The Other Side 3d/3
anonymous
January 5 2011, 06:27:16 UTC
Russia proceeded to stretch America with his lubricated fingers. France's instructions were becoming erratic, his voice occasionally cracking like puberty was in effect again.
“What?” Russia looked up, expression confused. “Another finger? Am I stretching him or fisting him?”
“Ah...” France chuckled. “Sorry. No, no, you're good.” America visibly sighed in relief.
“Just shut up,” England said with a small groan. “Russia, put your dick in him already.”
“Slowly and carefully,” France added.
“Why does everything have to be so slow and careful?” Russia mused as he positioned himself.
“This has been a little less painful,” America said. “It's not bad! Weird, but...”
Russia finally slid into America. Russia and France moaned, England whimpered and stroked himself some more, and America cried out.
“Lovely,” France gasped. “Oh, très magnifique.”
Russia set up a slow pace to start with, though it was obvious he wanted to just pound into the willing body he had at his mercy. But France corrected him whenever things got too rough for his taste.
England watched them make love, watched Russia increase his speed, watched America writhe and moan. He increased his own speed, pumping his hips into his hand. Out of the corner of his eye he saw France doing the same.
America was as loud as ever, panting and groaning and making other incredibly sexy sounds, rather than the curses he usually directed at his hated lover. Now that he had found a steady but not punishing rhythm, Russia didn't need direction anymore, leaving France free to make his own pleased sounds as he stroked himself.
It was strange. Just the other day, England had watched them throw each other around the room, having the most violent sex he had ever seen, and had thought nothing could be hotter. Yet there he was, watching Russia's ass bob up and down as he thrust into America in what was just plain old vanilla sex. And it was so hot...
America was the first to come. In keeping with the spirit of the occasion, in what must have been a burst of inspiration, he cried out Russia's name rather than loudly screaming. For some reason, that was enough to push England over the edge, and he orgasmed as well with a low moan, trembling. France was soon to follow, and Russia finished last (he had probably won some personal contest in his mind).
The quartet flopped back, boneless, worn out, and sated.
It was some minutes before anyone spoke. “Well...” France said. “Congratulations. You were able to have normal sex!”
“Normal?” America said, sprawled on the bed beside Russia. “You think that was normal? I just had sex under the supervision and instruction of the closest things I have to parents. That was totally hot!”
England coughed, face reddening. “That is beside the point! You... he... Don't say things like that, America!”
America laughed. “Well, all right, it was certainly the most normal sex he and I have ever had. So...”
“You are ready for round two?” France said eagerly, probably remembering the multiple orgasms America had somehow managed before.
“Oh. Well, maybe. We'll see. I was just thinking of your guys' performance tomorrow...”
England grimaced. Damn. He had almost forgotten about that.
“Don't worry!” America continued on, much too cheery. “We'll give you some pointers before unleashing you on the world.”
England sighed, tucking himself back into his pants. America better be up for a round two, if this was going to be worth it.
there's more...right?
anonymous
January 5 2011, 15:08:34 UTC
♥ ♥ ♥ PERFECTION ♥ ♥ ♥
Things I loved:
-Everything -the humour -the ridiculousness of the situation -Everything -the characterizations -EVERYTHING -America's comments, France's guidance, England's impatience and Russia's hinted at immaturityXD -The compromise -EVERYTHING ♥ -The foursome going all ways; implied England abused by Russia, Russia's delicious ass and ass bobbing, America bottoming so adorkably! France's penchant for undressing others but his bigger love for love itself dawwww -The paralellisms between the two couples; the implied discovery of real love by America and Russia; the clear love France and England hold for each other now -France's constant ability to remain aroused no matter the circumstancesXD -France bribing England's body out (and the way America kept saying "Okay!" to every suggestionXD), America wanting to be bribed by food, Russia wanting Matthew as part of the dealXD -Russia's posessive reaction to France's wandering hands. Daww~ -This: “You think that was normal? I just had sex under the supervision and instruction of the closest things I have to parents. That was totally hot!”. Lol, America. -The End <3
Please, tell me there's an epilogue detailing France and England's performance the day after XD
OP grins like the Cheshire Cat
anonymous
January 5 2011, 16:17:13 UTC
Author!Anon you've really made my day.
Amazing story! This whole fill was so funny, totally hot and curiously sweet all at once. I don't know whether I liked the switch-a-roo between the couples Yes America, you and Russia are a couple, get used to it. more, or the fact that France and England have to roleplay at the meeting.
Oh, you know what I loved most of all?
...Dat nicely rounded Russian ass y'all! I love that imagery so much I want to frame it on my wall- hell, I want it to be my next screen name!
Again amazing job Author!Anon, you win all the internet babies in the world!
Re: The Other Side 3d/3
anonymous
January 6 2011, 01:56:14 UTC
Woah. I wasn't expecting more but I'm really glad that there is. Russia and America having to be told how to have vanilla sex. France and England reminiscing about their hate sex days. France insisting on helping undress Russia- and then Russia not letting him undress America (That was like the hottest part). Man there was way too much goodness in this part.
