Ribbons 4/4
anonymous
September 26 2011, 19:38:51 UTC
She lets out a particularly loud cry and he feels the tightening all around him. He wraps his arms about her waist and spoons her as they rock together, enjoying the orgasm that runs through them.
For a few minutes they're just there, holding tight and doing nothing but existing and feeling. The only sound is their occasional breathing, and a few soft gasps of oh, oh, oh from Ukraine as she finishes off. But then she begins to stir, pulling at the bonds. She's been very good about this, and barely freaked out. He's tried to be as careful as possible with the gift of her, her trust.
"Untie me, please?" She asks, and he takes it down. She rubs at her wrists, but there's only a bit of coloring, no huge rope burns or anything. He steals a quick kiss, but she doesn't linger, instead running to the bathroom. He used to wonder if she was freaking out and cleaning herself, which was a afterglow killer, but he now realizes she's just you know, using the facilities. France says it's a common girl thing. America still doesn't exactly get it, but he trusts France on the matter, given he's the country of love and all.
She looks a bit shy when she returns, wearing nothing except the traces of the ribbons that haven't unraveled.
He pats the bed beside him, and she gladly curls against him, under the covers.
"You know, it's a twenty-four hour booking, not by the hour," He says, with a suggestive grin. "We could totally get our money's worth. Though, this one doesn't randomly serve food, so we'll have to go get stuff..." America trails off. It's cold and blowy outside, and he doesn't wanna put on his pants yet.
She gets up and gets something from her purse, which is roughly the size of Latvia, and pulls out whole freaking tupperware of cooked stuff.
He groans. Home cooked awesome, straight from his awesome girl. Life just cannot get any better without spandex superheroes involved.
"Oh man, you're best girl ever," He says. "Also, I love you long time and forever and stuff and stuff?"
She chuckles, seeming more at ease now. "I love you long time as well?"
She doesn't get the joke, but doesn't mind. It's still adorable as can be. America leans in and nuzzles against her for a second, before they pull off the top and start digging in.
Re: Ribbons 4/4
anonymous
September 28 2011, 01:34:46 UTC
AFSFSFDASDAFDSFADAS Ukraine is such an awesome girlfriend, bringing homemade food along like that!! Other things I like about this: It's hot XD (of course, how could it not be?), Ukraine is not perfect in English (she has an accent, doesn't get specific-to-English jokes,etc.), and the fluff. I really love fluff <3
It's also really nice that they didn't just fall asleep right after the sex. That happens way too often in fics and I'm starting to get tired of it, so this was a refreshing change!
Re: Ribbons 4/4
anonymous
October 7 2011, 07:41:08 UTC
WHY IS THIS NOT FLOODED WITH MORE COMMENTS, GOOD GOD ANON.
So damn hot. I don't usually read this pairing but OH MY GOD. It's so cute. And I love love loove America's voice here. This is so many levels of fantastic.
Re: Ribbons 4/4
anonymous
October 16 2011, 01:08:03 UTC
I ALSO DO NOT KNOW WHY NO MORE COMMENTS. This was amazing! Super hot sex and while your America narration (and dialogue) is so perfect it's uncanny, I just couldn't stop thinking, holy cute, Ukraine. This line:
She's always a bit shy, guarding her moans and pleasure as if he might think she was vulgar or something
just killed it for me. Ukraine is like that girl that covers her mouth when she laughs.
Anyway. hot damn. so good. Thank you, author!anon!
Re: Ribbons 4/4
anonymous
January 18 2012, 01:55:17 UTC
Dude. TOTALLY deserves more comments.
Your writing style is superb, the way you write these two just works, and all the little details you snuck in--their lives away from their clandestine affairs, that sort of thing--is just fabulous.
I don't comment often on fills, so consider this one of the highest compliments I can give. A job well done!
She lets out a particularly loud cry and he feels the tightening all around him. He wraps his arms about her waist and spoons her as they rock together, enjoying the orgasm that runs through them.
For a few minutes they're just there, holding tight and doing nothing but existing and feeling. The only sound is their occasional breathing, and a few soft gasps of oh, oh, oh from Ukraine as she finishes off. But then she begins to stir, pulling at the bonds. She's been very good about this, and barely freaked out. He's tried to be as careful as possible with the gift of her, her trust.
"Untie me, please?" She asks, and he takes it down. She rubs at her wrists, but there's only a bit of coloring, no huge rope burns or anything. He steals a quick kiss, but she doesn't linger, instead running to the bathroom. He used to wonder if she was freaking out and cleaning herself, which was a afterglow killer, but he now realizes she's just you know, using the facilities. France says it's a common girl thing. America still doesn't exactly get it, but he trusts France on the matter, given he's the country of love and all.
She looks a bit shy when she returns, wearing nothing except the traces of the ribbons that haven't unraveled.
He pats the bed beside him, and she gladly curls against him, under the covers.
"You know, it's a twenty-four hour booking, not by the hour," He says, with a suggestive grin. "We could totally get our money's worth. Though, this one doesn't randomly serve food, so we'll have to go get stuff..." America trails off. It's cold and blowy outside, and he doesn't wanna put on his pants yet.
She gets up and gets something from her purse, which is roughly the size of Latvia, and pulls out whole freaking tupperware of cooked stuff.
He groans. Home cooked awesome, straight from his awesome girl. Life just cannot get any better without spandex superheroes involved.
"Oh man, you're best girl ever," He says. "Also, I love you long time and forever and stuff and stuff?"
She chuckles, seeming more at ease now. "I love you long time as well?"
She doesn't get the joke, but doesn't mind. It's still adorable as can be. America leans in and nuzzles against her for a second, before they pull off the top and start digging in.
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It's also really nice that they didn't just fall asleep right after the sex. That happens way too often in fics and I'm starting to get tired of it, so this was a refreshing change!
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So damn hot. I don't usually read this pairing but OH MY GOD. It's so cute. And I love love loove America's voice here. This is so many levels of fantastic.
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She's always a bit shy, guarding her moans and pleasure as if he might think she was vulgar or something
just killed it for me. Ukraine is like that girl that covers her mouth when she laughs.
Anyway. hot damn. so good.
Thank you, author!anon!
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Your writing style is superb, the way you write these two just works, and all the little details you snuck in--their lives away from their clandestine affairs, that sort of thing--is just fabulous.
I don't comment often on fills, so consider this one of the highest compliments I can give. A job well done!
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