Oh, anon, you're breaking my heart here. T_T Even though I know things will eventually be okay, this is painfully realistic. Hell, these guys eventually getting together is slightly optimistic, but I know people who have somehow finally gotten together after similar tragic-but-silly jealousy games, so I can still believe it. It's going to be awhile before they can be around each other, though, and quite some time before they actually get together, much less sleep together. Unfortunately. OTL
Although this wasn't completely depressing, really, because I kind of sadistically enjoy the hilarious awkwardness of a meeting without boisterous!America and snarky!England. And with England too subdued to fight with France, and France too worried and unnerved to try to prod England into fighting or grope anyone? That's like 80% of the normal excess noise at any meeting, honestly. I mean, I guess South Korea would make some of the noise, but he's probably not even there. God, the eerie quiet and efficiency is enough to mess with even Germany's mind. @_@
Oh, and poor France; I know he knows this is not his fault, but he still must feel a little guilty, given that it's somewhat predictable that England would take his advice way too far. ... Even France didn't imagine it going this damn far, but still! I don't blame him at all, but he really shouldn't be surprised that his baby brother England is doing it wrong, when it comes to how England deals with his emotions and America.
Ah, and I'm glad America started worrying about England's experience and the skill of his other sex partners; way later, America's idealized sense of romanticism and Hollywood Twu Wuv will probably balance out some of his worries, but this is still going to be a problem for them until they're together (for a while, really!) and talk about it. God, the idea of these guys talking anything out is kind of depressing. Yet hilarious.
Good job, America; hanging out with someone completely different is probably a good idea. Especially if he (or she?) is not attracted to either of you at all, frankly. Complication-free friendship and some time and distance is just what they both need, I think.
I know it's not that kind of fic, but imagine America suddenly spending way more time with Israel in "real life" like this! Various Arab nations would be even more unhappy, and there would be crazy political ramifications, and things would be all unstable and shit. Luckily, they probably won't even find out about it or care in this fic. Hell, or they'll just be happy that someone, anyone, is helping America out of his creepily quiet funk! XD You know, I'm actually interested to see who else America spends some time with; France would be a horrible idea right now, but maybe Japan or Canada would be safe, unless they'd feel awkward and caught-in-the-middle? Or maybe he could hang out with random people; like, he could have awesome "we're loud, obnoxious little bros! :DDD" time with South Korea, or have awesome tourism/pyramid-exploring adventures while Egypt says nothing but "...Just go home and make up and make out already." It could be awesome! And hell, if you leave some or most of it to our imaginations, that's totally what I'll picture!
God only knows what England will be doing in the meantime; probably brooding all alone, ignoring even his fairies, unless someone drags him away from his depressing thoughts. OTL
Oh damn, I just read your note; if there's no smut, I may get down on my knees and beg for future!smut just for the resolution. I mean, though it pains me to admit it, writing present!fluff is way more necessary for the story and the emotional resolution the readers need, but smut-filled omake (even if it's romantic love-making instead of graphic smut!) afterward set in the future where things are okay between them would be really satisfying, too. It'd make me feel like, "Yeah, things were okay between them at the end of the story, but now I believe they'll actually be together in the future, too. <3"
Also, I'm a perv. But will love this story no matter what you do, seriously. ♥
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anonymous
August 31 2010, 14:33:57 UTC
Holy Shit. I just had to call my sister into the room and be like LOOK AT THIS COMMENT. because I had to share the sheer awesomeness of this comment with SOMEONE. I didn't let her read it though. Cause she hates the fact that I write fanfic so she certainly doesn't know that I write SMUTTY fanfic. CX
Anyway. Holy shit, anon, I love you. This is probably the most awesome comment I've ever gotten <3
It's going to be awhile before they can be around each other, though, and quite some time before they actually get together, much less sleep together. Unfortunately. OTL
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I mean, though it pains me to admit it, writing present!fluff is way more necessary for the story and the emotional resolution the readers need, but smut-filled omake (even if it's romantic love-making instead of graphic smut!) afterward set in the future where things are okay between them would be really satisfying, too.
Okay, so I hope you realize that if it wasn't for your review there would have been no more smut in this fic. I thought that in their present state of minds, they would be taking things slow and I was going to give this a pretty open ended last chapter that let you guys know that they get together but leave the rest to your imagination. I didn't think either of them would want to rush into sex. But I never even thought of the idea of an Omake =D that's perfect and I have tons of ideas now for both the ending and the omake! so thank you again, anon!
