Wit Of The Staircase 80/?
anonymous
May 25 2011, 09:15:13 UTC
"Jeez, Matthieu-" Francis gasped as Matthew finally reached the tip. Slow and steady. He really was rubbing off on Francis, too. Maybe next he'd start saying 'eh'.
It was hard to focus with the way Francis was pumping him. His was to a different rhythm. Faster, with slight, sensual touches which made it hard not to just cream his pants on contact. Really, just the thought of Francis' hands on him made Matthew want to come.
Maybe he had a hand fetish. Or maybe Francis just really had nice hands. They were graceful, more elegant than most men's without being outright feminine. A pianist's hands with long fingers. The way he could dexterously jack someone was just amazing. So Matthew was actually surprised when it was Francis who began to shudder, jutting his hips into Matthew's grip in a reflexive pre-climax move. Francis groaned in the back of his throat and nuzzled against Matthew's neck when he came. Matthew felt the warm come ooze out Francis' fingers only relaxed somewhat, as he regarded reaching orgasm as a competitive sport. A few amazing seconds later, Francis had ensured that Matthew came.
They were leaning against each other, still panting as Edith Piaf played on.
"Ahhhh... I love your hands," Francis sighed.
"Y-you too, huh?"
"Mmm?" Francis asked. His voice was breathy in that post-coital way which made Matthew feel like he could become hard again all over again.
"Nothing," Matthew said.
"Ah. I told you we wouldn't get walked in on," Francis murmured.
"Yeah, you're always right," Matthew said. He was only half sarcastic. Really.
"Good of you to realize it," Francis said. He rested his head on Matthew's shoulder and just stayed there. The Edith Piaf playlist went to another song. Matthew wasn't sure he was going to be able to listen to Edith Piaf the same. He'd always remember this night. It'd be awkward and nostalgic, and remind him of the scent of cigarettes and sex.
Re: Wit Of The Staircase 80/?
anonymous
May 25 2011, 13:39:57 UTC
...I literally squealed when I got the e-mail that this thread had updated. <3 Totally. Squealed. And this was wonderful and eeee. <3 I'm glad it's being continued. Also, I'm glad that if it had to be on hiatus, it was for a good cause. <3
Re: Wit Of The Staircase 80/?
anonymous
May 25 2011, 20:08:46 UTC
OH MY LORD! an update! I am so happy anon I can't even express my joy. This is one of my favorite stories on the meme and I had feared you had abandoned it. Thank you so much for continuing! Have my first born
Aww, thank you anon ♥ I'm happy for your review, and glad this made you happy ♥
Nope! I'm never dropping this. I've already written over 177 pages, so I'm in it until the end. I have it all plotted out until the end, actually (and have a lot of the end written, but I need to rewrite it a bit)
But sometimes life gets the best of me and I'm not able to update it for a while. I'm always thinking of coming back, though! I've been better about doing WIPS as of late, and I definitely should have an update next month ♥
Re: Wit Of The Staircase 80/?
anonymous
May 26 2011, 00:48:39 UTC
OH MY GOD oh my god you updated. My day is made. And I was having a pretty good day too but this just makes it awesome. I have been waiting for an update on this for SO LONG.
Authoranon, you are everything I want to be in a fanfic writer. Your characterization is //gorgeous// your descriptions are so memorable. (And if the action might be a bit slow, I for one have no complaints. X3)
Re: Wit Of The Staircase 80/?
anonymous
May 26 2011, 05:38:05 UTC
I'm sorry for the wait, anon! Life got crazy there for a minute. I kept wanting to write it, but stuff came up and I wasn't able to update. D: In the end it was someone's birthday that made me sit down and finish it.
Awww, thank you! ♥ I'll for sure get one out next month. After that, I hope to keep up at at least once per month updates ♥
Re: Wit Of The Staircase 80/?
anonymous
May 26 2011, 03:48:41 UTC
I AM THE AMAZING ANON-NOT-SO-ANON WHO LOVES YOU AND GIVES YOU REVIEWS FILLED WITH LOVE AND LOVE AND A BIT OF LOVE.
I'm so so so happy with this update!! Thank you so much ;//v//; kaljsklasj this is the best earliest birthday gift ever. I had a terrible day, I'm sick and I didn't do well on my exam, so I wanted to kill everything and kick a puppy, but this made me so happy, sweetheart <3! Thank you again!
Awwwn, I wanted them to dance (I love how they dance in your fics -//v//- it's just so unf unf and bawwww at same. I seriously don't get how you manage to do that, I'm starting to think a. You do miracles or b. You sold your soul to devil. Okay, no -cuddles-) more at the party, but FFF GILBERT'S PRANK WAS JUST BEAUTIFUL XDDDDD I love how he just hit the weak spot of Francis.
Mattie carrying a lighter for Francis was something I liked too, I love how he's always thinking of little details like that one just for him... And the part where he said Francis has changed too moved my heart ;A; because it's true and it's beautiful and slkdjkdsls brb crying.
Public sex is always necessary, silly Matthew, how dare you to ask it again. Awn, those things like listening to Edith Piaf's while doing it is nice <3 and the reference to the hands just skjdsklds perfect /has a thing for Francis' hands
AND I LOVED THIS AND I LOVE EVERYTHING THAT COMES FROM YOUR HAND ;A; /CLINGS Thank you so much again! <33 /joins the camp and installs a pink tent somewhere there.
