Re: It's Only Forever [1.5/?]
anonymous
February 10 2011, 00:31:17 UTC
Stupid character limit...Saesona refused to rise to the bait, though he saw her hand twitch as she fought the urge to slap him. “Your brother’s name is Peter. And I assumed you would tell me if you had plans; perhaps a date
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Re: It's Only Forever [1.5/?]
anonymous
February 10 2011, 01:03:40 UTC
Is the stepmum.. FEM!GERMANIA? >:D (Mama Greece, if not that..? x3)
Anon's been feeling the NEED to watch this movie lately, and now I have a reason to!! ^^ But.. Anon always imagines everything in Hetalian crossovers.. -sadly obsessed- France as Bowie? I THINK SO. Anon begs that A!A include the 'Remind me of a babe' song sequence~
Especially your awesomely funny naration! Like here:
They stood their ground, glaring at each other, but Arthur was the one still standing in the downpour with a canine wizard who was turning swiftly into a steaming heap of wet dog smell.
I guess it would be safe to say that I'm absolutely in love with your awesome writing ♥
And I find Rome is a perfectly aceptable father for Arthur. And if the other anon is half right... is it Mama Greece, then? Ancients are always so much fun <3
So... am I seeing this right... you plan on leaving some of the songs in there??? :D:D:D Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!
I am so so happy that you're filling this with your awesome writing skills and I'm really really looking forward to the next part ♥
Author!anon
anonymous
February 10 2011, 21:52:29 UTC
OP! I'm so glad you like it! The next part is on its way, as soon as Author!anon decides who gets to be a goblin!
Yes, I'm going to try and salvage some of the songs- they're too integral not to- but they may not survive as actual songs. Works great in a movie, but it'd be really awkward to do the same thing in writing. It waits to be seen what will actually transpire...
And no, not Mama Greece. Fem!Germania is close, but not exactly who I had in mind. Author!anon chose a very obscure OC; Fem!Germania might have been a better choice, in hindsight XD
Re: It's Only Forever [1.5/?]
anonymous
February 11 2011, 06:20:10 UTC
...Ironically, I'm listening to Magic Dance. But onwards- I'm in love with this. Seriously. You have no idea. I can see France as the Goblin King, complete with the stuffed crotch.
Aaaaaand I'm gonna guess that the stepmom is Monaco.
Re: It's Only Forever [2a/?]
anonymous
February 11 2011, 20:52:15 UTC
The chapter number format has changed, because Author!anon fails at life. At least I remembered to change the number at all this time... Anyway, onwards
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Re: It's Only Forever [2b/?]
anonymous
February 12 2011, 06:48:22 UTC
Oh my god, Labyrinth was one of my favourite childhood movies, I've seen it SO many times. Really enjoying this so far! HO YEAH who is going to be Hoggle??? And Ludo, Sir Didymus, the fire gang, hahahahaha! France is going to be an epic David Bowie replacement, complete with tights, bulging crotch, makeup and crazy hair I hope!
Can I request the Worm?? I love the worm! Allo!
Oh god is England going to wear a ballgown and have inappropriate sexual tension with France?? hells yeah XD
Oh I already can't wait to see who you chose for the goblin cast xD All I know is that Prussia would be an awesome goblin!
And damn, that chapter was awesome! Loved your choice for Arthur's real mom, but I still didn't figure out who S-tupid-cow-my-father-married is xD (that line was awesome, btw!)
ARTHUR HAS A LANCELOT TEDDY AND A MERLIN DOG!!! Why are you so awesome, anon? xDDD
And a lot of other nations as goblins.
Bonus: I love happy endings, so the story line doesn't have to be exactly the same^^
England can be female if you want.
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(Mama Greece, if not that..? x3)
Anon's been feeling the NEED to watch this movie lately, and now I have a reason to!! ^^
But.. Anon always imagines everything in Hetalian crossovers.. -sadly obsessed-
France as Bowie? I THINK SO.
Anon begs that A!A include the 'Remind me of a babe' song sequence~
Update soon, ne? |3
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And yes, Magic Dance will be staying in, though maybe a little abbreviated.
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Especially your awesomely funny naration! Like here:
They stood their ground, glaring at each other, but Arthur was the one still standing in the downpour with a canine wizard who was turning swiftly into a steaming heap of wet dog smell.
I guess it would be safe to say that I'm absolutely in love with your awesome writing ♥
And I find Rome is a perfectly aceptable father for Arthur. And if the other anon is half right... is it Mama Greece, then? Ancients are always so much fun <3
So... am I seeing this right... you plan on leaving some of the songs in there??? :D:D:D
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!
I am so so happy that you're filling this with your awesome writing skills and I'm really really looking forward to the next part ♥
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Yes, I'm going to try and salvage some of the songs- they're too integral not to- but they may not survive as actual songs. Works great in a movie, but it'd be really awkward to do the same thing in writing. It waits to be seen what will actually transpire...
And no, not Mama Greece. Fem!Germania is close, but not exactly who I had in mind. Author!anon chose a very obscure OC; Fem!Germania might have been a better choice, in hindsight XD
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I have to agree with the others, you have a great writing style. I am eager for more! I yearn for more! <3
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Aaaaaand I'm gonna guess that the stepmom is Monaco.
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Totally looking forward to the next update, a!a. ^^
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Can I request the Worm?? I love the worm! Allo!
Oh god is England going to wear a ballgown and have inappropriate sexual tension with France?? hells yeah XD
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And damn, that chapter was awesome! Loved your choice for Arthur's real mom, but I still didn't figure out who S-tupid-cow-my-father-married is xD (that line was awesome, btw!)
ARTHUR HAS A LANCELOT TEDDY AND A MERLIN DOG!!! Why are you so awesome, anon? xDDD
I just love it so so much ♥ ♥ ♥
Can't wait for the next part ♥
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