In order to celebrate HETALIA'S anime adaptation. AXIS POWERS HETALIA KINK MEME

Jul 25, 2008 15:44


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Re: His Best Friend (2/?) anonymous December 31 2008, 08:16:19 UTC
‘The game’ had gone on for hours, long past the time the sun had risen, and by then, Lithuania was a complete mess. Ivan had brought a dog whip as well, a short, hard piece of leather that burned on contact even when the Russian didn’t put his considerable strength behind the blow. He had ordered him to sit, to heel, to lick his feet and whenever Lithuania had refused, which was most of the time, he had punished him with the whip. The small nation had earned himself more and more punishment as the game wore on, Russia getting increasingly angrier, hitting him harder each time and choking him on the leash until he couldn’t keep up the fight. Then suddenly it all had stopped, the giant had calmed and looked outside, and that was when he had seen the snow.

“I know Toris. I know what’s wrong. You don’t want lessons right now, do you? You want to play. So let’s have another game, hm? Why don’t we go outside and play in the snow?”

Lithuania’s stomach fell at the suggestion. Thinking he wouldn’t, he wouldn’t… as Russia pulled on the leash and towed him to the foyer. The Russian wrapped himself in a coat and tied his shawl tighter around his neck. When he opened the door and a handful of white powder blew inside it all became too real. Lithuania pulled back with a whimper, trying to stay inside, hoping the man’s madness would snap in the last moment and he would realize what a death sentence it was to drag a naked, bleeding man out in those temperatures. Russia turned around and looked at him; surprise etched in his face at the resistance he felt in the leash. He asked, “You don’t want to come, no?”

Lithuania fought to keep his teeth from chattering. “Pl-ease,” he said, “I-it’s really cold outside.”

“Um, so? It’ll be fun in the snow.”

“Please Ivan, at least let me get my clothes…”

Ivan’s eyebrows drew together. “Clothes? You don’t wear them in this game. Have you forgotten what you are? You don’t need clothes.”

Lithuania cowered even more as the Russian man came close and loomed over him, looking at him from the top of his nose.

“See, this is what makes me angry. You never obey, never play right, you just want to get away from me all the time. But no…, I won’t let you.”

And suddenly he was lifted into the air, Russia grabbing him around the waist and hoisting him over his shoulder. Much to his horror and despair the larger man hauled him outside, in a fireman’s carry, into the endless frozen white.

More to come when I have time; I promise. Let me know what you think.

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Re: His Best Friend (2/?) anonymous December 31 2008, 21:49:44 UTC
This is very, very good! I think Ivan is kept completely in-character, what with his child-like cruelty and oblivious-ness to what he is doing, and the writing is very good in this story.
I like it alot!

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Re: His Best Friend (2/?) anonymous January 3 2009, 14:32:43 UTC
Oh, author-anon. (Actually, I am wondering if you're the same author-anon that I have been following around the kink meme today, because a lot of fills for this pairing have turned up with some lovely writing very recently; might they be yours?)

Because the writing is lovely, even if the fic is brutal. I adore that Russia keeps the game up all day, childishly cruel and honestly not understanding why Lithuania doesn't wish to play it with him. I adore that Liet stands up for himself, even if it means taking more of a beating. And maybe best of all is that the snow scares him more than all the rest.

Continue, please, author-anon. <3

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Re: His Best Friend (2/?) anonymous January 4 2009, 05:22:24 UTC
Thank you so much for the reviews. Sadly I am not the author you have mentioned. I just recently turned into this pairing and this is the only fic I have been working on these past couple of days. I love the Russia/Liet pairing though very much and intend to fill as many requests in this pairing as I can. And you are right; there is a lot of great writing in this category, which helped to inspire me.
Now onto posting the next parts. Thanks again for reading and commenting.

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