Stilettos and Fishnets [5/5]
anonymous
June 25 2010, 09:41:31 UTC
“Awesome,” Gil finished, and she managed to prop herself up on her elbows. “Want me to return the favor?” she asked smoothly.
Elizaveta opened her mouth to reply, and then Gil’s eyes went very wide, as if she’d just realized something.
“Fuck! What time is it?” she asked, looking around a bit frantically.
Elizaveta blinked, and glanced down at the watch on her wrist. “Uhh, about 12:25.”
“Shit, I have to be back on in five minutes,” Gil growled, reaching out and grabbing up her shorts, sliding them back up her thighs. She made sure they were in place - sticky or not - and then pulled her stilettos back on. “Hey, do you think you’ll still be around when I get off?”
“Of work, right?” Elizaveta asked with a grin.
Gil rolled her eyes. “Duh.”
“When are you done?”
“’Bout 2 o’clock.”
Elizaveta thought about it for a moment. That would put her there rather late, and she imagined her friends would head home before then…but then again, that also meant she’d be able to take this gorgeous creature home with her. “Sure, I’ll stick around,” she decided with a warm smile.
Gil grinned, and leaned over to press a quick kiss to Elizaveta’s lips. “Great!” and then she very quickly disappeared out of the closet, to head back on stage for her next set.
Elizaveta sighed quietly, and leaned back against the pile of tablecloths she’d previously had Gil stretched out across. Her night of fun and drinks had turned into so much more.
After that, Elizaveta found herself a regular of the Pussy Cat Club.
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It is nearing on 4 a.m. here, and I think I deserve a bit of sleep now. I hope this is what OP was looking for, as I find myself a bit fail at foot fetishes. At any rate, hope it's enjoyed!
hnghhh oh my ghsdghdsoighoihdsoighoih!!!!!!!!! ////
THAT WAS EVERYTHING I COULD EVER DREAM FOR, LOVELY AUTHOR
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I am. Guh. Having been in both of their shoes (no pun intended) foot fetish wise, I don't think you were fail at all. I could feel it from both their perspectives, getting and receiving the worship, and hnghhhhh Gil is just the sexiest thing - I loved that Prussia was still 'himself' even in the girl body. And the way you wrote Elizaveta was fucking hot. You didn't beat around the bush and you were so descriptive and hnghhhh
I'm so glad you liked it. I was terribly worried that Prussia would be too OOC as a woman, but I'm glad I nailed his -- or shall I say 'her' -- character.
I'm also delighted that you thought I got the foot fetish right. I've never been in either situation, so I hadn't any experience to draw from.
Re: Stilettos and Fishnets [5/5]
anonymous
June 27 2010, 01:31:04 UTC
There is just not enough femmeslash around in fandom, period. I don't expect much of it in Hetalia, but it's always a special treat when I do find it and oh, I love Hungary and Prussia. Wonderfully written to booth, to. Thank you ♥
Elizaveta opened her mouth to reply, and then Gil’s eyes went very wide, as if she’d just realized something.
“Fuck! What time is it?” she asked, looking around a bit frantically.
Elizaveta blinked, and glanced down at the watch on her wrist. “Uhh, about 12:25.”
“Shit, I have to be back on in five minutes,” Gil growled, reaching out and grabbing up her shorts, sliding them back up her thighs. She made sure they were in place - sticky or not - and then pulled her stilettos back on. “Hey, do you think you’ll still be around when I get off?”
“Of work, right?” Elizaveta asked with a grin.
Gil rolled her eyes. “Duh.”
“When are you done?”
“’Bout 2 o’clock.”
Elizaveta thought about it for a moment. That would put her there rather late, and she imagined her friends would head home before then…but then again, that also meant she’d be able to take this gorgeous creature home with her. “Sure, I’ll stick around,” she decided with a warm smile.
Gil grinned, and leaned over to press a quick kiss to Elizaveta’s lips. “Great!” and then she very quickly disappeared out of the closet, to head back on stage for her next set.
Elizaveta sighed quietly, and leaned back against the pile of tablecloths she’d previously had Gil stretched out across. Her night of fun and drinks had turned into so much more.
After that, Elizaveta found herself a regular of the Pussy Cat Club.
End
It is nearing on 4 a.m. here, and I think I deserve a bit of sleep now. I hope this is what OP was looking for, as I find myself a bit fail at foot fetishes. At any rate, hope it's enjoyed!
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THAT WAS EVERYTHING I COULD EVER DREAM FOR, LOVELY AUTHOR
*tabs fill for multiple future readings *
I am. Guh. Having been in both of their shoes (no pun intended) foot fetish wise, I don't think you were fail at all. I could feel it from both their perspectives, getting and receiving the worship, and hnghhhhh Gil is just the sexiest thing - I loved that Prussia was still 'himself' even in the girl body. And the way you wrote Elizaveta was fucking hot. You didn't beat around the bush and you were so descriptive and hnghhhh
<3 thank you author anon
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I'm also delighted that you thought I got the foot fetish right. I've never been in either situation, so I hadn't any experience to draw from.
But, once again, glad you enjoyed it so much!
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