Between a Rock and a Hard Place, (Spain/Romano & Pirate!Spain), 12/13
anonymous
August 1 2011, 04:01:06 UTC
Spain smiled a little, running his thumb across Romano's slightly swollen bottom lip, “I was afraid you would leave me if I did.”
Romano pinched him gently, rolling his eyes as he replied, “Idiot. You are a fucking idiot.”
Spain kissed him lightly, once, twice, whispering against his lips, “I think we both are.”
He gasped and moaned a little as Spain settled between his legs, reminding Romano of just how long he had been this turned-on.
Eager and wanting, he nipped at Spain's neck, demanding, “Well, fucking tell me now, so you can have me already.”
Spain jerked against him, letting Romano feel his own arousal, before tilting Romano's head up to meet his serious eyes as he spoke, voice happy and determined, “I want you. I love you.”
Romano stilled, smiling at Spain as his heart soared, “So what are you going to do about it?”
Spain's grin turned wicked as his moved one hand to release Romano from his bonds, murmuring , “Anything you want, love.”
Romano's blood ran hot at the thought of all he and Spain could do, arching his hips up to meet Spain's, running his tongue along the shell of Spain's ear, making him tremble and moan as he teased, “Next time you can leave the ropes on.”
“My God,” Spain sighed before kissing Romano, who responded eagerly, delighting in being able to run both of his hands up and down the flexing muscles of Spain's biceps, pulling impatiently at the material of his shirt, wanting to feel Spain's naked chest against his own.
Spain obliged, sitting up and flinging the offending garment away, before looking down at Romano's long neglected cock and winking lasciviously at Romano. He settled back on his heels, keeping his gaze firmly on Romano's face, feeling his arousal flare with the electricity of their connection as he raked his nails down Romano's chest, unceremoniously pulling Romano's pants down, leaving him totally exposed.
“Fuck, fuck,” Romano cursed hotly, tangling his hand in Spain's messy hair when Spain lowered his head to run his mouth along the sharp ridges of his hip bones, a deliciously unkind tease. He watched, eyes growing heavy with lust, as Spain sucked an impressive mark into the juncture where leg met torso.
Spain peered up at him, green eyes blazing as he took Romano's cock in hand, stroking downwards firmly, continuing to run his tongue along Romano's hips, making him shake with need.
When he managed to pant out, “Bastard,” it sounded more like a whine than a curse and Spain finally took pity on him, ending the tease as he parted his lips and took the tip of Romano's cock into his mouth, humming in apparent satisfaction.
Romano moaned and thrashed, fingers pulling at Spain's hair as his lips and tongue slid down his cock, his fingers tracing soft little circles on his thighs. Romano knew he wasn't going to last long, having been on the edge of desire for far too long, nearly helpless with the need to come under Spain's unrelenting gaze, the feel of Spain's insistent mouth around him driving him insane.
When Spain winked at him and then swallowed him deep, Romano gave up on trying to hold back, shouting and shaking as he finally, finally, came long and hard in Spain's warm mouth. He panted and gasped, throwing one arm over his eyes as he mumbled “Fuck, fuck, fuck,” over and over.
When he'd regained enough of his faculties to open his eyes, Romano found a naked Spain straddling his chest, his attention immediately drawn to his hard cock. Spain was touching him all over, pressing wild kisses to his cheeks and neck and lips, stopping only to whisper hot and wet and dirty in his ear, “Can I come on you?”
“Fuck, yes, do it,” Romano breathed out before kissing Spain fiercely, tongue catching traces of his taste in Spain's mouth, moaning deeply.
Between a Rock and a Hard Place, (Spain/Romano & Pirate!Spain), 13/13
anonymous
August 1 2011, 04:03:09 UTC
Spain pulled back sharply, taking Romano's hand in his and placing them both on his cock, making Romano's heart skip a beat with the wanton arching of his back. Spain looked at him through hooded eyes as they stroked him off together; Spain's movements going erratic when Romano sucked the fingers of Spain's other hand into his mouth, biting down on the tender skin of his thumb, keeping his gaze locked on Spain's flushing face.
Spain was breathing hard and fast, looking at him with urgency. Romano pulled the fingers from his mouth, gripping Spain's quivering thigh and commanding softly, “Come for me, Spain.”
Spain's eyes went wide and round, mouth falling open as he sighed deeply, shuddering once and coming hotly over Romano's chest and neck, leaning down to kiss him messily as he shook through his orgasm.
