Re: Wired Differently (15/?)
anonymous
April 25 2010, 07:09:23 UTC
Wow, I was just talking about this fill converting me to CanAm and how much I love the dynamic you've created between these guys. <3
I love the sense of mingled anticipation/apprehension you've created here; it seems really realistic to me, considering the kind of, uh, adventure these two are embarking on.
The idea of America needing titanium restraints is awesome, and America's denial about not wanting bondage is ... not the most convincing, yeah.
Canada kissing America's ankle was enough to make me kind of squee, but this exchange:
“I think that’ll do it, eh? Let’s lube you up.”
“You’re so romantic. Tell me more.”
“America, shut up.”
THAT'S why I love the dynamic here; it's warm and loving and hilarious and snarky at the same time. Not to mention ridiculously sexy. <3
“God, I hope your balls don’t get pinched by this thing." Oh Canada, you're such a sweet-talker. XD
I like that you manage to include both the realistic, lovely little sensory details and the awesomeness and ridiculousness of sex in general in the same fill, but it's the characterization that does it for me, anon. This is such a great fill; how can a fill about fucking machines make me warm and fuzzy inside? Dammit, kink meme. So much love <3
But it is different, because today Canada knows that he loves him. ♥
Re: Wired Differently (15/?)
anonymous
April 25 2010, 07:41:12 UTC
A new CanAme fan! I cheer. ♥ The boys could always use more love.
America's attempt to convince Canada that he's not interested in bondage was very... er, half-hearted. At best. >.>;;
Thank you so much for the lovely feedback. ♥ I so much appreciate it and it was enough to make me struggle to finish editing the next part to post before hitting the hay. XD
Re: Wired Differently (15/?)
anonymous
April 25 2010, 07:54:26 UTC
Thank you so much for the lovely feedback. ♥ I so much appreciate it and it was enough to make me struggle to finish editing the next part to post before hitting the hay. XD Awesome. XD I saw there was another part on the fills list (insomnia has its rewards!) and wondered if I ambushed you mid-posting, lol.
I love the sense of mingled anticipation/apprehension you've created here; it seems really realistic to me, considering the kind of, uh, adventure these two are embarking on.
The idea of America needing titanium restraints is awesome, and America's denial about not wanting bondage is ... not the most convincing, yeah.
Canada kissing America's ankle was enough to make me kind of squee, but this exchange:
“I think that’ll do it, eh? Let’s lube you up.”
“You’re so romantic. Tell me more.”
“America, shut up.”
THAT'S why I love the dynamic here; it's warm and loving and hilarious and snarky at the same time. Not to mention ridiculously sexy. <3
“God, I hope your balls don’t get pinched by this thing." Oh Canada, you're such a sweet-talker. XD
I like that you manage to include both the realistic, lovely little sensory details and the awesomeness and ridiculousness of sex in general in the same fill, but it's the characterization that does it for me, anon. This is such a great fill; how can a fill about fucking machines make me warm and fuzzy inside? Dammit, kink meme. So much love <3
But it is different, because today Canada knows that he loves him. ♥
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America's attempt to convince Canada that he's not interested in bondage was very... er, half-hearted. At best. >.>;;
Thank you so much for the lovely feedback. ♥ I so much appreciate it and it was enough to make me struggle to finish editing the next part to post before hitting the hay. XD
Thank you, thank you, thank you, awesome anon. ♥ ♥ ♥
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♥~!
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