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speak less than thou knowest [prologue 2/2] anonymous January 26 2012, 01:06:54 UTC
If one were to ask England what he really thinks, one would not receive an answer. If one were to ask England his honest opinion concerning his former colony, the answer received would be barely intelligible.

Because it goes like this.

Raised the boy, failed the boy, the boy failed me, I don‘t understand how his thought process works, dear God what exactly does he think he’s suggesting here, how many times do you think he‘ll accidentally cause a fight today?

America is… something.

He’s unique, but that’s not necessarily a good thing, depending on which kind of perspective an observer decides to employ. He is far too jubilant in his ignorance, and it’s really quite worrying for England to sit there and watch.

More than one thousand years; that’s how much experience of life England has under his belt. He’s seen William Harvey stand up against Galen, he’s seen Edward Jenner saving more lives than any other man. He’s seen war and poverty, peace and affluence. He’s soldiered through emotional turmoil and the bliss of victory.

So surely, then, one would think he’d be able to raise America just a little bit better.

There’s nothing specifically wrong with America. It’s a general issue, really. He is a confusing sort of fellow. Never picked up a book in the entirety of his existence, likes to treat his Presidents like new playmates instead of important political colleagues. That time America asked Hoover to go Bigfoot hunting was the most peculiar thing England ever witnessed.

(Or perhaps the day he asked Thatcher was worse.)

There was a time, when America was young, that he wasn’t like this. So it must have been England’s fault. Whatever England did, it must have traumatised the poor boy or turned him away from the pursuit of knowledge forever, because America was once a model student.

He was so willing, when it came to learning about matters of the Earth; he would listen to people and learn their stories, he would connect with his citizens and take the time to grow, flourish. England can remember entering America’s bedroom to say hello to him, seeing the boy swinging his legs with his nose buried in a book, broadening his vocabulary and improving on an intellectual level.

And of course, he was once intelligent enough to mastermind a successful revolution. Bastard.

But something changed. Something must have. England can’t work out what, so naturally he blames himself. Or America. Or France, because these things are usually his fault.

England has never been very good at making up his mind, but he knows there’s little point in worrying about it now - what’s done is done, after all.

So he thought. It was an easy mistake to make.Blah, so, just a prologue to get my thoughts down/set the fic. :x Will update with a real install next time, haha.

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Re: speak less than thou knowest [prologue 2/2] anonymous January 26 2012, 02:05:28 UTC
This an amazing beginning for an incredibly promising fic. I'm loving it. I really liked how England thought it may be his fault. Or France's, I lol'd at that part.

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Re: speak less than thou knowest [prologue 2/2] anonymous January 26 2012, 02:35:01 UTC
America asked Thatcher to go Bigfoot hunting?
...Awesome So much respect for my country right now, you have no idea.

If this is just the prologue, expect to see me sticking around for a long, long time. :3

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Re: speak less than thou knowest [prologue 2/2] anonymous January 26 2012, 05:23:32 UTC
Op Here! First of all, I wish you could have heard the squeak I made when I saw this had a fill. It was quite gleeful.

I adore the universe you are creating in this. It's very realistic and understandable, not a stretch at all, in my opinion, from canon universe. I also really liked the idea of England knowing of America's potentially, but thinking it went wrong somewhere.

All around, your prologue has me really excited to read more! Thanks so much for taking this on, and I'll be waiting with baited breath for the next installment!

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Re: speak less than thou knowest [prologue 2/2] anonymous January 26 2012, 05:26:05 UTC
This is just an amazing prologue~ I especially like how you portray America and England - a genius in disguise for America and England with so much affection towards America...

Can't wait for the next update~

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Re: speak less than thou knowest [prologue 2/2] anonymous January 26 2012, 05:32:19 UTC
This is a very promising start. I definitely look forward to seeing more.

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Re: speak less than thou knowest [prologue 2/2] anonymous January 28 2012, 01:56:07 UTC
[I see what you did there, author!anon. America = Fool. And then your title.

King Lear for the win.]

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a!a anonymous January 28 2012, 02:03:32 UTC
...you have caught me

you must be Alfred

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