Spent, Spain flopped down next to Romano, sighing happily as he slung an arm around Romano's waist, holding him close. Romano took great, heaving breaths, trying to wrap his mind around what had just happened while also trying to stave off the satiated desire for sleep.
His eyes fell on Pirate-Spain's abandoned clothes and unable to help it, he snorted in begrudging amusement, causing Spain to cease peppering his skin with little kisses and ask, “What is it?”
Romano let his fingers tangle lazily in Spain's hair, sighing, “I was just wondering whether we should fucking kill England or send him a goddamned thank you card.”
Spain laughed, holding Romano closer, “Why don't we do both?”
Surprised, Romano laughed in return, pressing into Spain's embrace, murmuring, “I knew I fucking love you for a reason.”
~End
that was fun! woo! hope you enjoyed and thank you thank you to everyone who read and commented! xoxo
Re: Between a Rock and a Hard Place, (Spain/Romano & Pirate!Spain), 13/13
anonymous
August 1 2011, 05:02:23 UTC
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That was awesome! I love the way you wrote Romano's and Spain's characters, and I love the distinction between Pirate Spain and regular Spain. Romano's thoughts and feelings for his 'right' Spain were so adorable, and the way you described them made me really sympathize with his situation (even though I was totally excited because of the, erm, kinky part of this prompt XD).
You really do portray the characters well. The situation that caused the whole 'two Spain's' thing as well as the way it ended matches the cracky hilarity that is Hetalia, and the way everyone reacted (drunk!England, annoyed!Romano, dense!Spain) was perfect. I love that Spain wasn't a complete idiot and that he did fight for Romano, and I love that while Romano was himself--he didn't curse too much and he was the right mix of weak and skilled at escape. Pirate Spain was so fun to read, despite the fact that he was totally creepy and everything. XD
The end was awesome, from how easy it was to get rid of the Pirate Spain to how Romano and Spain acted together. It wasn't a clearcut declaration of feelings, and yet it was. (Smutty not-sex? I don't know how to describe it, but it was great. The touching and the dialogue and the umfff, I don't know. Keep writing! It was awesomeeeeee. . .) The way you wrote it came naturally, and it flowed really well with the characters. Reading fics is infinitely more fun when the characters are in-character and the writing style is smooth and fun and the plot is great (the fact that you gave this prompt a plot and subplot was lakdjflajd), and this was a great fill.
Sorry if this is a very jumbled comment to your lovely fill. I'm not good with words normally, and this fill just made me so happy. I love reading Spamano like this, and I'm so excited (and I hope you're proud) to see that there are still wonderful fics out there and this is part of the fandom. ;)
I hope you write more; you're really good and this was a great way to kick off my late-night fanfic-reading ways. ^^
A!A Between a Rock and a Hard Place, (Spain/Romano & Pirate!Spain), 13/13
anonymous
August 1 2011, 05:16:58 UTC
XD! What a wonderful and happy making comment, thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave such thoughtful (and kind!) feedback! This prompt was tons of fun--I have become addicted to writing Spamano as of late (though this is only the second fill I've done off my journal and on the meme), so it is so so so great to know that what is making me happy is entertaining others as well!
Thanks--and enjoy the late night reading ;) Hopefully you can some smutty sex-sex ;)
Re: Between a Rock and a Hard Place, (Spain/Romano & Pirate!Spain), 13/13
anonymous
August 1 2011, 05:14:16 UTC
Soooo much love for this fill! And I must tell you, I laughed so hard I was wiping away tears at how Romano had to get rid of Pirate!Spain. Bravo! XD
I also love that there was no penetration. Sounds silly, but the lack made me stupidly happy ^^;; Your writing is wonderful (and feels vaguely familiar) and this story was very well done. Thank you Author!Anon!
Re: Between a Rock and a Hard Place, (Spain/Romano & Pirate!Spain), 13/13
anonymous
August 9 2011, 05:23:24 UTC
Thank you very much! :)
Well, since I de-anoned on my journal, I assume it kosher to do this XD
You can find my assorted Spamano at my journal (both kink meme and non-meme, along with some Nordic stuff!). Now, only My Heart is Drenched in Wine has any smut, but I do love me some Romano!
