Re: Words Never Meant So Much [Author's Note~]
anonymous
October 17 2010, 16:51:12 UTC
I don't know the series you're crossoving this with, but this story is great. I love your take on Alfred and Arthur, and the little hints to possible reactions in the future. I like the easy banter, the very obvious affection between them, the camaraderie, more than that, the familiarity, the closeness. I also have to commend you on your scene building, because you really take your scenes somewhere and aren't there just because they came to you out of the blue or for decoration, and I also have to commend your ability to create mistery and engagement in the reader; I am truly curious about the case itself.
Perhaps Francis should see it as well. He always rather liked decorating you two in ribbon and lace.
I have always always believed thisXD
“But…me and Mattie haven’t lived with each other in a long time. Our…parents got a divorce.” Arthur cut off from his correction and barely refrained a dark glare at the brief look the American shot him, “Mattie stayed with mom…I stayed with dad. It…wasn’t horrible I guess.”
Pfff, best explanation of North American history everXD. Also, I know you said this would end USUK, but my treacherous FrUK heart was squeeling rather loudly at all this ^^ and mommy!Arthur, papa!France, yayXD
Perhaps Francis should see it as well. He always rather liked decorating you two in ribbon and lace.
I have always always believed thisXD
“But…me and Mattie haven’t lived with each other in a long time. Our…parents got a divorce.” Arthur cut off from his correction and barely refrained a dark glare at the brief look the American shot him, “Mattie stayed with mom…I stayed with dad. It…wasn’t horrible I guess.”
Pfff, best explanation of North American history everXD. Also, I know you said this would end USUK, but my treacherous FrUK heart was squeeling rather loudly at all this ^^ and mommy!Arthur, papa!France, yayXD
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