France seriously needs some love here <3 I feel bad because I promised people in my last FrUK fic that I would write them some fluffy FrUK because France got the pretty shitty end of the stick for almost the entire fic there, but here I am making him miserable again. I really do need to get around to writing that fluffy FrUK.
and LOL at my fic affecting real life relations between America and Israel XD I would laugh SO hard XD but yeah, I'm not gonna write everything about their separated time in detail. This fill will probably have two more chapters, plus the Omake. 1 for the separation, 1 for the final get together, and the omake for smut :) but I like you said, the idea of them talking everything out is really depressing and I'm a lazy anon so I've figured out how America is going to find out what happened without England telling him (because I can't see England really ADMITTING that he would play such pathetic games to anyone, least of all America). But I'll stop there because I don't wanna give away too many details ;D <3
Thanks so much for the comment! I really appreciate it, and you certainly gave me lots of ideas!! <3
Although this wasn't completely depressing, really, because I kind of sadistically enjoy the hilarious awkwardness of a meeting without boisterous!America and snarky!England. And with England too subdued to fight with France, and France too worried and unnerved to try to prod England into fighting or grope anyone? That's like 80% of the normal excess noise at any meeting, honestly. I mean, I guess South Korea would make some of the noise, but he's probably not even there. God, the eerie quiet and efficiency is enough to mess with even Germany's mind. @_@
Oh, and poor France; I know he knows this is not his fault, but he still must feel a little guilty, given that it's somewhat predictable that England would take his advice way too far. ... Even France didn't imagine it going this damn far, but still! I don't blame him at all, but he really shouldn't be surprised that his baby brother England is doing it wrong, when it comes to how England deals with his emotions and America.
Ah, and I'm glad America started worrying about England's experience and the skill of his other sex partners; way later, America's idealized sense of romanticism and Hollywood Twu Wuv will probably balance out some of his worries, but this is still going to be a problem for them until they're together (for a while, really!) and talk about it. God, the idea of these guys talking anything out is kind of depressing. Yet hilarious.
Good job, America; hanging out with someone completely different is probably a good idea. Especially if he (or she?) is not attracted to either of you at all, frankly. Complication-free friendship and some time and distance is just what they both need, I think.
I know it's not that kind of fic, but imagine America suddenly spending way more time with Israel in "real life" like this! Various Arab nations would be even more unhappy, and there would be crazy political ramifications, and things would be all unstable and shit. Luckily, they probably won't even find out about it or care in this fic. Hell, or they'll just be happy that someone, anyone, is helping America out of his creepily quiet funk! XD You know, I'm actually interested to see who else America spends some time with; France would be a horrible idea right now, but maybe Japan or Canada would be safe, unless they'd feel awkward and caught-in-the-middle? Or maybe he could hang out with random people; like, he could have awesome "we're loud, obnoxious little bros! :DDD" time with South Korea, or have awesome tourism/pyramid-exploring adventures while Egypt says nothing but "...Just go home and make up and make out already." It could be awesome! And hell, if you leave some or most of it to our imaginations, that's totally what I'll picture!
God only knows what England will be doing in the meantime; probably brooding all alone, ignoring even his fairies, unless someone drags him away from his depressing thoughts. OTL
Oh damn, I just read your note; if there's no smut, I may get down on my knees and beg for future!smut just for the resolution. I mean, though it pains me to admit it, writing present!fluff is way more necessary for the story and the emotional resolution the readers need, but smut-filled omake (even if it's romantic love-making instead of graphic smut!) afterward set in the future where things are okay between them would be really satisfying, too. It'd make me feel like, "Yeah, things were okay between them at the end of the story, but now I believe they'll actually be together in the future, too. <3"
Also, I'm a perv. But will love this story no matter what you do, seriously. ♥
And I had to edit for length! D:
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Anyway. Holy shit, anon, I love you. This is probably the most awesome comment I've ever gotten <3
It's going to be awhile before they can be around each other, though, and quite some time before they actually get together, much less sleep together. Unfortunately. OTL
and
I mean, though it pains me to admit it, writing present!fluff is way more necessary for the story and the emotional resolution the readers need, but smut-filled omake (even if it's romantic love-making instead of graphic smut!) afterward set in the future where things are okay between them would be really satisfying, too.
Okay, so I hope you realize that if it wasn't for your review there would have been no more smut in this fic. I thought that in their present state of minds, they would be taking things slow and I was going to give this a pretty open ended last chapter that let you guys know that they get together but leave the rest to your imagination. I didn't think either of them would want to rush into sex. But I never even thought of the idea of an Omake =D that's perfect and I have tons of ideas now for both the ending and the omake! so thank you again, anon!
France seriously needs some love here <3 I feel bad because I promised people in my last FrUK fic that I would write them some fluffy FrUK because France got the pretty shitty end of the stick for almost the entire fic there, but here I am making him miserable again. I really do need to get around to writing that fluffy FrUK.
and LOL at my fic affecting real life relations between America and Israel XD I would laugh SO hard XD but yeah, I'm not gonna write everything about their separated time in detail. This fill will probably have two more chapters, plus the Omake. 1 for the separation, 1 for the final get together, and the omake for smut :) but I like you said, the idea of them talking everything out is really depressing and I'm a lazy anon so I've figured out how America is going to find out what happened without England telling him (because I can't see England really ADMITTING that he would play such pathetic games to anyone, least of all America). But I'll stop there because I don't wanna give away too many details ;D <3
Thanks so much for the comment! I really appreciate it, and you certainly gave me lots of ideas!! <3
-author!anon
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