping up to be a very entertaining fill and I'd like to know more about Kiku's backstory here.

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Re: the beginning of all commotions [5/?] anonymous March 6 2012, 12:51:31 UTC
I really love this fill so far. Please do continue.

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Re: the beginning of all commotions [5/?] anonymous March 23 2012, 05:30:08 UTC
OP of that prompt loves this! :D Sadiq's and Herakles's dialog is priceless, and the gang warfare was really nicely rendered. It's a great start, and I hope you continue soon~ ♥

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the beginning of all commotions [6/?] anonymous March 12 2012, 06:19:18 UTC
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February 14, 2kXX. 12:05 PM

The day began, as always, with her favourite tune playing from the old radio nestled in an abandoned corner of a wall-mounted shelf, home now to dust balls and hidden-from-view spiders’ nests. It had been chilly earlier in the morning, the draught creeping in from underneath the door and snaking through a tiny gap in the window - Francis must have forgotten to check they were properly closed before going home last night.

Sunlight filtered through red-and-yellow patchwork drapes now, casting fuzzy fractals on linoleum tiles, as morning gradually eased into noon.

And like always, she hummed (it had always been Mother’s favourite song) as she worked, dusting the cabinet shelves first, before turning to attack those stubborn stains on the counter with her trusty cleaning cloth. The stains blended into the dark wood of the counter too easily, putting up a tough fight against her via camouflage (but not to worry, she also had her other cleaning side-kick at hand, Super Dish Disinfectant Spray - ( ... )

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the beginning of all commotions [7/?] anonymous March 12 2012, 06:24:50 UTC
Cutting the deck in half, she set aside the first stack on the counter before shuffling the second stack again, her fingers guiding each packet down one after another upon her palm.

Shuffle, shuffle, square.

Repeat.

The man watched her, sipping at his drink silently, before he finally said, “I’ve noticed the increase in brawls as well, the most recent one being among the Lafayettes themselves. I have to wonder though, if it was more than say, domestic difficulties among their ranks...”

A pause.

Angeline began laying out the cards across the counter, carefully placing them in a neat row. She let her hand hover over the cards, as if deciding on something, before she reached and turned over a card to reveal a Five of Diamonds.

“It does seem a little suspicious, doesn’t it? But as we both know, Mister Fox, when there are monetary transactions involved-”

She turned the second card over (Five of Clubs“-even simple matters can get out of hand pretty fast ( ... )

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the beginning of all commotions [8/?] anonymous March 12 2012, 06:30:01 UTC
She must have missed him earlier, though how she’d done so, she wasn’t quite sure, since this man was much taller than Mister Fox and more broad-shouldered. The dark suit he wore hid most of his muscular physique, but Angeline guessed that he could hurt someone if he really wanted to, even if it was a little difficult to imagine him wanting to hurt anyone right this moment.

Not when he was in the middle of prying an angry cat off one of the wall-mounted shelves with one hand and trying to keep a picture from falling off the wall with another ( ... )

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the beginning of all commotions [9/?] anonymous March 12 2012, 06:37:23 UTC
“Sorry,” Herakles said. The cat in his arms only sniffed in disdain.

“I apologise for the distraction.” Mister Fox said, contrite. “Please do continue.”

The smirk still playing around the corner of her lips, Angeline finished laying out all the cards in the final row.

“Two have already been accounted for,” she began, as she flipped one card over.

Two of Clubs.

“So that leaves us with...” She flipped the second and last card over.

Knave of Spades.A pause ( ... )

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Re: the beginning of all commotions [9/?] anonymous March 12 2012, 19:24:20 UTC
MONACO! You don't see her very often in fics, so her unexpected appearance here was a nice surprise. Although I'm not sure if she was really IC...I thought she had to be Belgium or Hungary at first before I caught on to the card motif, but that could be because we don't know much about her canon personality yet and you did do a neat job with the card motif.

...Have Greece and Japan already slept with each other? Their banter certainly gives the impression of that, or that they're thinking about it a lot at the very least. XD

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author!non anonymous March 13 2012, 02:48:44 UTC
Haa yeah, I had quite a tough time figuring out how to write Monaco, solely because there isn't enough of her in canon-verse. After re-reading Hima's strips, I sort of thought of her as mostly a quiet, mature lady but smart and witty at the same time, and very knowledgeable (hence her role as the information broker), and I went along with those and my gut feeling. I had fun researching up about the cards too, so I'm glad you liked that bit, anon.

As for Greece and Japan having slept with each other? No, they haven't XD Greece certainly might not oppose to it, if given the opportunity; Japan's just a dork and dirty-minded lol.

Maybe it seemed like I was hinting that they have had sex off-screen, because Herakles said "He's been laid before", but ah, I just meant to point out that Kiku wasn't a virgin (by his own admission no less, as hinted from the previous parts)... unlike how everyone Angeline thinks he is in this story. I guess I didn't make that clear enough ^^;

Thanks for the input though, anon! I appreciate it ♥

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