Re: The Other Side 3d/3
anonymous
January 6 2011, 05:30:10 UTC
Seconding everything the commenters above said before me. I really hope you deanon this somewhere--or failing that, provide links to some of the other fills you've done here? I can say in all honesty and with no exaggeration that I have not enjoyed a Hetalia fic this much since 2009, when I flushed with the first blush of fandom love.
“What?” Russia looked up, expression confused. “Another finger? Am I stretching him or fisting him?”
“Ah...” France chuckled. “Sorry. No, no, you're good.” America visibly sighed in relief.
“Just shut up,” England said with a small groan. “Russia, put your dick in him already.”
“Slowly and carefully,” France added.
“Why does everything have to be so slow and careful?” Russia mused as he positioned himself.
“This has been a little less painful,” America said. “It's not bad! Weird, but...”
Russia finally slid into America. Russia and France moaned, England whimpered and stroked himself some more, and America cried out.
“Lovely,” France gasped. “Oh, très magnifique.”
Russia set up a slow pace to start with, though it was obvious he wanted to just pound into the willing body he had at his mercy. But France corrected him whenever things got too rough for his taste.
England watched them make love, watched Russia increase his speed, watched America writhe and moan. He increased his own speed, pumping his hips into his hand. Out of the corner of his eye he saw France doing the same.
America was as loud as ever, panting and groaning and making other incredibly sexy sounds, rather than the curses he usually directed at his hated lover. Now that he had found a steady but not punishing rhythm, Russia didn't need direction anymore, leaving France free to make his own pleased sounds as he stroked himself.
It was strange. Just the other day, England had watched them throw each other around the room, having the most violent sex he had ever seen, and had thought nothing could be hotter. Yet there he was, watching Russia's ass bob up and down as he thrust into America in what was just plain old vanilla sex. And it was so hot...
America was the first to come. In keeping with the spirit of the occasion, in what must have been a burst of inspiration, he cried out Russia's name rather than loudly screaming. For some reason, that was enough to push England over the edge, and he orgasmed as well with a low moan, trembling. France was soon to follow, and Russia finished last (he had probably won some personal contest in his mind).
The quartet flopped back, boneless, worn out, and sated.
It was some minutes before anyone spoke. “Well...” France said. “Congratulations. You were able to have normal sex!”
“Normal?” America said, sprawled on the bed beside Russia. “You think that was normal? I just had sex under the supervision and instruction of the closest things I have to parents. That was totally hot!”
England coughed, face reddening. “That is beside the point! You... he... Don't say things like that, America!”
America laughed. “Well, all right, it was certainly the most normal sex he and I have ever had. So...”
“You are ready for round two?” France said eagerly, probably remembering the multiple orgasms America had somehow managed before.
“Oh. Well, maybe. We'll see. I was just thinking of your guys' performance tomorrow...”
England grimaced. Damn. He had almost forgotten about that.
“Don't worry!” America continued on, much too cheery. “We'll give you some pointers before unleashing you on the world.”
England sighed, tucking himself back into his pants. America better be up for a round two, if this was going to be worth it.
America was. And it was totally worth it.
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Things I loved:
-Everything
-the humour
-the ridiculousness of the situation
-Everything
-the characterizations
-EVERYTHING
-America's comments, France's guidance, England's impatience and Russia's hinted at immaturityXD
-The compromise
-EVERYTHING ♥
-The foursome going all ways; implied England abused by Russia, Russia's delicious ass and ass bobbing, America bottoming so adorkably! France's penchant for undressing others but his bigger love for love itself dawwww
-The paralellisms between the two couples; the implied discovery of real love by America and Russia; the clear love France and England hold for each other now
-France's constant ability to remain aroused no matter the circumstancesXD
-France bribing England's body out (and the way America kept saying "Okay!" to every suggestionXD), America wanting to be bribed by food, Russia wanting Matthew as part of the dealXD
-Russia's posessive reaction to France's wandering hands. Daww~
-This: “You think that was normal? I just had sex under the supervision and instruction of the closest things I have to parents. That was totally hot!”. Lol, America.
-The End <3
Please, tell me there's an epilogue detailing France and England's performance the day after XD
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Amazing story! This whole fill was so funny, totally hot and curiously sweet all at once. I don't know whether I liked the switch-a-roo between the couples Yes America, you and Russia are a couple, get used to it. more, or the fact that France and England have to roleplay at the meeting.
Oh, you know what I loved most of all?
...Dat nicely rounded Russian ass y'all! I love that imagery so much I want to frame it on my wall- hell, I want it to be my next screen name!
Again amazing job Author!Anon, you win all the internet babies in the world!
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Russia and America having to be told how to have vanilla sex. France and England reminiscing about their hate sex days.
France insisting on helping undress Russia- and then Russia not letting him undress America (That was like the hottest part). Man there was way too much goodness in this part.
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