Just Say Yes 5/5
anonymous
July 3 2009, 08:20:18 UTC
*is throwing every bit of bedroom kink she knows into this* ---------------------------------------------------------------------- A strap of leather left a mark on Ivan's thigh, and he bit down on his bottom lip. It hurt, but it didn't ease the pain in his heart, and it didn't prepare him for what came next.
He squirmed desperately, afraid and ashamed, as his bruising back was slammed into the floor, and something too hot and too tight pressed onto his throbbing member.
"St-stop!" he said between clenched teeth, but he didn't stop. He tried not to moan as he rode himself, but even his body seemed to want to betray him.
"A-agh..."
"Don't hold back. Scream. Go on. We're lucky. Our children don't get much chance to scream."
"B-bastard...nnnh!"
He suddenly slowed to a near stop, and leaned over himself, the noose tightening again.
"Tell me what you want, Ivan."
"I...I want..."
"What?" He gagged.
"...to finish quickly..."
He rocked back.
"Please!"
And rocked forward.
'Please let it end...!'
"Stop...don't stop...get on with it."
Ivan came with a long groan and another strangled sob.
"Did we enjoy that?"
"Yes," Ivan said finally, surrendering himself to the shadows once more.
Re: Just Say Yes 5/5
anonymous
July 7 2009, 21:50:13 UTC
Words cannot describe how awesome I thought this fic was. I liked how short, specific and psychological-based(? I don't know how to word it) this fic was. Anon does not fail. I really enjoyed this fic!
Re: Just Say Yes 5/5
anonymous
July 7 2009, 22:08:59 UTC
Words cannot describe how awesome I thought this fic was. I liked how short, specific and psychological-based(? I don't know how to word it) this fic was. Anon does not fail. I really enjoyed this fic!
Re: Just Say Yes 5/5
anonymous
July 12 2009, 05:59:16 UTC
;A; I usually don't read self-cest but self-cest with ANGST! The description, the conflict, the emotions and everything just pouring out, clashing with himself, his other half. Wanting and not wanting.
This is no fail at all!!! Wonderful job capturing both sides of the coin. ^^
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A strap of leather left a mark on Ivan's thigh, and he bit down on his bottom lip. It hurt, but it didn't ease the pain in his heart, and it didn't prepare him for what came next.
He squirmed desperately, afraid and ashamed, as his bruising back was slammed into the floor, and something too hot and too tight pressed onto his throbbing member.
"St-stop!" he said between clenched teeth, but he didn't stop. He tried not to moan as he rode himself, but even his body seemed to want to betray him.
"A-agh..."
"Don't hold back. Scream. Go on. We're lucky. Our children don't get much chance to scream."
"B-bastard...nnnh!"
He suddenly slowed to a near stop, and leaned over himself, the noose tightening again.
"Tell me what you want, Ivan."
"I...I want..."
"What?" He gagged.
"...to finish quickly..."
He rocked back.
"Please!"
And rocked forward.
'Please let it end...!'
"Stop...don't stop...get on with it."
Ivan came with a long groan and another strangled sob.
"Did we enjoy that?"
"Yes," Ivan said finally, surrendering himself to the shadows once more.
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Thanks for the kind words! x3
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This is no fail at all!!! Wonderful job capturing both sides of the coin. ^^
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Thanks so much! I'm very glad you enjoyed it. ^ ^
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