Oh geez. Alfred just keeps forcing Arthur to like it. DDDDD; A-and massive yay to detective!Francis being all concerned and perceptive! YES YES FRANCIS ARTHUR WAS LIMPING. I know your mind is in the gutter no matter which verse you're in, so figure it out already! *wibbles* I think it really hit me how much wrong Alfred's become. I-I knew it wasn't ever right per se, but I really see now how much this charade is ruining Alfred as a teacher, brother, a person. OH THE DESCENT OF HUMANITY. I love this theme.
And suggestions for Arthur bits: S-so hard to choose! I HAVE SO MANY IDEAS YOU HAVE NO IDEA. But if authornon would like to jump straight into the heart-breaking stuff, I have to say like others have said that the first molestation scene would be a great place to start. I can already see so much shock, betrayal, self-blame/self-disgust, and fear from that alone.
But if you'd like to build things up a little, I'd personally die to see the scene where Alfred gives the key chain to Arthur. Potential for jealous!Francis and flustered and oblivious!Arthur and all. ;_;
Or Arthur's interaction with family would be awesome, too, since you've successfully built so much human-ness of Alfred with family and stuff, it'll be wonderful to see the same done with Arthur. Since he's an Atlantic Ocean away, phone calls and his family sending packages/letters and stuff would suffice, methinks.
...So yeah. Hope that helps getting you started. Whichever scene you decide on, though, I'm sure it'll be absolutely amazing, lovely anon. Wish you luck in conquering writer's block!
I'm glad you're still enjoying it! Francis is always such a difficult character for me to write. Do I make him more grope-y? More understanding? I DUNNO but anyway.
The first molestation seems to pretty popular. I think I would like to write the key chain bit, too. I haven't had much chance for fluff lately.
Family would be very fun to write. ajshdhjg I'm making myself excited, haha.
Thank you! I plan to write a few scenes, and considering that you're OP -- you get first picks, I guess? Thanks for the wonderful comment ♥
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August 25 2010, 15:34:16 UTC
OP here. I-if you're planning to write more than one, I'd like to see at least the key chain bit before any molestation scenes please. Just 'cause I wanna let the poor kid be happy even just for a biiiit considering how much suffering he's in for later;;;;;
Ahaha, I actually like that Francis isn't outright grope-y as he is in most fics. He seems much more real the way you portray him, which actually goes to all characters in this fic. <3 I mean, each character's got their own canon personalities, but they've been waaay exaggerated for the sake of being two-dimensional animated characters. I totally dig your subtle, believable depiction of their canon selves as real humans.
Authornon, you're the most wonderful authornon a requester at kinkmeme can ever ask for, thank you lots and lots. ♥ I feel I haven't expressed that enough lately for some reason orz;;
And suggestions for Arthur bits: S-so hard to choose! I HAVE SO MANY IDEAS YOU HAVE NO IDEA. But if authornon would like to jump straight into the heart-breaking stuff, I have to say like others have said that the first molestation scene would be a great place to start. I can already see so much shock, betrayal, self-blame/self-disgust, and fear from that alone.
But if you'd like to build things up a little, I'd personally die to see the scene where Alfred gives the key chain to Arthur. Potential for jealous!Francis and flustered and oblivious!Arthur and all. ;_;
Or Arthur's interaction with family would be awesome, too, since you've successfully built so much human-ness of Alfred with family and stuff, it'll be wonderful to see the same done with Arthur. Since he's an Atlantic Ocean away, phone calls and his family sending packages/letters and stuff would suffice, methinks.
...So yeah. Hope that helps getting you started. Whichever scene you decide on, though, I'm sure it'll be absolutely amazing, lovely anon. Wish you luck in conquering writer's block!
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The first molestation seems to pretty popular. I think I would like to write the key chain bit, too. I haven't had much chance for fluff lately.
Family would be very fun to write. ajshdhjg I'm making myself excited, haha.
Thank you! I plan to write a few scenes, and considering that you're OP -- you get first picks, I guess? Thanks for the wonderful comment ♥
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Ahaha, I actually like that Francis isn't outright grope-y as he is in most fics. He seems much more real the way you portray him, which actually goes to all characters in this fic. <3 I mean, each character's got their own canon personalities, but they've been waaay exaggerated for the sake of being two-dimensional animated characters. I totally dig your subtle, believable depiction of their canon selves as real humans.
Authornon, you're the most wonderful authornon a requester at kinkmeme can ever ask for, thank you lots and lots. ♥ I feel I haven't expressed that enough lately for some reason orz;;
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