Re: part 10 ; Sing Sung Songs [22/?]
anonymous
September 13 2010, 07:22:05 UTC
Oh god, you have no idea how happy I was went I saw you updating! :D I waited till you finished, but I was totally refreshing as you posted. XD
Ah, but my heart breaks as much for France as America, here. Perhaps even more for France, in a way, because of his realization: And that is when France truly feels the depth of this deprivation. America is not normal. America can never be normal. To America What England Did was normal. That's such a horrific thing to realize; I can't even imagine how that must feel. And that first sentence after America said "I love you" to England just killed me: France left. That's just so final that it leaves the reader feeling empty.
America's profound physical reaction after that really shakes me, too, which seems really appropriate. And that whole last scene seems very parent-and-child -- though very off, too, of course! -- and that's intensely disturbing on some level. I'm sure that whole dynamic and America's child-like feel in that scene was intentional, and it was really well-done.
The little flashes of "no no no" and "i don't like it" in America's thoughts were really effectively disturbing, too, and the toy soldier thing terrified me. I mean, you didn't trigger horrible trauma or anything, but this was my face for that whole scene: DDDDDDDD: ... T_T
Holy shit, England, how fucked up can you get? T_T
I do hope America will someday be able to understand and feel real, healthy, adult love, and that it will be returned by someone he can trust. His view of love so far is a truly disturbing mix of childish and something else I can't quite put words to.
Ah, but my heart breaks as much for France as America, here. Perhaps even more for France, in a way, because of his realization: And that is when France truly feels the depth of this deprivation. America is not normal. America can never be normal. To America What England Did was normal. That's such a horrific thing to realize; I can't even imagine how that must feel. And that first sentence after America said "I love you" to England just killed me: France left. That's just so final that it leaves the reader feeling empty.
America's profound physical reaction after that really shakes me, too, which seems really appropriate. And that whole last scene seems very parent-and-child -- though very off, too, of course! -- and that's intensely disturbing on some level. I'm sure that whole dynamic and America's child-like feel in that scene was intentional, and it was really well-done.
The little flashes of "no no no" and "i don't like it" in America's thoughts were really effectively disturbing, too, and the toy soldier thing terrified me. I mean, you didn't trigger horrible trauma or anything, but this was my face for that whole scene: DDDDDDDD: ... T_T
Holy shit, England, how fucked up can you get? T_T
I do hope America will someday be able to understand and feel real, healthy, adult love, and that it will be returned by someone he can trust. His view of love so far is a truly disturbing mix of childish and something else I can't quite put words to.
So much love for this fill, anon. <3
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