Property [ 7/7 ]
anonymous
July 5 2011, 14:10:36 UTC
When she woke, Russia was stooped down to be face-level and her gag had been removed. She was still tied to the table, and she could feel semen spilling out of her sore arse and sliding down her legs. She stared at him through what appeared to be a haze, her tongue dry and feeling awkward In her mouth.
“Little slut, how are you feeling?” Russia asked, smiling sweetly, again.
“Fucked.” She grunted, voice hoarse and throat dry. “And I’m not a slut, you freak.”
“Ah, good!” Russia started, ignoring her denial and the insult. “Are you ready for the next one?” he asked, eyes wide. “But I thought I would have that cute ass first. Now that Denmark has stretched you out a bit, I think I should fit.”
Prussia’s eyes went wide and she shook her head quickly, a low whimper pouring from her lips. “No. Please, no. I can’t… No more.”
Russia arched a brow and pouted, “But it has been only five men, Kaliningradskaya. I thought for certain you would be able to take more. There are others waiting, you know.”
The albino shook her head again, moisture gathering in her eyes once more. “Please, don’t… I’m so sore…”
Russia laughed shortly and shrugged, seeming to think about it. “Tell me then, who do you belong to?”
Prussia frowned, shaking her head, “Nobody, you piece of shit.”
“Really?” the large man asked, tilting his head to one side. “But did I not tie you down and give you to the other nations?”
“Doesn’t mean you own me. Nobody owns me. And not even fucking me senseless will make me say that you do.” She snapped.
“Hmm. Then I suppose we have the rest of the night to, ah, how you said, fuck you senseless!”
*****
THE END.
No seriously. The end. Depending on the sort of feedback I get, I might write a sequel.
But when I started writing this I was intent on writing it start to finish ( because I have a bad habit of not finishing fics if I step away from them at all ). So I did! I stopped myself before I got too carried away, though, because I'd been writing for, like, five hours straight or something.
Oh, and if you DO end up wanting more, please also tell me what other nations you want to jump this Prussia train, haha. <3;
This is everything I could have asked for from this prompt, my goodness... I feeel bad for Prussia but... *fans self* And the anal was a surprise, but not an unpleasant one, I have a secret kink for fem!anal >.> And your writing style is perfect, you keep everyone as relatively IC as you can with a prompt of this nature and it is just, plain, hot.
I personally would love a sequel, if you have the time to. Other nations to suggest... urm... Austria, Mangary (if you wanna switch up Hungary's gender, though not sure if Russia would legit let him since he's be a soviet captive too, your choice of course!), Boylarus, America, Australia, other Nordics... dfhuk XD;; I'll shut up now.
It always makes me happy to see comments on my writing style and characters being IC. ( Which, omg, so difficult for this particular prompt. xD )
I'll make a note of your suggestions and keep them in mind! I will likely do a sequel, but it will probably be a while, as I'll want to sit and write it from start-to-finish, again!
Re: Property [ 7/7 ]
anonymous
July 5 2011, 20:31:01 UTC
So hot. And I really have to commend you for remembering that a guy can't just shove his dick in all willy nilly, guys need lube to make it pleasurable the same as women do. I <3 realism with sex scenes in fic.
One thing that really stood out to me was the contrast between each nation when they were fucking Prussia, who was rough and who gentle, and especially with Spain who didn't seem to catch on it was non-consensual. The detail with the sex really made this fic awesome.
Re: Property [ 7/7 ]
anonymous
July 6 2011, 01:47:34 UTC
That was amazing. I'm not big on non-con but your writing made it worth it. I'm bookmarking this for later...alone time. Prussia has a lot of balls to refuse Russia after that. If you do write a sequel, which I would very much like, I'd loveeee to see Romano. Canada and/or America would be interesting too.
Re: Property [ 7/7 ]
anonymous
July 6 2011, 03:32:53 UTC
Out of curiousity, I was just wondering why Spain was invited to join in since Franco-era Spain was unofficially an ally of Germany and an enemy of the Soviet Union?
