Re: [Part 5] "Igiko and Alfred plz" FML 1b/1 (maybe)
anonymous
April 7 2011, 14:51:19 UTC
The toy inside her immediately started to shudder almost violently, causing Elizabeth to scream out in a mixture of pain and pleasure-they’ve almost become synonymous at this point. For about three hours, Alfred had been putting her through this torture, even while he wasn’t in the dungeon, and he always seemed to know when she’d be so close to her release, because he would stop almost as soon as he’d begun. It was a torture that was sweet and pleasurable, but painful because there was no end, no climax.
She squirmed and arched, trying to get the toy to brush against her sweet spot-just so this could all be over with, of course!-but Alfred held onto the handle, making sure that he would be the one in control. Elizabeth moaned and looked up at him again, her cheeks blushing harder and her eyes misted over.
“P-please, Alfred. Stop this…!”
Alfred stared down at the panting woman with icy blue eyes and a small smirk.
“I’ll be good, I swear I will!”
With that said, his eyes glinted predatorily behind Texas, and he licked his lips.
“Well, I guess you have been pretty good to me so far, since you didn’t make noise when my brother visited today.” Alfred seemed to consider before he smiled brightly. “Okay!”
The moan Elizabeth let out when the vibrator was turned off and pulled out of her was one of relief-not longing, because she suddenly felt empty…
“But, in return, you’ll have to do something for me.”
Her heart thudded.
Alfred pulled off of her and stood up before walking around to stand in front of her. Then he sat down in the chair behind him, almost as if it was his throne. He tugged on the leash to pull Elizabeth’s head back, so he could stare straight into her vibrant, still somewhat defiant eyes.
“Sit up,” he ordered.
Elizabeth gulped, but continued to glare up at him. When her leash was tugged on harder, as a subtle warning, she sat upright on her thighs, her flush spreading to the rest of her bare body.
Alfred smiled and leaned forward to cup her chin as he observed her. He took in the faded teeth marks on her neck, little souvenirs he’d given her the night before; the way her long hair stuck to her skin, flowing over her shoulders; how her green eyes gleamed with that beautiful anger of hers, as well as another emotion she’d been trying to repress during the course of her stay in the dungeon…
His grin widened, revealing white, gleaming teeth, and he let go of her before sitting back in his chair, nodding towards the bulge in his pants.
Elizabeth shifted her glare from him to his crotch and her throat went dry. With her face glowing red, she leaned forward, opening her mouth wide so she could use her teeth to…
“…London Calling,” Joe Strummer and the rest of The Clash cried out, ruining the atmosphere. “Now, don’t look to us! Phony Beatlemania has bitten the dust…!”
“Ah, fuck,” Alfred glared hatefully up at the ceiling, while Elizabeth just blinked.
Re: [Part 5] "Igiko and Alfred plz" FML 1c/1 (maybe)
anonymous
April 7 2011, 14:54:09 UTC
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When England opened her eyes, she was lying in her bed-alone-with The Clash’s song continuing to play from her phone alarm. Her long Beatles t-shirt had ridden up in the night to reveal her lower body, which was currently tangled in the sheets.
As she sat up, England became very aware of the liquid heat pooling in her lower abdomen-as well as a sense of emptiness inside her that made her heart ache (as well as the rest of her body).
Her green eyes caught sight of a comic book on the floor, one that Japan had given her-a doujin, he’d called it.
One that had a picture of a smirking America grasping her at the nape of her neck, pulling her head back as her cheeks flushed and her eyes clenched closed with pleasure, that damned collar still wrapped around her neck…
…BUGGER.
With a groan she fell back on her pillow, her eyes closed and her cheeks flushed with shame.
I…am in huge trouble.
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Might continue this, but I'm not sure. Please send feedback!
