Re: Wherever You May Go
anonymous
May 24 2011, 15:42:28 UTC
It took me a couple of moments to figure out how the format worked, but when I did... I think I might love you, anon. This was so IC and funny and tender at the same time. So many little in-character snarky lulz, and yet the depth of their love really came through.
... When he wants something, normally.
Ouch. That burns, Artie. And it's totally not true. I send you chocolate when I want something.
Lol, I love how he admits it. And the language/grammar snark, of course. One question: when England says 'you're a bit of an ass,' does he mean as in 'silly donkey?' If he's comparing America to somebody's rear end, and you're trying to emphasise the difference between the British and the Americans, he really ought to say 'arse.' But it's a tiny criticism, and overall I love this fic(Especially the part where England says about America getting insecure, because I can totally relate to that, and the idea of England being able to read the article over and over, because it really brought home how much America loves him...okay, I really am shutting up now).
I think I might love you, anon. This was so IC and funny and tender at the same time. So many little in-character snarky lulz, and yet the depth of their love really came through.
... When he wants something, normally.
Ouch. That burns, Artie. And it's totally not true. I send you chocolate when I want something.
Lol, I love how he admits it. And the language/grammar snark, of course. One question: when England says 'you're a bit of an ass,' does he mean as in 'silly donkey?' If he's comparing America to somebody's rear end, and you're trying to emphasise the difference between the British and the Americans, he really ought to say 'arse.' But it's a tiny criticism, and overall I love this fic(Especially the part where England says about America getting insecure, because I can totally relate to that, and the idea of England being able to read the article over and over, because it really brought home how much America loves him...okay, I really am shutting up now).
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