Words Never Meant So Much [Author's Note~]
anonymous
October 17 2010, 11:23:14 UTC
Authoranon checking back in o/! Cliffie update is cliffie, but there shall be more in a few days! My place of employment is being kind and giving me my two days back-to-back this week! ...Though I can't recall which days. I think it's Wednesday and Thursday? ...Hm. Oh well!
Uhm...not much to say, more development. I think that's what I always liked about SVU was the way they balanced the light and the family friendly with the dark, twisted undertone, especially in the earlier seasons. [episode one, Olivia and Elliot's look exchange over the cabbie's missing 'cigar'. Best ever.] But this was also a good place to cut off and provide future warnings:
Coming chapters will indefinitely have trigger material that includes, but is certainly not limited to: references to mild-graphic physical, emotional, sexual and mental abuse, substance abuse, minors involved in said substance abuse, mild-graphic consensual sex [much later], and Munch and Arthur's cynicism and banter, likely complete with them ganging up on Huang at some point. Because I'm sure Arthur would not like to be shrinked.
...Speaking of, I'm not quite sure if English people use the term 'Freud squad' for shrinks...if anyone has information on that, I would love you long time! Also, if you find errors, please pardon me. I did a check-over, but you can never really check your own works completely, right? If you find errors, please point them out! I'll fix them and will eventually post compilations in the main Hetacomm!
...Other than that, I'm out. I love you, muffins! *HUGS AND KISSES*
Re: Words Never Meant So Much [Author's Note~]
anonymous
October 17 2010, 16:51:12 UTC
I don't know the series you're crossoving this with, but this story is great. I love your take on Alfred and Arthur, and the little hints to possible reactions in the future. I like the easy banter, the very obvious affection between them, the camaraderie, more than that, the familiarity, the closeness. I also have to commend you on your scene building, because you really take your scenes somewhere and aren't there just because they came to you out of the blue or for decoration, and I also have to commend your ability to create mistery and engagement in the reader; I am truly curious about the case itself.
Perhaps Francis should see it as well. He always rather liked decorating you two in ribbon and lace.
I have always always believed thisXD
“But…me and Mattie haven’t lived with each other in a long time. Our…parents got a divorce.” Arthur cut off from his correction and barely refrained a dark glare at the brief look the American shot him, “Mattie stayed with mom…I stayed with dad. It…wasn’t horrible I guess.”
Pfff, best explanation of North American history everXD. Also, I know you said this would end USUK, but my treacherous FrUK heart was squeeling rather loudly at all this ^^ and mommy!Arthur, papa!France, yayXD
Hello~ Ah... I'm loving this. You're really capturing the ease the whole team has with eachother really well, and I find it hard to write children but you do that well too. I love the little girl braiding Alfred's hair XD and Arthur taking a picture! I love it so far! Please keep writing! And I can't wait for more Munch and Arthur wit.
Big SVU Fan approves!
anonymous
October 17 2010, 21:46:20 UTC
You're doing a great job anon! You capture each of the SVU characters perfectly! It's like I'm watching an episode on TV with Hetalia characters guest staring on the show!
I agree with before anon, “But…me and Mattie haven’t lived with each other in a long time. Our…parents got a divorce.” Arthur cut off from his correction and barely refrained a dark glare at the brief look the American shot him, “Mattie stayed with mom…I stayed with dad. It…wasn’t horrible I guess.”
That line was great XD
I can't wait for more anon! I'm really looking forward to Munch ^^
Uhm...not much to say, more development. I think that's what I always liked about SVU was the way they balanced the light and the family friendly with the dark, twisted undertone, especially in the earlier seasons. [episode one, Olivia and Elliot's look exchange over the cabbie's missing 'cigar'. Best ever.] But this was also a good place to cut off and provide future warnings:
Coming chapters will indefinitely have trigger material that includes, but is certainly not limited to: references to mild-graphic physical, emotional, sexual and mental abuse, substance abuse, minors involved in said substance abuse, mild-graphic consensual sex [much later], and Munch and Arthur's cynicism and banter, likely complete with them ganging up on Huang at some point. Because I'm sure Arthur would not like to be shrinked.
...Speaking of, I'm not quite sure if English people use the term 'Freud squad' for shrinks...if anyone has information on that, I would love you long time! Also, if you find errors, please pardon me. I did a check-over, but you can never really check your own works completely, right? If you find errors, please point them out! I'll fix them and will eventually post compilations in the main Hetacomm!
...Other than that, I'm out. I love you, muffins! *HUGS AND KISSES*
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Perhaps Francis should see it as well. He always rather liked decorating you two in ribbon and lace.
I have always always believed thisXD
“But…me and Mattie haven’t lived with each other in a long time. Our…parents got a divorce.” Arthur cut off from his correction and barely refrained a dark glare at the brief look the American shot him, “Mattie stayed with mom…I stayed with dad. It…wasn’t horrible I guess.”
Pfff, best explanation of North American history everXD. Also, I know you said this would end USUK, but my treacherous FrUK heart was squeeling rather loudly at all this ^^ and mommy!Arthur, papa!France, yayXD
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And I can't wait for more Munch and Arthur wit.
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You capture each of the SVU characters perfectly! It's like I'm watching an episode on TV with Hetalia characters guest staring on the show!
I agree with before anon, “But…me and Mattie haven’t lived with each other in a long time. Our…parents got a divorce.” Arthur cut off from his correction and barely refrained a dark glare at the brief look the American shot him, “Mattie stayed with mom…I stayed with dad. It…wasn’t horrible I guess.”
That line was great XD
I can't wait for more anon! I'm really looking forward to Munch ^^
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