Substitutes - 1c/??
anonymous
July 4 2011, 00:56:15 UTC
“I. Will. Kill. You.” America growled, meeting Russia's eyes with an icy glare before the quietly sobbing Canada drew his attention. “Matt?! I'm right here Matt. I won't let him touch you again. I'll- I'll protect you.” The false bravado in his voice had Russia tilting his head in curiosity, even as his use of Canada's name drew a frown.
“You still think I am fooled by your lies?”
“You are a sick freak, and I would sooner die than play along with your game.” America winced as Russia squeezed his dislocated shoulder. “Get away from me!”
“I think Latvii still has a lesson to learn.” Russia squeezed harder, his cold smile growing as America gasped and shuddered away from his touch.
“M'not your fuckin' Latvy!” America spat, his anger very nearly hiding the helplessness in his eyes. There was nothing he could do, just as there had been nothing he had been able to do for Canada. “I am the United States of America, and nothing you do to me will change that.”
Instead, Russia laughed. “You want to be strong like Amerika, yes? Silly Latvii, thinking that something like this-” Russia plucked the wire-framed lenses from America's face “will make him strong.” Russia's fingers closed with a crunch of metal bending and glass cracking, opening to let the mangled glasses drop to the floor. “You are mine. Litva is mine. You will give up your hopeless fantasy, yes?”
“Screw you!” America shifted his weight to one foot, lashing out and catching Russia right in the knee with the other.
Russia stumbled backwards, catching himself before he fell. “I think, perhaps later. Right now, you have a lesson to learn.” Russia reached for the whip, his smile dark and menacing. “Have you ever been skinned alive?”
America just growled, tensing for the pain he knew was coming.
Russia raised the lash over America's chest, not even bothering to remove his shirt. “You still refuse to comply?”
“You still refuse to stop being an insane asshole?”
“So be it.” Russia brought the whip down with a flick of his wrists. Only it didn't come, the leather thongs caught behind him in the shackled hands of a still trembling Canada.
“I-I won't let you hurt him!” Canada pulled at the lash, but Russia tightened his grip and pulled back.
“Matt! Just let him, I'll be okay!” America cried, his eyes wide as Russia tugged the lash from Canada's hands, as Canada gasped with pain, his hands opening to reveal where the wire had sliced them open. “Matt!”
“You will take his punishment instead?” Russia shoved Canada to the ground, looming over him with the whip in hand.
“No!” America's cries went unheard, as Canada nodded, smiling weakly at America. “Don't do this! Don't you dare do this!”
Then the whip fell, and Canada's screams drowned out America's protests.
** Can you tell which twin I like best? I have this horrible feeling that I made Canada too much of a wimp. Oh well. This isn't perfect, but it's been sitting unfinished on my computer for far too long, so I posted this to give me a reason to finish it. As such updates may be slow.
Re: Substitutes - 1c/??
anonymous
July 8 2011, 05:37:21 UTC
Eeeee poor Canada ;~; And yet...this type of fic is exactly what I've wanted for awhile. I should feel bad, but I really don't.
But, in response to your concerns, I seriously don't think you made Canada that wimpy at all. I was actually really impressed with how you'd characterized him! Alot of the fandom gives him a very weak nature in these fanfiction, but you didn't at all.
I really hope you continue to update this! It is really good so far!
“You still think I am fooled by your lies?”
“You are a sick freak, and I would sooner die than play along with your game.” America winced as Russia squeezed his dislocated shoulder. “Get away from me!”
“I think Latvii still has a lesson to learn.” Russia squeezed harder, his cold smile growing as America gasped and shuddered away from his touch.
“M'not your fuckin' Latvy!” America spat, his anger very nearly hiding the helplessness in his eyes. There was nothing he could do, just as there had been nothing he had been able to do for Canada. “I am the United States of America, and nothing you do to me will change that.”
Instead, Russia laughed. “You want to be strong like Amerika, yes? Silly Latvii, thinking that something like this-” Russia plucked the wire-framed lenses from America's face “will make him strong.” Russia's fingers closed with a crunch of metal bending and glass cracking, opening to let the mangled glasses drop to the floor. “You are mine. Litva is mine. You will give up your hopeless fantasy, yes?”
“Screw you!” America shifted his weight to one foot, lashing out and catching Russia right in the knee with the other.
Russia stumbled backwards, catching himself before he fell. “I think, perhaps later. Right now, you have a lesson to learn.” Russia reached for the whip, his smile dark and menacing. “Have you ever been skinned alive?”
America just growled, tensing for the pain he knew was coming.
Russia raised the lash over America's chest, not even bothering to remove his shirt. “You still refuse to comply?”
“You still refuse to stop being an insane asshole?”
“So be it.” Russia brought the whip down with a flick of his wrists. Only it didn't come, the leather thongs caught behind him in the shackled hands of a still trembling Canada.
“I-I won't let you hurt him!” Canada pulled at the lash, but Russia tightened his grip and pulled back.
“Matt! Just let him, I'll be okay!” America cried, his eyes wide as Russia tugged the lash from Canada's hands, as Canada gasped with pain, his hands opening to reveal where the wire had sliced them open. “Matt!”
“You will take his punishment instead?” Russia shoved Canada to the ground, looming over him with the whip in hand.
“No!” America's cries went unheard, as Canada nodded, smiling weakly at America. “Don't do this! Don't you dare do this!”
Then the whip fell, and Canada's screams drowned out America's protests.
**
Can you tell which twin I like best?
I have this horrible feeling that I made Canada too much of a wimp. Oh well. This isn't perfect, but it's been sitting unfinished on my computer for far too long, so I posted this to give me a reason to finish it. As such updates may be slow.
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More? please tell me the twins get free
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MATTIE! ALFRED!
Don't worry! I'll be the hero, and I'll save both of you! ;__; Ohgodohgodohgod..
They must get free!
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I do hope to see more. And I don't think Canada was to much of a wimp! He sacrificed himself to save his brother afterall.
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I'm also mean to characters I like. >_>;;
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But, in response to your concerns, I seriously don't think you made Canada that wimpy at all. I was actually really impressed with how you'd characterized him! Alot of the fandom gives him a very weak nature in these fanfiction, but you didn't at all.
I really hope you continue to update this! It is really good so far!
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