Rule Three [4/4]
anonymous
December 11 2010, 10:41:34 UTC
“How long’s it been since we threw those two in The Closet, anyway?” Mathias asked as he spun the bottle after getting a kiss from a very giggly Mei. The others shrugged.
“Long enough, probably,” Francis said, checking his watch even though he couldn’t focus his eyes enough to read the hands. “Who wants to let them out?”
A brief silence. “I will,” Elizaveta volunteered, standing up and wobbling a little on her feet before stumbling out into the hallway. She ran a hand along the wall to steady herself and clutched the chair that was propped under the doorknob, and was about to yell through the door when she heard it.
It, of course, being the pants and moans of two people obviously engaged in some risky business.
She giggled, listening for a moment to the bumps and name cryings coming from the crack under the door, and decided to leave them be. She turned back to the sunroom, tripping over one of the coats on the floor on the way but recovering nicely, and kept giggling until she sat back down next to the very busty Katsuya, who had been forced to strip down to her bra while she was gone.
After she had made sure she was sitting properly, she looked up at the curious circle. “I don’t think we’ll be using that closet anymore,” she said, hiccupping and trying to rub the heat from her cheeks.
Life was certainly good tonight.
{A/N: Tacked on ending is tacked on. I'm not opposed to writing the (very softcore) porn if people want it; it just didn't end up flowing right for this.}
Thank you so much for writing it, anon. OP has a gift for you but it'll take some time to draw because she's busy with life. ||OTL
But yeah, this went COMPLETELY pass my expectation of the fill. You write in such a sexy way (and there's not even full on smut). Mmmm. Wish I knew who you were. 8'[ An extra story would be yummy but I'm not gonna push you further, this is MORE THAN ENOUGH. >U>b
I'm glad you liked it! I wasn't quite sure about it, since I had to choose the most cliche plot available to this prompt, but that was part of the fun - making something cliche as uncliche as I could. ^^
Draw soon! I look forward to it!
BTW, I forgot to mention that Bridget = Belgium, Mathias = Denmark, Maddie = Portugal, and Mei = Taiwan.
Re: Rule Three [4/4]
anonymous
December 12 2010, 15:17:21 UTC
I loved it! That was one realistic drunk after-party make-out if I ever saw one, particularly the wet cheeks thingsXD I loved the dynamics. It was so easy-going and typical of open-minded guy friends. Ah, college...how I miss you, now. there should be more Spin fills around here...
“Long enough, probably,” Francis said, checking his watch even though he couldn’t focus his eyes enough to read the hands. “Who wants to let them out?”
A brief silence. “I will,” Elizaveta volunteered, standing up and wobbling a little on her feet before stumbling out into the hallway. She ran a hand along the wall to steady herself and clutched the chair that was propped under the doorknob, and was about to yell through the door when she heard it.
It, of course, being the pants and moans of two people obviously engaged in some risky business.
She giggled, listening for a moment to the bumps and name cryings coming from the crack under the door, and decided to leave them be. She turned back to the sunroom, tripping over one of the coats on the floor on the way but recovering nicely, and kept giggling until she sat back down next to the very busty Katsuya, who had been forced to strip down to her bra while she was gone.
After she had made sure she was sitting properly, she looked up at the curious circle. “I don’t think we’ll be using that closet anymore,” she said, hiccupping and trying to rub the heat from her cheeks.
Life was certainly good tonight.
{A/N: Tacked on ending is tacked on. I'm not opposed to writing the (very softcore) porn if people want it; it just didn't end up flowing right for this.}
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Haha, I laughed at Elizaveta's insanely adorable reaction to this too. socute! c:
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Thank you so much for writing it, anon. OP has a gift for you but it'll take some time to draw because she's busy with life. ||OTL
But yeah, this went COMPLETELY pass my expectation of the fill. You write in such a sexy way (and there's not even full on smut). Mmmm. Wish I knew who you were. 8'[ An extra story would be yummy but I'm not gonna push you further, this is MORE THAN ENOUGH. >U>b
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I'm glad you liked it! I wasn't quite sure about it, since I had to choose the most cliche plot available to this prompt, but that was part of the fun - making something cliche as uncliche as I could. ^^
Draw soon! I look forward to it!
BTW, I forgot to mention that Bridget = Belgium, Mathias = Denmark, Maddie = Portugal, and Mei = Taiwan.
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Cute and sexy!
*sighs* why are derpy teenage boys so cute when they're making out lol
Sweet fill, authoranon!
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I loved the dynamics. It was so easy-going and typical of open-minded guy friends. Ah, college...how I miss you, now.
there should be more Spin fills around here...
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