Re: Perhaps There is Something to See 4/4
anonymous
December 2 2010, 22:43:18 UTC
Gorgeous. The end was incredibly beautiful, and the quiet courtship here will always get me more than any over-the-top demonstration of affection (also, futbol! ^^). You nailed all the characters' atittudes, and I'm very glad to see:
a) couple shifting. Those AUs about the untouchable, FROM NOW AND FOR LIFE pairings set in high school? Well, not believable, and REALLY not my thing. They read like a typical shoujo, which I guess is the point. This here, is much more believable and interesting, and also the way they started to get attached to a different person, out of personality affinity (opposites or alike, but in all cases believable and developed)
b) people who aren't ALL GOOD or ALL BAD at everything in their life. I like that the Bad Trio are good friends but, in Francis' case, not a very good boyfriend, and in Gilbert's, a violent and selfish person. And in Antonio's, I suppose it's obliviousness? ^^ Just thankful that they have layers, and they can be assholes in some aspects of their lives without validating their goodness in others.
You nailed all the characters' atittudes, and I'm very glad to see:
a) couple shifting. Those AUs about the untouchable, FROM NOW AND FOR LIFE pairings set in high school? Well, not believable, and REALLY not my thing. They read like a typical shoujo, which I guess is the point. This here, is much more believable and interesting, and also the way they started to get attached to a different person, out of personality affinity (opposites or alike, but in all cases believable and developed)
b) people who aren't ALL GOOD or ALL BAD at everything in their life. I like that the Bad Trio are good friends but, in Francis' case, not a very good boyfriend, and in Gilbert's, a violent and selfish person. And in Antonio's, I suppose it's obliviousness? ^^
Just thankful that they have layers, and they can be assholes in some aspects of their lives without validating their goodness in others.
Wow, this is a hell of a long reviewXD
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