Re: Hated [part 3/??]
anonymous
February 21 2011, 10:41:30 UTC
Cursing under her breath in French, Monica struggles to free herself, but her cheeks are red and she is panting shamelessly as long, manicured fingers caress her inner thighs with experienced motions.
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She uncrosses her legs, and Arthur’s eyes follow that movement like a hawk. “You want me to be bad, so that you can exert your authority, your dominance.”
“Wh-what are you talking about, you broad?” Arthur growls, but his throat is dry, and his voice cracks twice because it’s true, so true.
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“Take those off and lie back on the desk. And none of your stupid French this time.”
Oh my FUCK. *dead* Guh, I love your descriptions, anon. (I love all of them, but those three quoted parts are my favourites. *nosebleed*) I'm probably totally missing the point here, but somehow, even without detailed sex scenes, this is one of the hottest things I've read on the meme in a long time. Doesn't hurt that I have a huge kink for sex-god(dess) France, and you write her amazingly. ♥ I do also love the way you've set up the character dynamics in this, and I can't wait to see more!
Re: Hated [part 3/??]
anonymous
February 22 2011, 03:39:41 UTC
Thank you so much, anon! I was afraid I might have rambled on the descriptions, but I'm glad to see that they have an appreciable effect. Unfortunately the detailed sex scenes I write are too ludicrous for the type of serious plot I'm considering, so we won't see too much more in the way of sexiness. But I hope you enjoy the rest of the fic, anyway.
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She uncrosses her legs, and Arthur’s eyes follow that movement like a hawk. “You want me to be bad, so that you can exert your authority, your dominance.”
“Wh-what are you talking about, you broad?” Arthur growls, but his throat is dry, and his voice cracks twice because it’s true, so true.
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“Take those off and lie back on the desk. And none of your stupid French this time.”
Oh my FUCK. *dead* Guh, I love your descriptions, anon. (I love all of them, but those three quoted parts are my favourites. *nosebleed*) I'm probably totally missing the point here, but somehow, even without detailed sex scenes, this is one of the hottest things I've read on the meme in a long time. Doesn't hurt that I have a huge kink for sex-god(dess) France, and you write her amazingly. ♥ I do also love the way you've set up the character dynamics in this, and I can't wait to see more!
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