Lioness Rampant [4]
anonymous
April 6 2009, 09:28:08 UTC
She took the heavy gold chain with his crucifix from his neck, admiring the weight of the chain, the intricacy of the cross with its figure of Christ in agony. Her powerful fingers fastened it around her own throat and the crucifix hung between her high, shapely breasts. It hung there heavily, swinging in slow movements against her nipples, which had become peaked upon exposure to air.
Her smile remained wicked and enticing and mad still as she climbed upon the bed. She reached out lazily and gripped him again, pumping him up and down teasingly. He groaned at her touch, her calloused and capable touch. She was no idle captain, he knew. She knew her ships as well as every one of her sailors, fought at their sides with her saber and pistol at hand. Weaponry was her second love. Violence was her first.
Her hand continued to grip him as she straddled his thighs. She slowly raised herself, guiding him to between her lips (and he could feel her heat- so much that he wondered if he would be burned-) and soon he could feel her, all around him, wet and tight and- He gasped, his blood roaring in his ears. Someone was whimpering- it was him, it was his mouth parted and gasping and praying all at once. She slowly, inexorably descended, and he could feel more and more heat surround him, bliss and agony at once. His eyes did not roll back to his head, he kept them fixed forwards, seeing her breasts, her magnificent breasts, with his jeweled crucifix hanging between them, the eyes of Christ searing him-
And she rode him, long and hard. Her breathing became erratic too as she let her head loll back, her eyes partially closed in ecstasy. He bucked upwards too, straining to meet her harder, faster. His mouth formed prayers and curses and blessings, calling her puta and Maria and bruja and- Too soon it was over as he yelled, desperately bucking up one more time and coming deep into her. The pale-haired succubus screamed too, writhing atop him. She remained atop him as he felt the world drop out from under him, starbursts still popping before his dazed eyes.
Disturbingly, she recovered far faster than he did, leaning over to steal an almost affectionate kiss from his lips.
“Witch,” he still muttered. “Damned English witch.”
She laughed throatily. “You only replaced one letter, Antonio.” Her nails trailed along his chest like claws, soft but terrible in the promised cruelty.
He wondered how it was possible to love and hate a woman this much.
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Doña: a respectful term for a woman, rather like “Lady” Puta: whore Bruja: witch
Re: Lioness Rampant [4]
anonymous
April 6 2009, 09:50:23 UTC
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Holy shit. Your England makes me question my sexuality, she is that degree of smoking, and your prose is smooth and evocative and helps to make this story the masterpiece that it is. I loved the dynamic between Alana and Spain here, and Spain's comparing her to France but acknowledging that they're two very different types of beauty--fjflfkkkk I need to go find some pictures of fem!England to fap to ogle now.
A-Also I hope you write a great deal more genderbender and all manner of fic for this fandom, because I want more of your writing.
Pirate England is hot. Fem!England is hot. When you put the both of them together....
Wow, I never intended her to do so much as THAT (personally, I'd admire her... from a safe distance). -grins- Just doing my part to help fill out the requests, really. Though I think I'm in love with fem!England now. Desperately.
Oh god. Thank you, thank you so much for filling this writer!anon. This was hot, insanely hot. And well written too. Exactly what I wanted. I, umm, think I have a kink for dominant!agressive!women and submissive!passive!men. And your fem!England made me question my sexuality, just like anon above.
Thank YOU for putting up the request. Because two kinks in one? (And I'm not just mentioning the non-con/dub-con).
Oh god, I'm becoming an... "immoral influence." xD Here I am, making people question their sexuality... I didn't MEAN to... I think Alana just does that to people?
Antonio isn't what I would call... passive, necessarily, just extraordinarily laid back (at least as depicted in the comics). But when a woman has a gun at your throat, her hands on your vital regions, you just might want to behave.
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anonymous
April 7 2009, 00:49:47 UTC
kjsdhfklsef i want to make a request for a sequel of this fic where she becomes a "lady" and spain meets america and canada and how much she's changed yet she's still as ferocious as ever and so wild. dkfhsekufhksef
THOUGH AU LIBRARIAN IS FUCKING HOT TOO KJDHFUSEf i rec'd this fic to so many people \o/ dkjfhusef
Re: Lioness Rampant [4]
anonymous
April 6 2009, 17:33:15 UTC
adfakdsfhsd oh my goodness anon this was ridiculously hot. That passage with the description of England, comparing her to France, especially? Spot-on. *joins the group of people who now want more fem!England*
-laugh- Damn it. Now I'm envisioning how different everything would be with a fem!England! My fingers are just itching to type it.
I couldn't help sneaking in a fem!France, if only in passing. xD And yes, she's the slightly vampy, very hot older sister/lady who gets all the boys/poets singing her praises/portraits painted, etc. England's the grumpy younger sister who snarls and makes the boys run away. But she's just as hot (and she damn well knows it during this time period).
