They finally are strong enough to break into Ivan's house. Alfred is taking apart Matthew's cage now, tossing the door away with ease. "Come on, Matt! You're free now!" Alfred's voice is excited and bright, pretending as if he never turned his back to Matthew and left Matthew with Ivan, the man who became Matthew's saviour and his world. Matthew learnt to live for Ivan the past few months. He lived for the praises he never received from anyone else and the care he never got, the honesty that never failed to tell Matthew what he did wrong and why he deserved punishment.
So he crawls out from his filthy cage with a rag that is loosely tied around his bony hips and kneels by Ivan's feet, looking up carefully. He examines the caked blood that trail from one of Ivan's nostril and the bruised left cheekbone and eye. A familiar pain blossoms across his face as a stinging slap slices the silence.
"Why do you look up? I have forbidden that, I thought?" Matthew kisses Ivan's dirty boots and Ivan laughs. "Good boy." Matthew sees Ivan turning to Alfred with a look of triumph. "He is wanting to be with me, you see. You give him to me and he is mine now."
Alfred's jaw works and works, but each time he parts his lips, there is no sound.
There is nothing but anger, guilt, shame and Ivan's laughter.
Soundless: bonus
anonymous
April 4 2009, 03:07:27 UTC
Matthew groans, biting sharply into the sheets that are bunched into his mouth as Ivan slams into his ass. With his wrists cuffed behind his back and ass sticking into the air, Matthew finds himself completely helpless and in pain. The cock ring seems to tighten around Matthew's length with each thrust Ivan gives, causing Matthew to grind his teeth.
Ivan pushes Matthew's face into the pillow and Matthew can feel the fabric soaking up his drool that escapes through parted lips.
He cannot bring himself to scream anymore, his voice is raw from the previous hours. All he can manage now are painful whimpers and raspy cries. He thinks his nose was bleeding sometime earlier because there is blood marks all over the white sheet but that can also be from his sore anus from the merciless pounding he is receiving.
Ivan shoves his cock into Matthew's mouth to finish the job and unloads his semen into the Canadian. Matthew chokes and gags, throwing up the fluids along with the water he had drank earlier and the bits of bread he had for dinner. Ivan tucks himself back into his pants, cleaning himself off cheerfully before grinning down at Matthew. "I see you later then, da?"
Matthew's cock twitches and that is his only reply before Matthew collapses onto the bed, breathing in the musky scent of the old, ratty mattress.
"It's okay," Matthew whispers to himself once Ivan is gone. "I'm used to it anyway."
end; 1,696 words. started april 2 09. finished april 3 09.
Re: Soundless: bonus
anonymous
April 4 2009, 05:00:58 UTC
Oof, anon. You promised brutal, and holy hell, delivered. This anon is simultaneously impressed, a little disturbed that she liked this as much as she did and suddenly immensely in need of Canada fluff. That being said, once again, bravo for an unrelentingly well-done piece.
Re: Soundless: bonus
anonymous
April 5 2009, 04:38:25 UTC
This anon would have responded far sooner, but their keyboard decided to die. Nonetheless, I read this over again and again until I borrowed a new keyboard. I adore this so much. I should feel bad for hearting this to bits...but I don't. You did an amazing job!
I really liked how you emphasized all of the gritty-dirtiness of Matthew's situation. Ivan's abuse was terrible by itself, but everything that he was in just felt...extremely unsanitary. I also really loved the way that you introduced Matthew's Stockholm Syndrome for Ivan at the very end.
But I've been curious like crazy. Was the bonus section placed before Alfred tries to rescue Matthew, or afterwards? I've been trying to figure it out.
writer!anon--
anonymous
April 5 2009, 05:54:53 UTC
here to reply to your question!
the bonus would probably be after. because he is "used to it anyway"
i wrote the bonus because it didnt fit anywhere in the fic itself-- and i wasnt too sure if i hit all the right spots for a proper BDSM fic without some sex or something. i tried throwing it into the actual story ut it wasnt enough for me to feel good about writing so i tossed in a bonus. x)
♥ thank you all for reading! i am always excited about getting comments. and the captcha has a mind of its own!!!
I didn't realize that this had been filled until I checked back here.
This is disturbing, brutal, inhumanely abusive and I love every word this fanfic contains. You are extremely talented. Unlike other fanfics Ive read with similar scenes, I can really understand why Canada has been mentally ruined in the way that he has. I enjoyed this immensely
♥ aw, thank you! jhksef i dont know about being talented with writing torture fics is a good thing or not, but i am so glad it's met your standards and how much you enjoyed it!
So he crawls out from his filthy cage with a rag that is loosely tied around his bony hips and kneels by Ivan's feet, looking up carefully. He examines the caked blood that trail from one of Ivan's nostril and the bruised left cheekbone and eye. A familiar pain blossoms across his face as a stinging slap slices the silence.
"Why do you look up? I have forbidden that, I thought?" Matthew kisses Ivan's dirty boots and Ivan laughs. "Good boy." Matthew sees Ivan turning to Alfred with a look of triumph. "He is wanting to be with me, you see. You give him to me and he is mine now."
Alfred's jaw works and works, but each time he parts his lips, there is no sound.
There is nothing but anger, guilt, shame and Ivan's laughter.
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Ivan pushes Matthew's face into the pillow and Matthew can feel the fabric soaking up his drool that escapes through parted lips.
He cannot bring himself to scream anymore, his voice is raw from the previous hours. All he can manage now are painful whimpers and raspy cries. He thinks his nose was bleeding sometime earlier because there is blood marks all over the white sheet but that can also be from his sore anus from the merciless pounding he is receiving.
Ivan shoves his cock into Matthew's mouth to finish the job and unloads his semen into the Canadian. Matthew chokes and gags, throwing up the fluids along with the water he had drank earlier and the bits of bread he had for dinner. Ivan tucks himself back into his pants, cleaning himself off cheerfully before grinning down at Matthew. "I see you later then, da?"
Matthew's cock twitches and that is his only reply before Matthew collapses onto the bed, breathing in the musky scent of the old, ratty mattress.
"It's okay," Matthew whispers to himself once Ivan is gone. "I'm used to it anyway."
end; 1,696 words. started april 2 09. finished april 3 09.
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poor Canada, why did you leave him in Ivan's care Arthur? Do you really not care for him at all?
Thanks for this anon
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I really liked how you emphasized all of the gritty-dirtiness of Matthew's situation. Ivan's abuse was terrible by itself, but everything that he was in just felt...extremely unsanitary. I also really loved the way that you introduced Matthew's Stockholm Syndrome for Ivan at the very end.
But I've been curious like crazy. Was the bonus section placed before Alfred tries to rescue Matthew, or afterwards? I've been trying to figure it out.
Captca: is devoted. Oh...wow.
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the bonus would probably be after. because he is "used to it anyway"
i wrote the bonus because it didnt fit anywhere in the fic itself-- and i wasnt too sure if i hit all the right spots for a proper BDSM fic without some sex or something. i tried throwing it into the actual story ut it wasnt enough for me to feel good about writing so i tossed in a bonus. x)
♥ thank you all for reading! i am always excited about getting comments. and the captcha has a mind of its own!!!
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This is disturbing, brutal, inhumanely abusive and I love every word this fanfic contains. You are extremely talented. Unlike other fanfics Ive read with similar scenes, I can really understand why Canada has been mentally ruined in the way that he has. I enjoyed this immensely
You filled my request completely.
Thankyou!
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it made me happy that you enjoyed it so. x) ♥
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