True Part 6a/x
anonymous
February 24 2011, 00:27:33 UTC
Louise put her hands under the water faucet and allowed the cool water to go over her slightly burning hands.
Especially the knuckles, the knuckles were it was burning the most.
And she had to get the blood off her hands before first period started.
It had taken only a few moments to find Mark; Lovina had been on the rampage along side her. They quickly found him.
And they oh so quickly grabbed him, threw him in an area behind the school where there was no cameras, and commenced on beating the living crap out of him.
Without leaving that many bruises or visible scars.
Lovina however took the cake. She stepped on him repeatedly with her three-and-a-half inch heels.
In a place where Louise was now certain will never give him children.
He deserved it.
She looked over her hands and nodded. Completely clean. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- That was the most exciting that had happened today. There was no football practice so Louise spent her after school hours at the school newspaper. She was the editor after all.
And now she had to decide whether to allow Kiku’s drawing or his article into the newspaper because of a stingy principal who only allowed one part of the newspaper per person.
Louise sighed. The article was good but the drawing was something the students loved looking at. Those comics of his were a big hit.
However the article was also just as good.
Kiku said it didn’t matter to him what was placed in there. It was all up to her.
The door to the classroom opened up suddenly.
“Oh. Forgive me.” Arthur Kirkland leader of the newspaper and the senior president said. “I didn’t know you were in here.”
“Its alright.” she said before looking back at the two pieces of paper in front of her.
Re: True Part 6c/x
anonymous
February 24 2011, 00:30:02 UTC
“Alright.”
“Football team?”
“Alright. You look cute.”
“Thank you.”
“But…why is my sister showing the middle finger?”
“That’s what she likes to do.”
“I‘m going to have to talk to her.”
“Does that ever work?”
“No but it puts my mind at ease that I tried something. What about the clubs?”
“They seem alright.”
“Are we allowed to put their picture in this newspaper or in the next one?”
“I think it should be the next one, this month we had a lot of matches with other schools.”
“Alright then the next one.”
“I think we need to…”
“Louise are you free this weekend?” Arthur suddenly asked.
Louise looked up in surprise. “What?”
“Are you free this weekend?” he repeated.
“I think so.” she said hesitantly.
“Will you go on a date with me then?” he asked. “To the movies perhaps?”
A blush started to appear on her cheeks lightly. “I don’t know. Can I think about it?”
“Of course. Tomorrow?”
“Yeah. I‘ll let you know tomorrow.” ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Louise sat in a daze in her bed. She stared blankly at the wall.
Her brother came in her room at that moment.
“Hey West, I was thinking. About the downstairs living room, maybe we should…” he trailed off at seeing her blank face. “You okay?”
Louise slowly nodded. “Gilbert. I have a question.”
“Shoot.”
“What would you do if someone you knew for about three years, you worked beside, and kinda trusted a lot asked you out on a date?”
“…that would depend. How good of friends are you two?”
Louise shrugged. “We worked together for about three years. On the school newspaper. And his sister is on the football team with me.”
Re: True Part 6d/x
anonymous
February 24 2011, 00:30:43 UTC
“Wait…Arthur Kirkland?”
“Yep.”
“…him? Really?”
“What‘s wrong with him?”
“He‘s just so…ick. So uptight and stick up the ass and…” he trailed off looking at his sister.
“Actually never mind. You two are perfect for each other.” he said. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Music. There was music coming out from the window.
Louise wearily sat up in her bed and glanced at the clock. She groaned, it was almost midnight.
Why was there music coming from the window?
She stumbled to the window, opened it, and looked outside.
She blinked once. Twice. A third time.
Francis waved at her microphone in hand and Antonio holding an I-pod and speakers.
“Good evening my love.” Francis said. “May I tell you how lovely you look in the moonlight?”
Louise sighed. “What are you doing here? Go home.”
“Not without letting you know my true feelings my love.” he said.
“I said go home!” Louise yelled.
“Francis. Go the fuck home.” another weary voice added.
The three heads looked to the side. Gilbert was peering out from his window and was glaring at the two on the front yard.
“Oh Gilbert.” Francis said. “Sorry to have woken you.”
“Francis! Go home!” the two siblings yelled together.