Ah, I see! I was thinking it was a post-war punishment sort of thing...I was going to suggest the Netherlands and Norway if you were to write a sequel since they were both invaded by Germany, but what the hell- I'd love to see the Netherlands if you do a sequel and even Norway (who I don't think has ever had heterosexual sex on this kink meme before ><)
Re: Property [ 7/7 ]
anonymous
July 6 2011, 03:57:07 UTC
Seeeeequeeeeeellll........ Seeeeeeequelllllll....... The sequel zombies are coming for your seeeeeequuuueel.....
*ahem*
All creeping aside, this was really really good anon. Like really hot. Totally camping out to see if you do end up writing a sequel. I mean, how could you leave us right there when there is more fucking to be had? Also, kudos to you for writing this all in one sitting. I'm the same when it comes to writing habits. If I stop, I pretty much stop for good.
“Little slut, how are you feeling?” Russia asked, smiling sweetly, again.
“Fucked.” She grunted, voice hoarse and throat dry. “And I’m not a slut, you freak.”
“Ah, good!” Russia started, ignoring her denial and the insult. “Are you ready for the next one?” he asked, eyes wide. “But I thought I would have that cute ass first. Now that Denmark has stretched you out a bit, I think I should fit.”
Prussia’s eyes went wide and she shook her head quickly, a low whimper pouring from her lips. “No. Please, no. I can’t… No more.”
Russia arched a brow and pouted, “But it has been only five men, Kaliningradskaya. I thought for certain you would be able to take more. There are others waiting, you know.”
The albino shook her head again, moisture gathering in her eyes once more. “Please, don’t… I’m so sore…”
Russia laughed shortly and shrugged, seeming to think about it. “Tell me then, who do you belong to?”
Prussia frowned, shaking her head, “Nobody, you piece of shit.”
“Really?” the large man asked, tilting his head to one side. “But did I not tie you down and give you to the other nations?”
“Doesn’t mean you own me. Nobody owns me. And not even fucking me senseless will make me say that you do.” She snapped.
“Hmm. Then I suppose we have the rest of the night to, ah, how you said, fuck you senseless!”
*****
THE END.
No seriously. The end.
Depending on the sort of feedback I get, I might write a sequel.
But when I started writing this I was intent on writing it start to finish ( because I have a bad habit of not finishing fics if I step away from them at all ). So I did! I stopped myself before I got too carried away, though, because I'd been writing for, like, five hours straight or something.
Oh, and if you DO end up wanting more, please also tell me what other nations you want to jump this Prussia train, haha. <3;
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This is everything I could have asked for from this prompt, my goodness... I feeel bad for Prussia but... *fans self* And the anal was a surprise, but not an unpleasant one, I have a secret kink for fem!anal >.> And your writing style is perfect, you keep everyone as relatively IC as you can with a prompt of this nature and it is just, plain, hot.
I personally would love a sequel, if you have the time to. Other nations to suggest... urm... Austria, Mangary (if you wanna switch up Hungary's gender, though not sure if Russia would legit let him since he's be a soviet captive too, your choice of course!), Boylarus, America, Australia, other Nordics... dfhuk XD;; I'll shut up now.
Thank you for the wonderful fill!
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It always makes me happy to see comments on my writing style and characters being IC. ( Which, omg, so difficult for this particular prompt. xD )
I'll make a note of your suggestions and keep them in mind! I will likely do a sequel, but it will probably be a while, as I'll want to sit and write it from start-to-finish, again!
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seconding OP for a sequel!
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One thing that really stood out to me was the contrast between each nation when they were fucking Prussia, who was rough and who gentle, and especially with Spain who didn't seem to catch on it was non-consensual. The detail with the sex really made this fic awesome.
More please!
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So pleased you enjoyed it!
And yeah... Spain. Idek. >w
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Thank you for your comment!
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It was just "there is a world meeting and, HEY, LET'S GRAB ANYBODY THAT WANTS TO PLAY" sorta thing. xD;
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*ahem*
All creeping aside, this was really really good anon. Like really hot. Totally camping out to see if you do end up writing a sequel. I mean, how could you leave us right there when there is more fucking to be had? Also, kudos to you for writing this all in one sitting. I'm the same when it comes to writing habits. If I stop, I pretty much stop for good.
Also, I love you forever.
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And aodibliaushflusef zombies. :c
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Adding to the pleas for a sequel! Pretty please good anon!
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