Under the Spanish House (3/?) [Part I fill]
anonymous
May 31 2009, 10:55:50 UTC
Spain’s back arched off the bed and his fingers dug violently into the covers-his reactions were more and more dramatic and so were his flurried bi-lingual responses to the gentle touches France’s fingers left for him.
There was so much happening at once. The hands, the sensations, the words, the sounds, the breathing, the thoughts, everything came at Spain at once, but nothing was processed let alone comprehended. He brain was utterly confused and he was completely immersed in the enigma that was his current mental state. But he had never enjoyed anything as much as this his entire existence-that pressure that grew almost unbearable was something he would soon learn crave. And Dieu that pressure! It was almost painful.
“Francia, t-te quiero,” his words were still soft and faltering, but he was gaining some control as the night wore on. But it could only last so long.
“H-hold on, F-France! Francia!” the young nation cried as semen spouted from him.
That was followed by a guttural, broken moan as Spain emptied. That pressure that had built up was all gone, now. In a single moment, everything was washed away. He felt cleansed.
France, of course, was not prepared for such a sudden release and let out a single profanity as he was washed in the white liquid. Spain’s fulfilled exclamation had done him in and he released into Spain with such force that the young nation was also caught off guard and as the liquid rushed into his deepest crevices, he screamed. But then it was over. Spain’s legs fell from France’s waist and France, now free from his voluntary bindings collapsed beside his partner.
France buried his face into the pillow; his heaving chest dug deep into the soft bed that retained some of the sweat from his glistening body. And Spain, exhausted from his first encounter with true foreign relations-intercourse, lay on his back, legs spread wide and panting heavily. He stared blankly at the white ceiling of his little room, eyes half-lidded and mind lost to the haze that came immediately after some powerful event.
But slowly, everything started to return to him. And he realized something though France had already started vocalizing Spain's thoughts.
“So,” the experienced country casually asked between frequent breaths, “do you think you got pregnant?”
Author here: Look, I'm really sorry about that first post. It's epic fail. I didn't format it correctly. SORRY. That is what you get for using Word first. Anyway, it's a shame a more talented writer couldn't fill this post. I feel that you will hate FranceXSpain after this, but it needed to be filled. This is my first try, so please go easy, yes? And if I posted this wrong, do tell me!
Re: Under the Spanish House (3/?) [Part I fill]
anonymous
May 31 2009, 11:42:13 UTC
France/Spain = My secret OTP!
You know, I was YEARNING for France/Spain and came over to kink meme just to look for some other pairing instead (because I didnt really believe I'd find a new fic about them right now, it's not so popular pairing compared to some) BUT GOSH I WAS MORE THAN HAPPY to find this fic! <3
Don't be hard to yourself, it's your first try this fic is good (me enjoying it is a proof enough xD)! Especially the ending- it cracked me up :'D
...And now you left me to yearn for MORE France/Spain >X'D
There was so much happening at once. The hands, the sensations, the words, the sounds, the breathing, the thoughts, everything came at Spain at once, but nothing was processed let alone comprehended. He brain was utterly confused and he was completely immersed in the enigma that was his current mental state. But he had never enjoyed anything as much as this his entire existence-that pressure that grew almost unbearable was something he would soon learn crave. And Dieu that pressure! It was almost painful.
“Francia, t-te quiero,” his words were still soft and faltering, but he was gaining some control as the night wore on. But it could only last so long.
“H-hold on, F-France! Francia!” the young nation cried as semen spouted from him.
That was followed by a guttural, broken moan as Spain emptied. That pressure that had built up was all gone, now. In a single moment, everything was washed away. He felt cleansed.
France, of course, was not prepared for such a sudden release and let out a single profanity as he was washed in the white liquid. Spain’s fulfilled exclamation had done him in and he released into Spain with such force that the young nation was also caught off guard and as the liquid rushed into his deepest crevices, he screamed. But then it was over. Spain’s legs fell from France’s waist and France, now free from his voluntary bindings collapsed beside his partner.
France buried his face into the pillow; his heaving chest dug deep into the soft bed that retained some of the sweat from his glistening body. And Spain, exhausted from his first encounter with true foreign relations-intercourse, lay on his back, legs spread wide and panting heavily. He stared blankly at the white ceiling of his little room, eyes half-lidded and mind lost to the haze that came immediately after some powerful event.
But slowly, everything started to return to him. And he realized something though France had already started vocalizing Spain's thoughts.
“So,” the experienced country casually asked between frequent breaths, “do you think you got pregnant?”
Author here: Look, I'm really sorry about that first post. It's epic fail. I didn't format it correctly. SORRY. That is what you get for using Word first. Anyway, it's a shame a more talented writer couldn't fill this post. I feel that you will hate FranceXSpain after this, but it needed to be filled. This is my first try, so please go easy, yes? And if I posted this wrong, do tell me!
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Let me apologize for my screw ups..
1) That HORRENDOUS editing job on the first paragraph...I'M SORRY. Please try to get through that first part without killing yourself.
2) I was supposed to italicize the foreign phrases, but it's really late here and I forgot...
3) In general, I feel that this request should have been filled by someone more talented. So if you start hating FranceXSpain, I'm really sorry...
and again, this is my first post on the kink meme, so I'm looking for some guidance. Help is greatly appreciated.
Thanks~
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You know, I was YEARNING for France/Spain and came over to kink meme just to look for some other pairing instead (because I didnt really believe I'd find a new fic about them right now, it's not so popular pairing compared to some) BUT GOSH I WAS MORE THAN HAPPY to find this fic! <3
Don't be hard to yourself, it's your first try this fic is good (me enjoying it is a proof enough xD)! Especially the ending- it cracked me up :'D
...And now you left me to yearn for MORE France/Spain >X'D
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