Hetalia kink meme part 21
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Hon, you already know I love your work, and I can't reiterate it enough. America's uncertainty and France's bitterness worked so well together, and you have such a wonderful muse for serious!France, even if you don't think so..
Honestly, I do like the rewritten section better than the original. Not that it was bad at first, but it does give a better glimpse at both Iggy's problems and sheds a bit of light on all the resentment that France is trying so hard to hide. I know I threw fits and flipped shit at first, but it really does add to the story. And it's so nice to see an author who's willing to take a critique and actually work with it rather than pitching a fit and condemning poor reviewer!anon to hell. It's not a skill I excel in, so at least one of is isn't a total bitch. XD
HOWEVER. HOWEVER, HOWEVER, HOWEVER.
I'm just wondering... Where was France's dick? How could you write an entire fill focusing on him and not have his cock flapping wildly in the wind? Take note, love, that if there is an open orifice, Francis' penis can and will figure out a way to get inside. I'm actually surprised that you didn't have Alfie and him have their little heart to heart while the Frenchman was screwing our poor hero senseless. We all know he's a better lay than stuffy old England anyway. Duh.
And another thing, I really think you should have spelled Arther's name correctly. I mean, I know you mean well and all, but I get so damn tired of telling you it's A-R-T-H-E-R. Seriously, you'd think you could figure that out on your own by now, but no. No you can't. Sometimes I wonder why I even bother.
Also, Mr. America. He should've been eating a hamburger. It's actually a contractual agreement that whenever someone uses Alfred in their work, he needs at least 10 burgers per scene. Quite frankly, I'm appalled that you didn't know that, and I think you should maybe do a little more research before your next piece. Just sayin', dearie.
On a final note, I'm sorely disappointed by the stunning lack of mpreg!LietPol in this fill. What the hell were you thinking, anyway? Wait, no, don't answer. I don't want to know about your LietPol fail.
That is all.
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I totally agree about the mpreg Lietpol thing, but I have to contest the dick!rape notion. In section 10, paragraph 3 of Hetalia!Fanon volume 2 it states that "In times of depression, angst, or seriousness Francis Bonnefoy's dick becomes under-enthused and avoids contact anyone who is not of English nationality, this includes masturbation." Please actually /read/ the rules before randomly throwing out critique like that. You sound uneducated and uninformed, and a!anon doesn't deserve that.
As for the hamburger thing, if a!anon paid Alfred in hamburgers following the writing of the fill, that is also an acceptable interpretation of said contract for using his likeness in any literary work.
All that aside--seriously, some people shouldn't be allowed near keyboards, sheesh--I'd like to say that I enjoyed the fill. Reminded me of my childhoo--wait. But seriously, nice job.
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You are now my favorite anon.
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