[FANFIC] Indomitable

May 03, 2009 17:07

Title: Indomitable
Author/Artist: thewaterbandit 
Character(s) or Pairing(s): Rome, France, Canada
Rating: U
Warnings: Another crossover! I swear I do write things other than crossovers but this one demanded to be written. :p
Summary: France tells a young Canada a bedtime story. Crossover with Asterix (yes really). Originally inspired by the 10 things meme.

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-france, -canada, -ancient rome, fan: fic

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lksugui May 3 2009, 16:35:10 UTC
Yaaaaay, I love Asterix! \^o^/

That was an awesome idea, really! You did a good job - the Hetalia x Asterix universes mixed perfectly and both Grandpa Rome, little Francis and the whole Asterix gang looked very much in character. And the bonus of an adorable little Canada squishing his bear, oh, joy X3

Thank you so much for sharing this! <3<3<3

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thewaterbandit May 3 2009, 16:45:14 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad that everyone was in character, that was a big worry for me. Especially writing the Asterix characters- I mean, I grew up reading these guys! They're legends!

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lover_li May 3 2009, 16:37:24 UTC
this. THIS.
*SQUEES WITH JOYFUL JOYNESS*
Oh, my childhood self loves you so! :3

lol lol cacofonix lol ^_^

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thewaterbandit May 3 2009, 16:46:18 UTC
I could not have forgiven myself if I didn't work Cacofonix in SOMEHOW. Glad I made your childhood self happy!

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marynyu May 3 2009, 17:12:39 UTC
KYAAAA!!!! This made me very happy in deed. I LOVE ASTERIX!!!

It was very well done. Francis WOULD remember them fondly.

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thewaterbandit May 3 2009, 19:17:55 UTC
Thank you very much! I bet Francis just sometimes cracks a bottle of wine and bores everyone silly with stories about Ancient Gaul for like a solid three hours.

(he gets away with it because of the funny bits :p)

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theotherdenise May 3 2009, 17:15:47 UTC
I love this. So much.

You are a complete legend for not only doing this but doing it well.

For some reason, I liked how you wrote the Romans best, but all of it was wonderful, even the intro with little Canada. And Cacofonix mention ftw XD

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thewaterbandit May 3 2009, 19:19:58 UTC
The Romans were a lot of fun to write, especially Commander Supercilious, who I made up especially for the crossover. The plan had been to have him as the standard pompous Roman but as I wrote his dialogue his character took a sharp right turn into Apocalypse Now territory. I just figure that getting the tar beaten out of you every other day would breed that mentality.

Glad you liked!

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krahka May 3 2009, 17:28:19 UTC
This is awesome on so many levels of awesome. It has indeed, delivered Asterix punching Rome in the face, and it has done it AWESOME.

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thewaterbandit May 3 2009, 19:20:29 UTC
Never say that I don't deliver what I promise! :D Thank you!

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