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[Fic] My Slavic Family

Mar 29, 2010 02:12

Title: My Family By Ivan Bragniski
Author: Me.
Characters/Pairings: Russia, Lithuania, Ukraine, Belarus, General Winter, America, Korea, China, Italy, Romano, Germany, Poland
Rating: G
Warnings: Fail!grammar and ^_^
Summary: "Tell me about your family. How many people are in it? What do they do? Is there anyone you don't see very much?"

Ludwig's Family
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-china, -belarus, -poland, -russia, -lithuania, -ukraine, fan: fic, -italy north (veneziano), -korea south, -america, -germany, -italy south (romano)

Comments 26

firebird_88 March 29 2010, 06:53:52 UTC

This story made me want to cry and smile at the same time. Only Ivan could sound so charming and yet creepy all at the same time. Also, do I sense some Rochu in there? <3 Yes. I approve so much. XD

Btw, awesome cameo by Feliks there, haha.

Btw, my heart goes out to Russians right now for the bombings at Moscow. ;A;

fivedayslater March 31 2010, 02:21:21 UTC

Only Ivan indeed. I suppose you do, yes. C:

Thank you!

Mine too..;;_;;

mecchayumyum March 29 2010, 13:19:12 UTC

Oh man this made me giggle (which hurt dammit my throat is still dead from being sick). It was really cute in Ivan's adorable creepy little way, the cameo was cute and Ivan talking about oving around was really cute too. This is a well thought out essay for an eight year old! I'd pass him.

fivedayslater March 31 2010, 02:22:46 UTC

Sorry...*gives hug* Thank you! His dad's a general, it better be well thought out... I'm sure Toris will too.

anoeldreamer March 29 2010, 13:44:21 UTC

Yes! You did do Russia's!

Cute yet creepy, just like Russia. And General Winter as the dad? Really nice touch.

fivedayslater March 31 2010, 02:26:38 UTC

I did!

Thank you! I'm glad you liked that. :D

jamminbison March 29 2010, 18:23:52 UTC

That was VERY cute. I've enjoyed this series so far, especially the little sections at the bottom that tie it all together.

fivedayslater March 31 2010, 02:27:46 UTC

Thank you! It's nice isn't it?

wistfulmemory March 29 2010, 20:22:12 UTC

It always makes my days when I see that you've written another one of these stories. The "huge tracts of land" line made me start giggling. The scarf line was a nice touch. The whole story was entertaining, yet it was also very sad as it showed how isolated Ivan was. Good job. I can't wait to read more. :)

fivedayslater March 31 2010, 02:29:37 UTC

And you saying that just made mine. :) Thank you very much!