They were technically slated to dance, but I figured that'd be too much given the fact that they danced earlier. they have a slow dance later on, though. I promise XD
Aww, thank you for your nice review! I always loved you guy's reviews so much. You two are so sweet. ♥
Re: Wit Of The Staircase 80/?
anonymous
May 26 2011, 14:55:41 UTC
YOU'RE BACK. *fangasm*
I love this fic so much. Seriously, with every chapter it just gets better and better...I think it's the characterization, and the tiny little details that do it for me; like Matthew carrying a lighter round, and giving Francis his cigarettes.
I also like how, although they're clearly happy together, you occasionally drop the tiniest hints of dissatisfaction. Like:
"-Didn't exactly work? Didn't exactly work? That song was like taking the Mona Lisa and shitting upon it and trying to call it art!"
Matthew patted Francis on the shoulder. "Hey, I'm on your side here."
I know it's just a little thing, and Francis acknowledges that he is "on his side" afterwards, but it makes their whole relationship more realistic and believable.
Anyway, it's just wonderful, and I'm so glad you updated. Can't wait for more!
It was hard to focus with the way Francis was pumping him. His was to a different rhythm. Faster, with slight, sensual touches which made it hard not to just cream his pants on contact. Really, just the thought of Francis' hands on him made Matthew want to come.
Maybe he had a hand fetish. Or maybe Francis just really had nice hands. They were graceful, more elegant than most men's without being outright feminine. A pianist's hands with long fingers. The way he could dexterously jack someone was just amazing. So Matthew was actually surprised when it was Francis who began to shudder, jutting his hips into Matthew's grip in a reflexive pre-climax move. Francis groaned in the back of his throat and nuzzled against Matthew's neck when he came. Matthew felt the warm come ooze out Francis' fingers only relaxed somewhat, as he regarded reaching orgasm as a competitive sport. A few amazing seconds later, Francis had ensured that Matthew came.
They were leaning against each other, still panting as Edith Piaf played on.
"Ahhhh... I love your hands," Francis sighed.
"Y-you too, huh?"
"Mmm?" Francis asked. His voice was breathy in that post-coital way which made Matthew feel like he could become hard again all over again.
"Nothing," Matthew said.
"Ah. I told you we wouldn't get walked in on," Francis murmured.
"Yeah, you're always right," Matthew said. He was only half sarcastic. Really.
"Good of you to realize it," Francis said. He rested his head on Matthew's shoulder and just stayed there. The Edith Piaf playlist went to another song. Matthew wasn't sure he was going to be able to listen to Edith Piaf the same. He'd always remember this night. It'd be awkward and nostalgic, and remind him of the scent of cigarettes and sex.
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Nope! I'm never dropping this. I've already written over 177 pages, so I'm in it until the end. I have it all plotted out until the end, actually (and have a lot of the end written, but I need to rewrite it a bit)
But sometimes life gets the best of me and I'm not able to update it for a while. I'm always thinking of coming back, though! I've been better about doing WIPS as of late, and I definitely should have an update next month ♥
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Authoranon, you are everything I want to be in a fanfic writer. Your characterization is //gorgeous// your descriptions are so memorable. (And if the action might be a bit slow, I for one have no complaints. X3)
Write more, write more! :) *encouragement encouragement*
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Awww, thank you! ♥ I'll for sure get one out next month. After that, I hope to keep up at at least once per month updates ♥
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I'm so so so happy with this update!! Thank you so much ;//v//; kaljsklasj this is the best earliest birthday gift ever. I had a terrible day, I'm sick and I didn't do well on my exam, so I wanted to kill everything and kick a puppy, but this made me so happy, sweetheart <3! Thank you again!
Awwwn, I wanted them to dance (I love how they dance in your fics -//v//- it's just so unf unf and bawwww at same. I seriously don't get how you manage to do that, I'm starting to think a. You do miracles or b. You sold your soul to devil. Okay, no -cuddles-) more at the party, but FFF GILBERT'S PRANK WAS JUST BEAUTIFUL XDDDDD I love how he just hit the weak spot of Francis.
Mattie carrying a lighter for Francis was something I liked too, I love how he's always thinking of little details like that one just for him... And the part where he said Francis has changed too moved my heart ;A; because it's true and it's beautiful and slkdjkdsls brb crying.
Public sex is always necessary, silly Matthew, how dare you to ask it again. Awn, those things like listening to Edith Piaf's while doing it is nice <3 and the reference to the hands just skjdsklds perfect /has a thing for Francis' hands
AND I LOVED THIS AND I LOVE EVERYTHING THAT COMES FROM YOUR HAND ;A; /CLINGS
Thank you so much again! <33 /joins the camp and installs a pink tent somewhere there.
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Aww, thank you for your nice review! I always loved you guy's reviews so much. You two are so sweet. ♥
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I love this fic so much. Seriously, with every chapter it just gets better and better...I think it's the characterization, and the tiny little details that do it for me; like Matthew carrying a lighter round, and giving Francis his cigarettes.
I also like how, although they're clearly happy together, you occasionally drop the tiniest hints of dissatisfaction. Like:
"-Didn't exactly work? Didn't exactly work? That song was like taking the Mona Lisa and shitting upon it and trying to call it art!"
Matthew patted Francis on the shoulder. "Hey, I'm on your side here."
I know it's just a little thing, and Francis acknowledges that he is "on his side" afterwards, but it makes their whole relationship more realistic and believable.
Anyway, it's just wonderful, and I'm so glad you updated. Can't wait for more!
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