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[Fic] Building a Family, FrUK Style Part II

Apr 12, 2010 03:31

Title: Building a Family Part II
Author: Me.
Characters/Pairings: England/France, Spain, Prussia, America, Canada, Australia, Seychelles, Hong Kong, random OCs that don't really matter, mentions of China, some Sealand at the end.
Rating: PG-13?
Warnings: Arthur's mouth
Summary: The story of how Arthur and Francis somehow managed to create a ( Read more... )

-england, -prussia, -canada, -seychelles, fan: fic, -sealand, -australia, -america, -spain, -france, -hong kong

Comments 22

epalpie April 12 2010, 10:59:50 UTC

I loved all of the stories. All of them were so adorable sweet in their own way. And besides some typos, it was well written.

fivedayslater April 12 2010, 19:22:33 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you like them.

Typos...my mortal enemy. If you feel like pointing them out to me so I can go edit them, that would be most appreciated. :)

yami_no_ningyo April 12 2010, 15:06:54 UTC

I love this story so much. <3
And I adore your papa France. Exactly how I prefer him, loving his kids and being a perv towards Iggy.

fivedayslater April 12 2010, 19:24:17 UTC

Thanks! <3

That's what he does best. XD

crashtestskater April 12 2010, 17:02:01 UTC

such a joy. I think I liked the first part better, the romance developing between France and UK was sweet. Their family is definetly a little strange, but so so very cute.

fivedayslater April 12 2010, 19:26:53 UTC

Thank you. I have a thing for falling-in-love-stories myself. And that's what makes it awesome!

xxfurryfirefoxx April 13 2010, 02:47:47 UTC

Aw man, these were adorable! I don't even ship FrUk, but I loved it! your portrayal of their family is just perfect. x3 Some lines actually had me laughing out loud. ily. <3 Can't wait for the rest of the families.

fivedayslater April 15 2010, 04:54:29 UTC

Thank you! I do love their little family, so I'm glad I got them right. That means I'm doing it right! <3

mecchayumyum April 13 2010, 05:27:47 UTC

This was so freaking cute. gosh... and why'd you have to name Matt and Al's skanky mom Vanessa... that probably made me laugh the hardest because I'm a raging bitch.

Please tell me you'll be doing more in this AU you've made.

fivedayslater April 15 2010, 04:55:55 UTC

Thank you! To be perfectly honest, it's the first name that popped into my head. O_O Is it your name? If so I'm sorry, I don't actually know any Vanessas.

I plan to. ;)

mecchayumyum April 16 2010, 17:24:39 UTC

No it's not but whenever I hear the name Vanessa I think of this lady...

really, freaking awesome! Who else will you be doing all the ones from the essays?

fivedayslater April 16 2010, 23:38:19 UTC

Huh, weird...

I like this little universe I created a little too much to just let it fade to obscurity. I'd like to something for all the families. ^_^