Rumba - Part Four (End)
anonymous
July 12 2009, 13:55:38 UTC
He presses their foreheads together as his finger slowly sinks into Spain. The heat is so amazing tight that he wants to take Spain right there, against the wall, but he doesn’t want pain to be what Spain remembers from their first time together, doesn’t want Spain to cringe away from his touch. The thought makes him faintly nauseated. So he stops using a hand to lean against the wall and wraps it around Spain’s erection. “Your leg.” France flicks his tongue against Spain’s jaw. “Wrap it around me.”
“Are you going to--?” Spain hooks a leg around France’s hip, tossing his head back against the wall as France adds a second finger down to the second knuckle, and begins thrusting. “Dios mio. Francia--”
“No.” France thrusts harder, varying angle in search of that bundle of nerves, both fingers fully in now. “I’m not going to fuck you in public.” He kisses Spain’s cheek and Spain catches his mouth in a panting kiss, lips meeting again and again in between gasping breaths. Doesn’t bother to elaborate that he’s not being considerate regarding Spain’s modesty, almost can’t, because they’re thrusting together and his mind flashes flicker-fast between thinking of how good it’ll be to push into Spain, make him cry just enough and then blind him with pleasure so that he can no longer be so apathetic about France’s touch, Spain on his knees with his mouth on France’s cock -- and best of all the real expression Spain currently wears, flushed, eager, desperate.
France comes, jerking in Spain’s grip, and simultaneously finds that magical spot inside the other nation that turns good sex into fantastic sex. Even as France is trying to get his breath back, Spain starts trembling in his arms. France snaps to and kisses him again, hungry, not satisfied yet, and consumes the cry that tears out of Spain’s throat as it becomes his turn to release, inner muscles clamping down on France’s fingers in a way that makes France ridiculously jealous of his own fingers, and spills semen over France’s hand.
France gives Spain a few seconds, aware that Spain’s heart is beating wildly. That’s all the reprieve he can grant. He raises up the hand that Spain has jacked him off with, and their semen mixes together along with their fingers. France meets Spain’s gaze as he deliberately begins laving their entwined hands, gaze infused with heat. They’re not done yet.
WHEN I SAW THIS, I HONEST TO GOD SCREAMED, I WAS SO HAPPY. THREE AND HALF MONTHS OF WAITING, BUT OH IT WAS SO WORTH IT.
ANON, ANON, I LOVE YOU. LET'S GET MARRIED AND MAKE BEAUTIFUL BABIES TOGETHER.
Spain is my unadulterated favorite, but this, this made me love France.
Christ.
And it's totally okay that you didn't follow the prompt to the end, you added so much more depth to my prompt than I could have possibly asked for.
Between all the little references to Spanish culture (the salute to Catholicism had me hook, line, and sinker) and the ridiculously hot sex, this is probably my favorite fill ever in this kink meme.
Thank you so much for this fill anon, it was everything I wanted and more.
Hahah, I'm flailing with embarrassment. I wasn't too confident about the fic, but I'm very happy that I made you and the other readers happy. :) I love, love Spain. with France. ♥ So I'm definitely going to try to do more fills for him ~ uhm. You'll probably be able to tell which ones are mine, lawl.
“Are you going to--?” Spain hooks a leg around France’s hip, tossing his head back against the wall as France adds a second finger down to the second knuckle, and begins thrusting. “Dios mio. Francia--”
“No.” France thrusts harder, varying angle in search of that bundle of nerves, both fingers fully in now. “I’m not going to fuck you in public.” He kisses Spain’s cheek and Spain catches his mouth in a panting kiss, lips meeting again and again in between gasping breaths. Doesn’t bother to elaborate that he’s not being considerate regarding Spain’s modesty, almost can’t, because they’re thrusting together and his mind flashes flicker-fast between thinking of how good it’ll be to push into Spain, make him cry just enough and then blind him with pleasure so that he can no longer be so apathetic about France’s touch, Spain on his knees with his mouth on France’s cock -- and best of all the real expression Spain currently wears, flushed, eager, desperate.
France comes, jerking in Spain’s grip, and simultaneously finds that magical spot inside the other nation that turns good sex into fantastic sex. Even as France is trying to get his breath back, Spain starts trembling in his arms. France snaps to and kisses him again, hungry, not satisfied yet, and consumes the cry that tears out of Spain’s throat as it becomes his turn to release, inner muscles clamping down on France’s fingers in a way that makes France ridiculously jealous of his own fingers, and spills semen over France’s hand.
France gives Spain a few seconds, aware that Spain’s heart is beating wildly. That’s all the reprieve he can grant. He raises up the hand that Spain has jacked him off with, and their semen mixes together along with their fingers. France meets Spain’s gaze as he deliberately begins laving their entwined hands, gaze infused with heat. They’re not done yet.
The party doesn’t stop until the sun comes up.
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YES.
CLUBBING.
Also, this was just fantastic. And HOT. VERY VERY HOT. I LOVE the way you write these two! Wonderful, wonderful work!
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OH MY GOD, ANON.
i came.
oh i came.
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WHEN I SAW THIS, I HONEST TO GOD SCREAMED, I WAS SO HAPPY. THREE AND HALF MONTHS OF WAITING, BUT OH IT WAS SO WORTH IT.
ANON, ANON, I LOVE YOU. LET'S GET MARRIED AND MAKE BEAUTIFUL BABIES TOGETHER.
Spain is my unadulterated favorite, but this, this made me love France.
Christ.
And it's totally okay that you didn't follow the prompt to the end, you added so much more depth to my prompt than I could have possibly asked for.
Between all the little references to Spanish culture (the salute to Catholicism had me hook, line, and sinker) and the ridiculously hot sex, this is probably my favorite fill ever in this kink meme.
Thank you so much for this fill anon, it was everything I wanted and more.
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shit.
nothing will ever measure up to this fic's hotness. nothing. ever. oh god i think my brain exploded when i came you are amazing♥
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There are not. The words in the entire ENGLISH LANGUAGE (or French or Spanish languages) to describe how INSANELY SEXY this is. shdkjlhejgfdfs.
Anon. Please have my SOUL. This is HOT and GORGEOUS and I WANT MORE.
*______________*
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ANON, YOU ARE AMAZING
i've just been waiting for this to be filled and holy crap.
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I came.
The only thing that would've made it hotter was if they rumba-ed before/after all this, because anon has tried the dance and it is one SEXY dance~
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Why did you have to go and combine all my kinks.
Now I'm gonna fap forever, even though its 4:30 am.
fffffffff.
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