Re: Between a Rock and a Hard Place, (Spain/Romano & Pirate!Spain), 13/13
anonymous
August 21 2011, 16:05:51 UTC
This was...this was..... I wish I could describe the expression on my face but I can't. I am too awed and overjoyed for words. This was beyond beautiful and sexy and hilarious and just perfection. Utter perfection all rolled up into one fill. I loved Pirate Spain's personality and Spain's annoyance with how Romano acted around his younger self. I loved all of Spain and Pirate! Spain's interactions. But honestly, I think what I love most is the fact that the reason Pirate!Spain was here in the first place was because England and Spain wanted to compare Pirate hats. Pirate hats. You, Author!Anon, are a beautiful genius. You have made my everyday and I worship your writing and sense of humour. (I almost want a sequel where America has a run-in with Pirate England. If Author!Anon posts this on LJ or FF.net and doesn't mind USUK, would they consider? )
Romano pinched him gently, rolling his eyes as he replied, “Idiot. You are a fucking idiot.”
Spain kissed him lightly, once, twice, whispering against his lips, “I think we both are.”
He gasped and moaned a little as Spain settled between his legs, reminding Romano of just how long he had been this turned-on.
Eager and wanting, he nipped at Spain's neck, demanding, “Well, fucking tell me now, so you can have me already.”
Spain jerked against him, letting Romano feel his own arousal, before
tilting Romano's head up to meet his serious eyes as he spoke, voice happy and determined, “I want you. I love you.”
Romano stilled, smiling at Spain as his heart soared, “So what are you going to do about it?”
Spain's grin turned wicked as his moved one hand to release Romano from his bonds, murmuring , “Anything you want, love.”
Romano's blood ran hot at the thought of all he and Spain could do, arching his hips up to meet Spain's, running his tongue along the shell of Spain's ear, making him tremble and moan as he teased, “Next time you can leave the ropes on.”
“My God,” Spain sighed before kissing Romano, who responded eagerly, delighting in being able to run both of his hands up and down the flexing muscles of Spain's biceps, pulling impatiently at the material of his shirt, wanting to feel Spain's naked chest against his own.
Spain obliged, sitting up and flinging the offending garment away, before looking down at Romano's long neglected cock and winking lasciviously at Romano. He settled back on his heels, keeping his gaze firmly on Romano's face, feeling his arousal flare with the electricity of their connection as he raked his nails down Romano's chest, unceremoniously pulling Romano's pants down, leaving him totally exposed.
“Fuck, fuck,” Romano cursed hotly, tangling his hand in Spain's messy hair when Spain lowered his head to run his mouth along the sharp ridges of his hip bones, a deliciously unkind tease. He watched, eyes growing heavy with lust, as Spain sucked an impressive mark into the juncture where leg met torso.
Spain peered up at him, green eyes blazing as he took Romano's cock in hand, stroking downwards firmly, continuing to run his tongue along Romano's hips, making him shake with need.
When he managed to pant out, “Bastard,” it sounded more like a whine than a curse and Spain finally took pity on him, ending the tease as he parted his lips and took the tip of Romano's cock into his mouth, humming in apparent satisfaction.
Romano moaned and thrashed, fingers pulling at Spain's hair as his lips and tongue slid down his cock, his fingers tracing soft little circles on his thighs. Romano knew he wasn't going to last long, having been on the edge of desire for far too long, nearly helpless with the need to come under Spain's unrelenting gaze, the feel of Spain's insistent mouth around him driving him insane.
When Spain winked at him and then swallowed him deep, Romano gave up on trying to hold back, shouting and shaking as he finally, finally, came long and hard in Spain's warm mouth. He panted and gasped, throwing one arm over his eyes as he mumbled “Fuck, fuck, fuck,” over and over.
When he'd regained enough of his faculties to open his eyes, Romano found a naked Spain straddling his chest, his attention immediately drawn to his hard cock. Spain was touching him all over, pressing wild kisses to his cheeks and neck and lips, stopping only to whisper hot and wet and dirty in his ear, “Can I come on you?”
“Fuck, yes, do it,” Romano breathed out before kissing Spain fiercely, tongue catching traces of his taste in Spain's mouth, moaning deeply.
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Spain was breathing hard and fast, looking at him with urgency. Romano pulled the fingers from his mouth, gripping Spain's quivering thigh and commanding softly, “Come for me, Spain.”
Spain's eyes went wide and round, mouth falling open as he sighed deeply, shuddering once and coming hotly over Romano's chest and neck, leaning down to kiss him messily as he shook through his orgasm.
Spent, Spain flopped down next to Romano, sighing happily as he slung an arm around Romano's waist, holding him close. Romano took great, heaving breaths, trying to wrap his mind around what had just happened while also trying to stave off the satiated desire for sleep.