Re: [Part 5] "Igiko and Alfred plz" FML 1c/1 (maybe)
anonymous
April 7 2011, 16:12:04 UTC
I'm also feeling a little frustrated, although I love the fact that she woke up kind of ashamed as well as ridiculously turned on and frustrated. ... I sound like such a terrible person.
Unf, I love all the powerplay her subconcious threw in after reading that doujinshi; too bad her subconscious didn't remember that the best way to "torture" a female partner is to make her come until she's begging you to stop, then make her come until she thinks she can't come anymore, then make her come till she can't think at all. ;D
Also, leather gloves are always A++, author!anon. XD
I don't know where all the het and yuri D/s and BDSM is coming from, but I'm glad it's appearing on my meme. <3 (Hell, after this, that Hungary/Belgium D/s, and Canada/New Zealand, all I need is for somebody to fill that Hungary/England request and my life will be complete. Dear god, everyone writing these rocks. :D)
Uh, if you continue, we'll all offer up souls, children, panties, etc.? Pretty please? *_* (Or if you can't continue, please keep writing for my meme. Dear god. *A*)
"too bad her subconscious didn't remember that the best way to "torture" a female partner is to make her come until she's begging you to stop, then make her come until she thinks she can't come anymore, then make her come till she can't think at all. ;D"
Um...oops?
Lol, seriously, though, I'm sorry. I was aiming for the orgasm denial angle, but I obviously failed. (T-T OTL)
Re: Author!Anon
anonymous
April 7 2011, 21:27:58 UTC
Ah, no! OTL I wasn't trying to "correct" your story or something! I was just hoping that her dreams weren't only orgasm denial. I was hoping to inspire more, actually. ;D Selfish motives are selfish, yeah?
But no, you didn't fail at all; the orgasm denial was actually really hot. <3 Although I am pretty amused that her own subconscious is denying her; that's kind of weirdly masochistic. LOL
Re: Author!Anon
anonymous
April 8 2011, 00:07:35 UTC
Lol, not at all. Actually, I do have some ideas now (shifty eyes)...
Well, I'm glad I didn't fail, then. This was actually my first time writing anything involving BDSM, so if I continue, I can't promise it to be completely accurate of the lifestyle. But from yours and everyone else's reactions, I seemed to have done a pretty good job so far. (puffs out chest proudly)
As for her masochistic subconscious, well...I'm not saying a thing. ^///^
Re: [Part 5] "Igiko and Alfred plz" FML 1c/1 (maybe)
anonymous
April 7 2011, 16:18:35 UTC
Oh God...I've been hoping for an America/Igiko fic like this for so long... I think that you should totally continue this. I'd love to see were it goes from here~
Re: [Part 5] "Igiko and Alfred plz" FML 1c/1 (maybe)
anonymous
April 7 2011, 22:13:33 UTC
/fans self
Wow- it's so damn good to see some bondage het in here! Fem!England's dreams are quite heated and quite good; she needs to keep a dream diary... or maybe get a vibrator for herself.
I would love to see this continued, if the muse keeps bothering you.
She squirmed and arched, trying to get the toy to brush against her sweet spot-just so this could all be over with, of course!-but Alfred held onto the handle, making sure that he would be the one in control. Elizabeth moaned and looked up at him again, her cheeks blushing harder and her eyes misted over.
“P-please, Alfred. Stop this…!”
Alfred stared down at the panting woman with icy blue eyes and a small smirk.
“I’ll be good, I swear I will!”
With that said, his eyes glinted predatorily behind Texas, and he licked his lips.
“Well, I guess you have been pretty good to me so far, since you didn’t make noise when my brother visited today.” Alfred seemed to consider before he smiled brightly. “Okay!”
The moan Elizabeth let out when the vibrator was turned off and pulled out of her was one of relief-not longing, because she suddenly felt empty…
“But, in return, you’ll have to do something for me.”
Her heart thudded.
Alfred pulled off of her and stood up before walking around to stand in front of her. Then he sat down in the chair behind him, almost as if it was his throne. He tugged on the leash to pull Elizabeth’s head back, so he could stare straight into her vibrant, still somewhat defiant eyes.