“Francis go home. Or else.” Louise said.
“But mon ami! I need to talk to you.” Francis said.
“Last warning!”
“But-”
“That’s it.” Louise said before pulling back inside.
“Francis. I am telling you this as your friend and not as her protective brother.” Gilbert said suddenly scared. “Go home.”
“What is the worst she can do?” Francis asked. “Call the police? Been there, done that.”
“Francis, you don’t understand.” Gilbert said urgently. “Leave.”
Before Francis could say anything a sound filled the air.
The sound of a cocking gun.
Francis felt his stomach drop to the ground at the sight of Louise and Gilbert’s father suddenly in the doorway with an army rifle in his hands.
“Leave boy.” he said brining the gun up.
Antonio grabbed Francis and pulled him back into his car. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- “I accept.”
Arthur’s face brightened. “Really?”
“Yes.” Louise said nodding. “I‘ll go on a date with you. Saturday?”
Oh God, I just love that you chose Arthur as Francis' competitor. Hoho, there's never enough fighting between those two xD Also, Arthur is sooooo cute and how he asked her out and aaaaaaaw!
And Gilbert who is perfectly okay with his sister dating an "uptight" guy xDD Perfect!
And THE END!!! Where Gilbert was suddenly worried over Francis again. And then Louise and her father with the guns... oh anon, you make me laugh so much!
Oh, and I should not forget to mention how much I loved the part where Lovina destroyed that Mark's vital regions with her shoes. That must've hurt!
You're so awesome anon! ♥
PS: Don't forget to leave a link to where this story continues at the old part ;)
Re: True Part 6d/x
anonymous
February 24 2011, 16:10:01 UTC
Oh My God, Anon, I love you! Marry me, please??? Louise is AWESOME!I really like her *-* ! And, wow, the gun! Besides, I realy liked the idea of Arthur and Louise going out! And Francis, poor of him. I am so in love with this <3
Especially the knuckles, the knuckles were it was burning the most.
And she had to get the blood off her hands before first period started.
It had taken only a few moments to find Mark; Lovina had been on the rampage along side her. They quickly found him.
And they oh so quickly grabbed him, threw him in an area behind the school where there was no cameras, and commenced on beating the living crap out of him.
Without leaving that many bruises or visible scars.
Lovina however took the cake. She stepped on him repeatedly with her three-and-a-half inch heels.
In a place where Louise was now certain will never give him children.
He deserved it.
She looked over her hands and nodded. Completely clean.
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That was the most exciting that had happened today. There was no football practice so Louise spent her after school hours at the school newspaper. She was the editor after all.
And now she had to decide whether to allow Kiku’s drawing or his article into the newspaper because of a stingy principal who only allowed one part of the newspaper per person.
Louise sighed. The article was good but the drawing was something the students loved looking at. Those comics of his were a big hit.
However the article was also just as good.
Kiku said it didn’t matter to him what was placed in there. It was all up to her.
The door to the classroom opened up suddenly.
“Oh. Forgive me.” Arthur Kirkland leader of the newspaper and the senior president said. “I didn’t know you were in here.”
“Its alright.” she said before looking back at the two pieces of paper in front of her.
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“Mm hmm. The principal only allows one per person…”
“And Kiku did two great pieces.” he finished.
“Exactly.”
The two stared at the pieces of paper before Louise finally picked up the comic. “This one.”
“You sure?”
“It’s been a pretty dull month.” she said shrugging. “The students need something to brighten up the newspaper.”
“True.”
“What do you think of the swim team photo?” she asked.
“I think that the boys need to stop taking the large football teams jockstraps and stuffing it there in an attempt to look bigger.” he answered.
“And I am thankful that I‘m a girl and I don’t need to use those jockstraps.”
“Well besides that I think it’s alright.”
“And the girls one?”
He picked up the picture and peered at it for a moment. “Looks alright.”
“Cheerleading photo?”
“There…alright.”
“Too much skin I think.”
“That’s how they were designed I‘m afraid.”
“Basketball team?”
“Too sweaty but alright.”
“Volleyball team?”
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“Football team?”
“Alright. You look cute.”
“Thank you.”
“But…why is my sister showing the middle finger?”
“That’s what she likes to do.”
“I‘m going to have to talk to her.”