His eyes fell on Pirate-Spain's abandoned clothes and unable to help it, he snorted in begrudging amusement, causing Spain to cease peppering his skin with little kisses and ask, “What is it?”
Romano let his fingers tangle lazily in Spain's hair, sighing, “I was just wondering whether we should fucking kill England or send him a goddamned thank you card.”
Spain laughed, holding Romano closer, “Why don't we do both?”
Surprised, Romano laughed in return, pressing into Spain's embrace, murmuring, “I knew I fucking love you for a reason.”
~End
that was fun! woo! hope you enjoyed and thank you thank you to everyone who read and commented! xoxo
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That was awesome! I love the way you wrote Romano's and Spain's characters, and I love the distinction between Pirate Spain and regular Spain. Romano's thoughts and feelings for his 'right' Spain were so adorable, and the way you described them made me really sympathize with his situation (even though I was totally excited because of the, erm, kinky part of this prompt XD).
You really do portray the characters well. The situation that caused the whole 'two Spain's' thing as well as the way it ended matches the cracky hilarity that is Hetalia, and the way everyone reacted (drunk!England, annoyed!Romano, dense!Spain) was perfect. I love that Spain wasn't a complete idiot and that he did fight for Romano, and I love that while Romano was himself--he didn't curse too much and he was the right mix of weak and skilled at escape. Pirate Spain was so fun to read, despite the fact that he was totally creepy and everything. XD
The end was awesome, from how easy it was to get rid of the Pirate Spain to how Romano and Spain acted together. It wasn't a clearcut declaration of feelings, and yet it was. (Smutty not-sex? I don't know how to describe it, but it was great. The touching and the dialogue and the umfff, I don't know. Keep writing! It was awesomeeeeee. . .) The way you wrote it came naturally, and it flowed really well with the characters. Reading fics is infinitely more fun when the characters are in-character and the writing style is smooth and fun and the plot is great (the fact that you gave this prompt a plot and subplot was lakdjflajd), and this was a great fill.
Sorry if this is a very jumbled comment to your lovely fill. I'm not good with words normally, and this fill just made me so happy. I love reading Spamano like this, and I'm so excited (and I hope you're proud) to see that there are still wonderful fics out there and this is part of the fandom. ;)
I hope you write more; you're really good and this was a great way to kick off my late-night fanfic-reading ways. ^^
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Thanks--and enjoy the late night reading ;) Hopefully you can some smutty sex-sex ;)
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I also love that there was no penetration. Sounds silly, but the lack made me stupidly happy ^^;; Your writing is wonderful (and feels vaguely familiar) and this story was very well done. Thank you Author!Anon!
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Loved it! Really no other words except that I hope a pimping takes place in the form of a sequel with America, England, and Pirate!England. :D
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I'll have to leave the sequel to another intrepid writer as I don't think I can do US/UK justice ;)
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and this
“I was just wondering whether we should fucking kill England or send him a goddamned thank you card.”
Spain laughed, holding Romano closer, “Why don't we do both?”
made me laugh a lot, which was just the icing on the cake<3
gj anon!
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Can you link to your other fills so that we can see more of your awesomeness?
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Well, since I de-anoned on my journal, I assume it kosher to do this XD
You can find my assorted Spamano at my journal (both kink meme and non-meme, along with some Nordic stuff!). Now, only My Heart is Drenched in Wine has any smut, but I do love me some Romano!
Thanks for asking...and here you go!
http://champagnesly.livejournal.com/6121.html#cutid1
ps...if this is NOT ok, i totally apologize!
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I wish I could describe the expression on my face but I can't. I am too awed and overjoyed for words. This was beyond beautiful and sexy and hilarious and just perfection. Utter perfection all rolled up into one fill. I loved Pirate Spain's personality and Spain's annoyance with how Romano acted around his younger self. I loved all of Spain and Pirate! Spain's interactions. But honestly, I think what I love most is the fact that the reason Pirate!Spain was here in the first place was because England and Spain wanted to compare Pirate hats.
Pirate hats.
You, Author!Anon, are a beautiful genius. You have made my everyday and I worship your writing and sense of humour.
(I almost want a sequel where America has a run-in with Pirate England. If Author!Anon posts this on LJ or FF.net and doesn't mind USUK, would they consider? )
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and he is soooo HOT!!!!!
-damn-
-dying from too much imagination overload-
How could France Pirate!England is unattractive???
X)X
Anyway, I'm a sucker for Pirate!Spain and Pirate!England.
Thank you for posting such an AWESOME fill!!!! :D
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