Re: Lioness Rampant [4]
anonymous
April 7 2009, 09:21:28 UTC
Count me among those who have suddenly found themselves gay for fem!England. XD That was incredible, I'd love to see this continue in a full-blown AU series.
Her smile remained wicked and enticing and mad still as she climbed upon the bed. She reached out lazily and gripped him again, pumping him up and down teasingly. He groaned at her touch, her calloused and capable touch. She was no idle captain, he knew. She knew her ships as well as every one of her sailors, fought at their sides with her saber and pistol at hand. Weaponry was her second love. Violence was her first.
Her hand continued to grip him as she straddled his thighs. She slowly raised herself, guiding him to between her lips (and he could feel her heat- so much that he wondered if he would be burned-) and soon he could feel her, all around him, wet and tight and- He gasped, his blood roaring in his ears. Someone was whimpering- it was him, it was his mouth parted and gasping and praying all at once. She slowly, inexorably descended, and he could feel more and more heat surround him, bliss and agony at once. His eyes did not roll back to his head, he kept them fixed forwards, seeing her breasts, her magnificent breasts, with his jeweled crucifix hanging between them, the eyes of Christ searing him-
And she rode him, long and hard. Her breathing became erratic too as she let her head loll back, her eyes partially closed in ecstasy. He bucked upwards too, straining to meet her harder, faster. His mouth formed prayers and curses and blessings, calling her puta and Maria and bruja and- Too soon it was over as he yelled, desperately bucking up one more time and coming deep into her. The pale-haired succubus screamed too, writhing atop him. She remained atop him as he felt the world drop out from under him, starbursts still popping before his dazed eyes.
Disturbingly, she recovered far faster than he did, leaning over to steal an almost affectionate kiss from his lips.
“Witch,” he still muttered. “Damned English witch.”
She laughed throatily. “You only replaced one letter, Antonio.” Her nails trailed along his chest like claws, soft but terrible in the promised cruelty.
He wondered how it was possible to love and hate a woman this much.
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Doña: a respectful term for a woman, rather like “Lady”
Puta: whore
Bruja: witch
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Holy shit. Your England makes me question my sexuality, she is that degree of smoking, and your prose is smooth and evocative and helps to make this story the masterpiece that it is. I loved the dynamic between Alana and Spain here, and Spain's comparing her to France but acknowledging that they're two very different types of beauty--fjflfkkkk I need to go find some pictures of fem!England to fap to ogle now.
A-Also I hope you write a great deal more genderbender and all manner of fic for this fandom, because I want more of your writing.
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Pirate England is hot. Fem!England is hot. When you put the both of them together....
Wow, I never intended her to do so much as THAT (personally, I'd admire her... from a safe distance). -grins- Just doing my part to help fill out the requests, really. Though I think I'm in love with fem!England now. Desperately.
Thanks!
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Oh god. Thank you, thank you so much for filling this writer!anon. This was hot, insanely hot. And well written too. Exactly what I wanted. I, umm, think I have a kink for dominant!agressive!women and submissive!passive!men. And your fem!England made me question my sexuality, just like anon above.
Excellent fill. Again, THANK YOU WRITER!ANON!
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Oh god, I'm becoming an... "immoral influence." xD Here I am, making people question their sexuality... I didn't MEAN to... I think Alana just does that to people?
Antonio isn't what I would call... passive, necessarily, just extraordinarily laid back (at least as depicted in the comics). But when a woman has a gun at your throat, her hands on your vital regions, you just might want to behave.
I'm glad you liked it!
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THOUGH AU LIBRARIAN IS FUCKING HOT TOO KJDHFUSEf i rec'd this fic to so many people \o/ dkjfhusef
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I think my brain is breaking, just a little. Because I actually suddenly want to write a full out history for Alana now. Dammit. -head meets desk-
...-turns red, scuttles off-
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I couldn't help sneaking in a fem!France, if only in passing. xD And yes, she's the slightly vampy, very hot older sister/lady who gets all the boys/poets singing her praises/portraits painted, etc. England's the grumpy younger sister who snarls and makes the boys run away. But she's just as hot (and she damn well knows it during this time period).
Thanks!
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JESUS, fem!arthur. Come over here and ransom me?
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Er... You might end up traumatized. Very traumatized.
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Holy shit, yes.
This piece was fucking lovely! I enjoyed your Spain, especially, with all his machismo. And fem!Arthur, of course. :D
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NO ONE EXPECTS THE SPANISH INQUISITION!!!
-coughs- Er, excuse that.
Spain really makes England look positively licentious, really (in history, I mean). And yes, he's a macho, strutting MAN. xD
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