“Sit up,” he ordered.
Elizabeth gulped, but continued to glare up at him. When her leash was tugged on harder, as a subtle warning, she sat upright on her thighs, her flush spreading to the rest of her bare body.
Alfred smiled and leaned forward to cup her chin as he observed her. He took in the faded teeth marks on her neck, little souvenirs he’d given her the night before; the way her long hair stuck to her skin, flowing over her shoulders; how her green eyes gleamed with that beautiful anger of hers, as well as another emotion she’d been trying to repress during the course of her stay in the dungeon…
His grin widened, revealing white, gleaming teeth, and he let go of her before sitting back in his chair, nodding towards the bulge in his pants.
Elizabeth shifted her glare from him to his crotch and her throat went dry. With her face glowing red, she leaned forward, opening her mouth wide so she could use her teeth to…
“…London Calling,” Joe Strummer and the rest of The Clash cried out, ruining the atmosphere. “Now, don’t look to us! Phony Beatlemania has bitten the dust…!”
“Ah, fuck,” Alfred glared hatefully up at the ceiling, while Elizabeth just blinked.
Wait…What?
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When England opened her eyes, she was lying in her bed-alone-with The Clash’s song continuing to play from her phone alarm. Her long Beatles t-shirt had ridden up in the night to reveal her lower body, which was currently tangled in the sheets.
As she sat up, England became very aware of the liquid heat pooling in her lower abdomen-as well as a sense of emptiness inside her that made her heart ache (as well as the rest of her body).
Her green eyes caught sight of a comic book on the floor, one that Japan had given her-a doujin, he’d called it.
One that had a picture of a smirking America grasping her at the nape of her neck, pulling her head back as her cheeks flushed and her eyes clenched closed with pleasure, that damned collar still wrapped around her neck…
…BUGGER.
With a groan she fell back on her pillow, her eyes closed and her cheeks flushed with shame.
I…am in huge trouble.
--
Might continue this, but I'm not sure. Please send feedback!
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Unf, I love all the powerplay her subconcious threw in after reading that doujinshi; too bad her subconscious didn't remember that the best way to "torture" a female partner is to make her come until she's begging you to stop, then make her come until she thinks she can't come anymore, then make her come till she can't think at all. ;D
Also, leather gloves are always A++, author!anon. XD
I don't know where all the het and yuri D/s and BDSM is coming from, but I'm glad it's appearing on my meme. <3 (Hell, after this, that Hungary/Belgium D/s, and Canada/New Zealand, all I need is for somebody to fill that Hungary/England request and my life will be complete. Dear god, everyone writing these rocks. :D)
Uh, if you continue, we'll all offer up souls, children, panties, etc.? Pretty please? *_* (Or if you can't continue, please keep writing for my meme. Dear god. *A*)
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Um...oops?
Lol, seriously, though, I'm sorry. I was aiming for the orgasm denial angle, but I obviously failed. (T-T OTL)
I'm glad you liked it though. Thank you! ^^
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But no, you didn't fail at all; the orgasm denial was actually really hot. <3 Although I am pretty amused that her own subconscious is denying her; that's kind of weirdly masochistic. LOL
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Well, I'm glad I didn't fail, then. This was actually my first time writing anything involving BDSM, so if I continue, I can't promise it to be completely accurate of the lifestyle. But from yours and everyone else's reactions, I seemed to have done a pretty good job so far. (puffs out chest proudly)
As for her masochistic subconscious, well...I'm not saying a thing. ^///^
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I think that you should totally continue this. I'd love to see were it goes from here~
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Wow- it's so damn good to see some bondage het in here! Fem!England's dreams are quite heated and quite good; she needs to keep a dream diary... or maybe get a vibrator for herself.
I would love to see this continued, if the muse keeps bothering you.
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