Past-Part Fills Part 7
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Past-Part Fills Part Seven
Fills from past parts can go here!
Fills from the current part (part 22) MUST go in that part's post until it is full.
Link to the original request (and if an ongoing fill, any previous chapters/sections).
Don't forget to link your new fill at the fill ( Read more... )
I used to cry so much with the Steadfast Tin Soldier! Children stories can be so terrible D: I kind of love Bonnefoy here. I can see France in him and that's great in an AU, where warping characters to fit the story is so common and so tempting. Loved Gilbert, too.
Arthur's explosion was perfect. He's frustrated and angry and I can't imagine how terrible he feels. I also liked how Alfred wanted to help him, but deep inside he prefers to have Arthur all by himself. That's very IC with America, who is attention seeking and a bit selfish while still being good-hearted and wanting to help people. It's also nice how you are developing his feelings towards Arthur: it wouldn't be IC (or logical, age-wise) to have him fall in love right now, though I can see his attachemente changing with time.
The mistery around Arthur, Bonnefoy and Harold is still intriguing and I can't stop imagining theories.
All in all, in a time when fandom is making me a bit sad, your story is a beacon of happiness and amasement.
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