Hated [part 12b/12]
anonymous
March 5 2011, 06:51:05 UTC
Once they clean up and change into less bloody clothes, Gilbert and Antonio head for Marianne’s house. Her father lets them in after they explain, but it takes a little more convincing to get Marianne to open her bedroom door. She does eventually and looks startled to see her friends injured so, and invites them to stay a while.
“We all look pretty awful, don’t we?” she says quietly. She is thin and worn and pale, her nearly as translucent, her eyes bloodshot from crying. “I have been sick, Gil, Toni. I could not even eat.”
They know.
“The doctor says I will get better soon. I hope so, I am tired of looking ugly.”
“You’re not ugly, Marianne,” Antonio assures her. “You never were.”
“Of course not,” she murmurs, smiling weakly. “Thank you, for fighting for me. I will fight for you next time. All for one and one for all, isn’t that what we promised?”
They are too tired to do much else, and so they curl up together in bed, promptly falling asleep in each other’s arms. Marianne’s mother comes in to cover them with a blanket, kissing all three on their foreheads. When they wake up an hour later, they are starving, and Marianne’s father finally gets the big family dinner he had been wanting. Marianne still complains of her stomach hurting, but now it is from laughing too much, and she will be content with that.
When Gilbert and Antonio are about to, she asks if they had hurt Arthur too much.
“No, just enough, Marianne,” Gilbert replies, trying to not grin and split his lip again. Those two are still friends, after all, if in a very vague sense of the word.
“How gracious of you to spare him. I shall beat him up some more… after graduation photos.”
They wish her good night, and kiss her until Antonio’s mother calls to remind him of his curfew, and they kiss her some more just to make sure.
Ohhhh, that was really painful. ;_; And yet, the solidarity and love between the Bad Touch Trio was also so beautiful. Really, truly, thank YOU for writing.
Man, I hope Marianne beats the everloving shit out of Arthur. (Eh, that's not wrong of me... right?) I love that she once had a "tomboy phase". Actually, I'm pretty sure I love everything about your Marianne. ♥♥ (Also your Gilbert and Antonio. ♥)
Thank you again for such a well-done Gakuen Hetalia fic.
Re: Not OP, BTW
anonymous
March 5 2011, 18:22:54 UTC
Thank you for reading, anon. I just had a story to tell, and I'm so glad someone liked it. As painful as it is.
Haha, I didn't know if I ought to make England the villain, he's such a popular character, but with France, there can be only one enemy of that magnitude. Thanks again for commenting!
“We all look pretty awful, don’t we?” she says quietly. She is thin and worn and pale, her nearly as translucent, her eyes bloodshot from crying. “I have been sick, Gil, Toni. I could not even eat.”
They know.
“The doctor says I will get better soon. I hope so, I am tired of looking ugly.”
“You’re not ugly, Marianne,” Antonio assures her. “You never were.”
“Of course not,” she murmurs, smiling weakly. “Thank you, for fighting for me. I will fight for you next time. All for one and one for all, isn’t that what we promised?”
They are too tired to do much else, and so they curl up together in bed, promptly falling asleep in each other’s arms. Marianne’s mother comes in to cover them with a blanket, kissing all three on their foreheads. When they wake up an hour later, they are starving, and Marianne’s father finally gets the big family dinner he had been wanting. Marianne still complains of her stomach hurting, but now it is from laughing too much, and she will be content with that.
When Gilbert and Antonio are about to, she asks if they had hurt Arthur too much.
“No, just enough, Marianne,” Gilbert replies, trying to not grin and split his lip again. Those two are still friends, after all, if in a very vague sense of the word.
“How gracious of you to spare him. I shall beat him up some more… after graduation photos.”
They wish her good night, and kiss her until Antonio’s mother calls to remind him of his curfew, and they kiss her some more just to make sure.
[Thank you for reading.]
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Man, I hope Marianne beats the everloving shit out of Arthur. (Eh, that's not wrong of me... right?) I love that she once had a "tomboy phase". Actually, I'm pretty sure I love everything about your Marianne. ♥♥ (Also your Gilbert and Antonio. ♥)
Thank you again for such a well-done Gakuen Hetalia fic.
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Haha, I didn't know if I ought to make England the villain, he's such a popular character, but with France, there can be only one enemy of that magnitude. Thanks again for commenting!
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