“Does that ever work?”
“No but it puts my mind at ease that I tried something. What about the clubs?”
“They seem alright.”
“Are we allowed to put their picture in this newspaper or in the next one?”
“I think it should be the next one, this month we had a lot of matches with other schools.”
“Alright then the next one.”
“I think we need to…”
“Louise are you free this weekend?” Arthur suddenly asked.
Louise looked up in surprise. “What?”
“Are you free this weekend?” he repeated.
“I think so.” she said hesitantly.
“Will you go on a date with me then?” he asked. “To the movies perhaps?”
A blush started to appear on her cheeks lightly. “I don’t know. Can I think about it?”
“Of course. Tomorrow?”
“Yeah. I‘ll let you know tomorrow.”
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Louise sat in a daze in her bed. She stared blankly at the wall.
Her brother came in her room at that moment.
“Hey West, I was thinking. About the downstairs living room, maybe we should…” he trailed off at seeing her blank face. “You okay?”
Louise slowly nodded. “Gilbert. I have a question.”
“Shoot.”
“What would you do if someone you knew for about three years, you worked beside, and kinda trusted a lot asked you out on a date?”
“…that would depend. How good of friends are you two?”
Louise shrugged. “We worked together for about three years. On the school newspaper. And his sister is on the football team with me.”
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“Yep.”
“…him? Really?”
“What‘s wrong with him?”
“He‘s just so…ick. So uptight and stick up the ass and…” he trailed off looking at his sister.
“Actually never mind. You two are perfect for each other.” he said.
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Music. There was music coming out from the window.
Louise wearily sat up in her bed and glanced at the clock. She groaned, it was almost midnight.
Why was there music coming from the window?
She stumbled to the window, opened it, and looked outside.
She blinked once. Twice. A third time.
Francis waved at her microphone in hand and Antonio holding an I-pod and speakers.
“Good evening my love.” Francis said. “May I tell you how lovely you look in the moonlight?”
Louise sighed. “What are you doing here? Go home.”
“Not without letting you know my true feelings my love.” he said.
“I said go home!” Louise yelled.
“Francis. Go the fuck home.” another weary voice added.
The three heads looked to the side. Gilbert was peering out from his window and was glaring at the two on the front yard.
“Oh Gilbert.” Francis said. “Sorry to have woken you.”
“Francis! Go home!” the two siblings yelled together.
“Francis go home. Or else.” Louise said.
“But mon ami! I need to talk to you.” Francis said.
“Last warning!”
“But-”
“That’s it.” Louise said before pulling back inside.
“Francis. I am telling you this as your friend and not as her protective brother.” Gilbert said suddenly scared. “Go home.”
“What is the worst she can do?” Francis asked. “Call the police? Been there, done that.”
“Francis, you don’t understand.” Gilbert said urgently. “Leave.”
Before Francis could say anything a sound filled the air.
The sound of a cocking gun.
Francis felt his stomach drop to the ground at the sight of Louise and Gilbert’s father suddenly in the doorway with an army rifle in his hands.
“Leave boy.” he said brining the gun up.
Antonio grabbed Francis and pulled him back into his car.
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“I accept.”
Arthur’s face brightened. “Really?”
“Yes.” Louise said nodding. “I‘ll go on a date with you. Saturday?”
“Sounds wonderful.”
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THIS CHAPTER IS SO MUCH LOVE!!!
Oh God, I just love that you chose Arthur as Francis' competitor. Hoho, there's never enough fighting between those two xD Also, Arthur is sooooo cute and how he asked her out and aaaaaaaw!
And Gilbert who is perfectly okay with his sister dating an "uptight" guy xDD Perfect!
And THE END!!! Where Gilbert was suddenly worried over Francis again. And then Louise and her father with the guns... oh anon, you make me laugh so much!
Oh, and I should not forget to mention how much I loved the part where Lovina destroyed that Mark's vital regions with her shoes. That must've hurt!
You're so awesome anon! ♥
PS: Don't forget to leave a link to where this story continues at the old part ;)
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Louise is AWESOME!I really like her *-* ! And, wow, the gun! Besides, I realy liked the idea of Arthur and Louise going out! And Francis, poor of him.
I am so in love with this <3
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