Hetalia kink meme part 23

Jun 03, 2012 14:54


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hetalia kink meme
part 23

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Re: Blind Trust (2c/4) anonymous October 23 2012, 22:35:47 UTC
For the first time since dawning the blindfold, he opened his eyes, straining to see but nothing blackness met him. He felt his breathing increase slightly and his palms start to sweat a little. Before he could really panic though, suddenly his hand on either side was grabbed by equally clammy hands.
Supporting him, anchoring him, calming him...
Perhaps Spades had chosen perfectly for him after all.
The one on his right, his new Jack had slightly smaller hands but as he had a longer index finger he was male with callouses along his thumb, index and middle fingers from holding a pen likely so he was a scholar. The hand on his left were about the same size as his, also male and calloused though more heavily with some on his palm, from holding a weapon or some sort or tool; a soldier or a farmer. That was good, they were at least used to work and his Jack should at least have an idea of the duties he was to assume.
Alfred had been so absorbed in what information he could glean from his co-rulers that he hadn't even realized the Archbishop was talking until he had finished and the other two gently nudged him forwards.
He noticed as soon as they stepped outside, the people greeting them with a cheers and roars of approval and the sun hitting his face. It was a lovely day, a fine day to become King and get married.
They stopped a little farther down, where Alfred knew a raised pavilion to be in the middle of the square and his right hand was used to turn him slightly before it was given to his Queen's other hand. A crinkle a pages then his Jack's voice - a pleasant tenor, with an accent of the eastern provinces - rang through the air.
Unlike the ceremonies that the rest of the populace had, the speech his poor Jack had to run through was full of redundancies and elaborations requiring nothing more then a nod from him or a short word from his queen (a warm baritone, slight coastal accent) as input.
All too soon they were declared married while the populace surrounding them shouted and applauded.
Alfred let out a slight sigh of relief. Now all that was left was dinner, then the most terrifying moment of his day would come.

I wanted to add a bit of description and apparently that is what you can tell from a human hand when blindfolded just by touch.
Smut is next, though it may be delayed, my computer's hard drive is fried.

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Re: Blind Trust (2c/4) anonymous October 23 2012, 22:37:08 UTC
Shoot that didn't format right, my italics and spacing between paragraphs is gone.
Is there a way to edit posted text?

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Re: Blind Trust (2c/4) anonymous October 24 2012, 19:43:09 UTC
No. What's up is up, unless it's deleted by a mod.

This is some pretty fantastic writing. You really have done a great job with the scene.

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I'm the OP anonymous October 25 2012, 01:11:26 UTC
Hi A!A, No, sorry, there is no way to edit it.

Did you post this in the Fill List for fills and fill updates too? I didn't see it.

Ahh! cliffhanger! Nooo!

You know what's great about this fill, the little details you been adding. As a reader, I really feel like I'm blindedfold as well, and even though I know it's Arthur and Yao. I still feel
suspenseful! You got everything there, there world and history, customs, Alfred feelings and how he viewing the world being Blind.

This is bloody fantastic!

I just love your nervous Alfred, I just want to hug him! I can't wait too see how Arthur and Alfred interact with each other.

I wonder what that childhood promise was too Alfred mention as well.

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Re: A!A anonymous October 25 2012, 12:42:12 UTC
No this is my first time filling anything on here, I didn't know I had to post in the Fill List... Thank you for telling me :D

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I'm the OP anonymous October 25 2012, 22:23:15 UTC
Your welcome

Oh, yeah, every new storie and update you post on there. ^_^

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Re: Blind Trust (2c/4) anonymous October 28 2012, 22:49:57 UTC
Cliffhanger :( Noo! :(

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Re: Blind Trust (2c/4) anonymous October 30 2012, 22:46:42 UTC
update soon!

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